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Title: LOL.
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/ Tryst On: April 10, 2006 18:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. Oh. Boy. Inuyasha's in labor and the parents are having fun. Now comes the nightmare from creation... LOL. Keep up the good work. Thanks for updating really quickly. Oh... boy... girl... I wonder. I hope they give Sess some special attention. As for Naraku... yikes. Tryst.
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Reviewed By: FXL On: April 10, 2006 12:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I haven't caught up yet but I do have the meaning to one of my names Nariko means Thunder child and Mayumi means nothing it's just a name that was on the credits of Inuyasha's third movie so I love your story so far but I wouldn't be reading very much since I'm trying to write my own stories but I must say your story is great and one day I hope I can catch up!! Keep up the good work and I'll be reviewing later!!
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 19:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter as always please update soon.
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Title: Chapter 46
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 09:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL This was just great! The formatting of Inu screaming and the others speaking between his lines made it so funny. It was also funny that Sess shut him up with just a look. Inu called one of them a 'lunatic'. LOL I liked Takehiko's suggestion that Sesshoumaru knock Inu out with tea. This reminds me of my fic 'A Day to Play' in which Inuyasha has to have a C-section. Sess suffers some damage in that one. Hehe. Someone had said that Inuyasha wouldn't act like that because he had been wounded enough for it to be no big deal, but let me tell you, I've had five kids and each time there was more trepidation than the last. I would have had my last one at home if my husband hadn't come into the bathroom and drug me out of the tub for the one hour trip to the hospital. I hated the hospitals and didn't want to ever go back. It's one thing to get hurt unexpectedly, it's quite another to know months ahead of time that it is coming. Rural hospitals aren't always that great. I eventually had Miroku knock Inu out with his staff. Hehe. Great chapter. I loved it. Snow
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Title: Chapter 45
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 09:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this Rin chapter. It was cute and informative. Kouga explaining what Kagura would need in a mate helped to round out his character a bit rather than leave him as a side character. You've given him intelligence. I like that. Again, great chapter--Snow
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Title: Chapter 44
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 09:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so behind on reviews! Kudos for Sesshoumaru's bravery in approaching Inuyasha. Sess deciding that his arm was "no longer worth having around" when he reached for Inuyasha was funny. I like the way you phrase things. You're list of Inuyasha's hormone laden responses was really funny, especially when it ended with a combination of several. Sesshoumaru's understanding and wisdom concerning the fact that Naraku might be the sire of their pups was very sweet. And it was nice that Inuyasha overcame his pregnancy hormornes in order to actually enjoy being with Sesshoumaru. Great job. Snowfall
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Title: LOL. Still reading and writing fics.
Reviewed By: Tryst/ Punishment of the Inu On: April 08, 2006 00:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehe. You opened to a whole new ball game now. Can't wait to see what you come up with.
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 18:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter as always. I cant't wait until Inuyasha gives birth. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Nahaujaret [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 02:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fic. The way you leave me aching for the next chapter shows that you know what you're doing. I also loved the way you gave Sesshoumaru emotions. Most people don't know how to do it right, but you hit the nail on the head. You're an awesome writer and I can't wait for you to update this story. Thank you for sharing your story.
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Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 22:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well you should be proud of this chapter.....it was really well written
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter as always please update soon.
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Title: AYA.
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/Tryst On: April 05, 2006 21:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I just read the last two updates. Cool. But this new demon... I have this bad feeling about him. As for the chapter before hand... That was great as well. I'll hope for more soon. Now i'm off to read chained. Later. Tryst.
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Reviewed By: Kye On: April 05, 2006 08:11 EDT
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Hi, I would really like it if they were Naraku's pups and not Sesshomaru's. Mostly because in just about every story I've ever read where the kids could either be the result of a rape or their partner, they always make it turn out alright in the end; that's not how it works in real-life. Besides I hate missing out on all the angst. The only thing is that I seem to remember Inuyasha being somewhat weak during the attack, as though he was already pregnant (I didn't check, so I could be wrong), so if the pups turn out to be Naraku's then that should be explained in an alternative way. I love angst and your story, I know whatever you decide will work best. Forgive my crappy english, I'm a spanish speaker.
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 18:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter I REALLY hope that the pups are Sesshomaru's. Plese update soon.
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Title: Chapter 43
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 23:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inu puppy; so confused and agitated. I hope that he gets to spend at least one night with his mate and I hope that his night of vulnerability doesn't turn into something horrific. Thanks for Inu's POV. I feel so sorry for him. Snow
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