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| "What Matters the Most" Reviews/Comments [ 480 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood-Not signed in On: October 18, 2006 18:30 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So did Sesshomaru lose his arm? its a bit confusing. So InuTaisho attacked Sesshomaru, ripping his shoulder then Naraku attacks him digging his tentacles into his shoulder and dismembering his arm?
| Title: AHHHH!!!
Reviewed By: FXL~ On: October 18, 2006 04:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was so thrilling!! Action!! Lose of Control!!! Blood red eyes!!! Drool!!! Poor Inuyasha!! Mean Naraku just standing there and manipulating Sesshomarus mind like that!! AAHHHHHH! I'm going crazy with these chapters and stupid Naraku!!!! I just can't wait til he dies or some sort of mystery pops up out of no where and some unexpected comes!! Kagura isn't even a concern for me right now!! I just hope that everything works out for my two fav characters!! Inuyasha and Sesshomaru~Right now your story is the best with this pairing!! On ff.net there is too much Kagura/Sessh stuff in it and there are to many crazy stuff in others so yours is the best as of this chapter and the last 4 or 5 !!!! Great story and I cant wait til the next chapter!! I'm going crazy here right about now!!! FXL
| Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 21:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This does not bode well... Nice fight scene. Not the best, but it wasn't totally muddled. It's hard getting those fastpaced movments into type.
| Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 18:46 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I guess I can deal with just a little more bloodshed from their side as long as Naraku gets dismembered later. Like right after they find the little girl. I guess right now since I can't kill any one with out having to go to jail for a real long time then I will just have to take my frustration out on fictictional characters. But I really can't wait to see what you will do to Naraku. As long as you don't make his death really quick I'll be happy. If you should happen to being him back to life a couple of times and kill him again I'm oppose to reading that.
| Reviewed By: Tai-san On: October 14, 2006 15:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the love of Chibi why do you torture me so. I must see more. I must know what happens to Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. Sorry for the outburst i've been waiting so long for the new chapter to find out what would happen but instead of answers i have more questions. Please update soon. Thanks so much for the last update. Best wishes and good waves.
| Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 11:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter I hope you update soon.
| Reviewed By: Korune On: October 14, 2006 04:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha! Well, yeah, I felt bad about beating him up afterwards... So I did apologize to it, although it's an "inanimate" object, as you say. ^_^* And yeah, Sess would kill them both to end their misery, I was just stating that to convey the severity of how much you've pretty much screwed poor widdle Inu up. lol. S'kool though, I'm lovin' it! And this chapter (71) you did great with! I was wondering if Sess was going to have his arm severed... Though, surprised me much with it being Naraku that did it instead of a controlled Inu! Seems you took pity on him some, huh? If Inu would've been the cause (directly, because i can still see it twisted where Inu would still see it as his fault indirectly) then surely, it would definately add to his misery... Man... Just pile on the angst there! Lovin' it!!! And now, I really don't want Naraku to die that soon... I've actually started to really look over all he's done and think on how delightfully coolaz and totally delicious it all is. Heh... I'm a Gemini, what can I say? I can be so fickle and change so freakin' often, it's not funny! ^_^* I've read some chapters of this fic over a few times in the time between your updates, giving myself a little more insight on some things and a deeper appreciation for others... Keep up the awesome work! And beat those muses every once in a while! Seems they like getting out of line too much, or being lazy little buggars... =P
| Reviewed By: Cloverfire On: October 13, 2006 23:37 EDT
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You're such a tease! Is Inu gonna go all demon on Naraku's ass? I'm lovin this story, but i'm curious, are you gonna work on any of your others? It doesn't matter to me that much, i just think some of them are really good and i can't wait for you to update or finish them.
| Reviewed By: Tasa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 21:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo! New Chapter! It was really cool how you put in Sesshy's arm being ripped off. I really want Sesshy to kill Naraku though :( *holds tightly to her Inuyasha plushie while waiting for new chapters*
| Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 19:10 EDT
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WHEE! Hi!! ^_^ Don't ask, I've been hyper all day. Out of nowhere I just started singing about onions... of course, save that story for another day... when I'm not still cracking up about it randomly during classes. Or eating yellow Skittles. SOO... regarding your responses, well, I don't know. The human brain is an extraordinary thing... never ceases to amaze me. *_* lol, I'm just kidding. whee. OOH! My ankles are geltinous! I found this out when I had a REALLY AWESOME TIME (note; sarcasm) falling over in the middle of nowhere while running ten feet, turning, running back ten feet, picking up stuff, and repeating like three times. Don't ask. Wow... how many times am I gunna have to repeat that? Lard. Lol, I was scrolling through the chapter (by the way, awesome chapter!!! -hits screen on head- considering that this is what I *should* be talking about, well, take that! NYA! -does really corny karate kick about sixteen centimeters high before giving up- O_O), and I came across -gasp- the responses! And I located mine, and scrolled, and scrolled, and scrolled... Well, I can't complain, but I CAN say, GAH! Where do you find this kind of time! You've got to have something better to do with six hours of unrelenting rants. (whee... if I insulted you... well..... sorry -shudders-) BUT OOH! Found me notebooky! Funnnnn.... ... .. . And yes, I could tell from that look in your eyes (you: what look in my eyes? You can't SEE me!!! me: I know that, silly! -winks-) that you HAD to know all about evil teachers that should give up on trying to teach someone like ME a language! I'll stick to English... don't agree with their way of teaching languages anyway, poo. (Why poo? Because. Just poo.) Now? Am I half-crazed now? Well, kind of, not really, because it's not three in the morning and instead it's six, so konbanwa! How did I manage to string half-crazed to konbanwa? Let's find out... one... two... three.... how many *insert* does it take to get to the *word* *here* of a *now*? The world may never know. Hah. That was a long, and fruitless joke. -sighs deep pained sigh- I know, I often confuse myself too.. half the time I have to go back and figure out what the hell the topic was, and how we ended up talking about *this*... O_O like with the lactation thing! -widely grins- Oh, and about insanity vs. math homework, it's not gone. Half the time, it's just cowering in the closet-y recesses of a certain dark and powerful brain... only to reveal itself hours later, in the dark of the moon, coming out of the deep dungeon-us closet... let me ruin the moment of mystery by-- GET IT? COMING OUT OF THE CLOSET?! WHEE!! ^___^ don't mind me, I'm just going to collapse and start singing about onions again, and how does that make you feel? Pathetic, probably.. at least, that's what the psychiatrist said!! O_o Moooo. I feel... (and no, not pretty, witty, or gay) cowy! Hence, the moo! Un-huh! Great, now I have Gwen Stephani singing in my head again... uhuh, kiss my shit, all girls gotta be like this.... yeeeeeah. I can't tell anymore what insult I threw at you this time, so I won't respond to that... anyway, borderlining on 2200 words here, so I'll wrap up before MM kills me. No more oniony pain!!! AHH! Nope, you're wrong! -points accusing finger towards running figure in distance- MY BRAIN CELLS SENT ME A LETTER!!! They said that they're having a great time in Panama, and wished you luck without your brain cells, which they met in a gay bar yesterday. (O___O not meant to offend!!.. much, anyway... =D) Well, usually I leave the response time behind the toilet, but this time it was stuck between the blades of the fan, so it took awhile to get out. -sighs- trying to be difficult again, are we? -points waggling toes (this time) at time running off into horizon- It was a great update... dynamics, dynamics! =] Keep 'em coming. Just like the White House scandals of the present era. @_@ YES! 50 characters left! ~i u h~
| Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 16:13 EDT
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It has been a while, I've half a mind to glare at you, but that would be mean...and I'm a nice person(?) *Grins evilly* So Inuyasha is now in demon mode? Maybe then he can defeat the evil collar and rip up evil Naraku! Then he and Sesshy (both blood-soaked) can then enjoy WAFF, the blood makes it all so very romantic. A sequel sounds bon! Go for it! Yes I am an addict, I nearly shriveled up in the past month, the only way I survived was discovering FMA ^^. (I think you are my dealer, I hope you aren't going to make me pay for anything)
| Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 15:25 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please don't wait so long to update again. That cliffy is keeping me on the edge of my seat!! LOL
| Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 15:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter more than met my exspectations...it was so intense...I was literally on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens...but now you have to update soon because this is a bad place to leave it at...oh boy is Naraku in for it now...hehe
| Reviewed By: Tasa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV this fic! I can't wait for more chapters! ^-^
| Reviewed By: Jess. On: October 11, 2006 19:10 EDT
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I'm glad to know you are ok, and that you haven't abandoned the story. I'll keep on checking for updates. I understand what being busy is like, take as long as you need, you surely deserve it. I just wanted to make sure nothing was wrong. Cheers from Argentina!
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