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Title: chapter 51
Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 01:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying this so far. Just as a FYI males CAN breastfeed, quite a lot of mammals are all the same as far as nipples & milk production goes. All humans are the same from the waist up. If a guy allows a baby to nurse sooner or later he'll start producing milk.
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Title: Wow . . .
Reviewed By: maelia8 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 00:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I just read every chapter of this fanfic in the last four hours. It was quite an undertaking . . . when I first started, I wanted to see if a Sess/Inu fanfic could really work, because I have seen a lot where I just thought the story was both not believable and perverted. But you managed to make the story as believeable as possible, considering the plot line that you took, and for that I commend you. You develop character relationships to the maximum, and I admire your attention to detail which is visible throughout this fic. When I first started, I was confused as to whether it was an AU, or just a different time possiblily, where InuTaisho and Izayoi never died. At first, I kept wondering if Kagome was going to be in it, even as a minor character . . maybe as the serving maid instead of Yuko? Also, this fic gave me some pretty funny ideas about ways it could have gone. In the beginning, I was sure that InuYasha would have to be turned into a girl somehow - by a spell, or potion, or a reaction to being "in heat", and I even imagined a sort of Ranma 1/2 borrowing where they took InuYasha to the Sacred Springs and turned him into a girl that way. Pretty crazy and random, ne? There could be lots of funny stuff where InuYasha randomly changes from a girl to a guy (and vice versa) while Sesshomaru is coming onto him . . . but I guess that would ruin some of the more serious aspects of the plot. By the way, I am not suggesting that you change the story or anything - I am just showing you another way it could have been . . . maybe I will write a fic with that premise someday. If I ever get time. And finish my homework. Sigh. I liked the way that you dealt with the yaoi and InuYasha - Sess is easy to imagine as gay already (blame mokomoko-sama), but Inu is a little harder, and you really pulled it off pretty well. I found it interesting that Inu was the beta in the relationship - I actually find it easier to imagine Sess as the "female". About Rin and Kouga - I love it! I had actually never seen that pairing before reading this fanfic, so thank you for offering me another new posibility in the huge net of possible pairings. I can't wait for Kagura to find a love of her own - maybe you should name him Hojo (lol). Shippo's entrance into the fanfic seemed a little bit force, and I feel that he has not yet reached his full potential in terms of development, but you have plently of time to add to him. To skip around some more - the pups are soooooo cute! I loved the image of the grumpy old ladies fussing over a screaming InuYasha! The mental image is priceless. Will we find out the baby names in the next chapter? I can hardly wait. After looking at the tremendous list that you had in previous chapters, I can hardly imagine how you picked any names - the ones that you had all looked so good. By the way, Hikaru is a popular girl's name, found in the manga and anime "Magic Knights Rayearth". In closing, I really like you story.
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Title: chap 51
Reviewed By: FXL On: April 23, 2006 20:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I read this chapter and I really really loved it!!!!! I'm so glad Sesshy didn't go crazy like I thought he would. I wonder what Naraku is planning he might try to steal her snd what will happen then??? Will he get away with it then he will rise her and she will be evil and go back 15 years later and play like she ran away and plot to kill them??? I cause I'm going ahead of my self I just can't wait til the next chapter!! I guess you have to give them there names and I would have never thought of the pups drinking blood. That was something I'm sure only afew people would think of because I would have never considered that but I liked that. I'm glad you changed the serious atmosphere to a more cheerful one, and I'm glad no one got hurt! I hoped that he wouldn't go crazy and I'm glad he didn't. If it had not been for Rin who knows what would have happened?? And what of that perfect guy for Kagura?? Oh yeah I love that your story is so long and I know I'm thinking ahead put I'm going to be so sad when you finish this story!! SO not thinking about the future and bringing myself back to the preasent I will say Bye until next Time...FXL
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 20:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome cahpter as always please update soon.
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 19:20 EDT
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Yay I got pocky! Anyway...another good chapter, what will happen next? I am on tenterhooks! (Does anyone know what tenterhooks are? And if they do can they please contact me)
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Title: Wooow.
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: April 23, 2006 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whooa. That was... Well... I can't remember how to spell the word but it's good. Right up there with fabulous and all the others. I hope I can only do as well. As for your flu bug... I would recommend chili. HOT chili. hehehe. Works for me. Get better soon. Okay? Thanks. Tryst.
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Title: 51
Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 18:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You messed up here I believe. It should be feed not feel: H-he bit me!' She said softly, shock clearly written in her face and on her voice as the child continued to worm about in her grip, small angry whines tearing free from his throat. 'He's hungry.' Kaede said, observing the pup with one eyebrow raised. 'He wishes to eat.' Sesshomaru cocked an eyebrow, while both of Inuyasha's own shot straight up and all but disappeared into his hair. 'And what do you propose we feel him?' The full Inuyoukai inquired, scepticism clear in his voice. 'Inuyasha clearly has no breasts for him to nurse from.' 'Yeah, I can't exactly... do that.' Inuyasha said, gesturing over at Rin, his own blush rising up on his face as hers flames and brightened another notch. Hehe looks good so far, can't wait till the next chpts up. I had been theoryizing that the black hair'd pup came from Inuyasha's human mothers side, but that still didn't explain the spider mark... so I dropped that theory.. Oh well..
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Reviewed By: Skullz On: April 23, 2006 17:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude i just finished it and it was great I can't wait for the next chapters. What will Naraku do? tehehehe. Great story I do despise your rants though they are very informative I'd prefer they did not exist. ~Thanx~
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Reviewed By: Skullz On: April 23, 2006 17:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude i just finished it and it was great I can't wait for the next chapters. What will Naraku do? tehehehe. Great story I do despise your rants though they are very informative I'd prefer they did not exist. ~Thanx~
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Title: Chapter 50
Reviewed By: FXL On: April 23, 2006 03:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally caught up!!! This story is so great!!!It's 2 10 in the morning and I just couldnt help myself i had to finish reading the rest of the chapters and Im so glad i finally caught up! I can't belive that the baby is all 3 of theirs or maybe somehow she is inffected with a disease by him or something and she has nothing to do with Naraku! So much for wishful thinking I'm just so sad for them and I hope Sesshy doesn't get angry! I can't wait to see what happens next and I love this story so much! Keep up with the great writing!!This story is the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FXL
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Title: your the greatest
Reviewed By: Skullz On: April 19, 2006 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude i love this fic i haven't finished it but i just know it's good. It isn't all that original though i've read lots just like this. And honestly i think kagome would've been better than Rin. But whatever it's the best i've read in a long time. It's a genuine story that drawled me in. Thank you for writing it hey i have a myspace thingy with this same name if you wanna burn me for saying such cruel things about your fic or whatever. Anyhoo congrats on ever getting anybody to read your fics thats hard but i personally love this hobby woo hoo. Ok see ya keep up the great work!!!
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Reviewed By: Lina_Inverse_The_Dramata On: April 18, 2006 06:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I made it to chapter fifty! Wa-freaking-hoo!!! I've loved the dark the fluffy, the erotic, the loving play of emotions and situations. You've done a wonderful job on the characters, their thoughts, their conflicts... Its really amazing. And the twist of the third pup being a female but also Naraku's... Lovely twist. I almost dread discovering what will happen next. Yet, I can't wait to see where you take this. I'm so happy you updated on Easter too, that was nifty to know you're still writing this! I can't wait to read how Sesh and the others take what he found, and now faced with the reality his rape resulted in a child, how Inuyasha will react. Angst ahoy. Amongst other emotions.
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Reviewed By: Lina Inverse The Dramata [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 07:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O Holy hell in a hand basket this is.... This is... *Fans self* WOW. The dynamics between the brothers, how they fought against each other, the battles of dominance (which are probably just starting seeing as I'm reviewing at chapter ten.) all of it is wonderful. Yeah a few words are mispelled or a wrong word is used here and there, but I'm able to discern what was meant so it's all good. This story is headed for some interesting twists, and 152 reviews on mediaminer is like getting 700 reviews on ffnet so that is saying something about this wonderful story. You rock! This story rocks! Hell the dominant Sesh rocks. I'm glad you didn't suddenly make Inuyasha submissive, you managed to blend the personalities into the situation without diminishing the character. And gotta love the jealous Sessho-chan. *GRIN* I can't wait to read more. Once I've slept. It's four a.m. now. YAWWWWN. LOVED this story. Simply loved it ^_^
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 06:27 EDT
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i guessed the girl would have something of naraku! Go me *dances* but will sesshy be accepting? oh i dunnooo
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Title: Okay. Cool.
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: April 16, 2006 22:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. I have a minor theory here... Am I right in thinking that those Pups have three fathers instead of just two? Kinda wierd saying that. Though I think the girl is pretty cool looking. And since I'm a what if kinda gal... I keep thinking about all the possibilties and variations of this fic. Poor kids... Poor Inuyasha. I hope everything goes well for them. Alright then. Hope to see more soon. Tryst.
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