| "Forevermore" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HOPE YOU UPDATE Soon!!! You might not because you haven't updateed it in a really long time, but this story is to good to lbe left alone!!! PLEASE UPDATE IT!!! PLEASE!!! ^_^ I love your story! Update soon!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: tbiris On: October 24, 2003 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good, might need some improvement though. IT's original as well, but I don't read as much Inu YAsha fanfiction. Ummm, can youy notify me when you update, my e-mail's on my profile page on fanfiction.net and my username is the same.
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Reviewed By: mo On: October 01, 2003 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why have you stopped writing???? i need to noe how it ends!!!!!!!:'(
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Reviewed By: Sailor Mars On: August 24, 2003 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Writing style was too small. The grammer was good but miss spelled some words. I love your creativity. It shows that you have a big imagination. I love the story, but I didn't enjoy Inuyasha dying in Kagome's arms. It was too sad. But other than that, I think it was great!_! Ja ne (see ya)! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Kri On: July 24, 2003 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME fanfic!!! i neeed to know what happens!!! |
Reviewed By: Shi-koi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!
I think that about sums this up.
Wow!
Heh. I can't wait for you to update. This fic has so many rollercoaster moments. I think I held my breath during the fight scene in that last chapter. *wheezes for breath* Heh.
It's so nice to be able to read a fic with good grammar and spelling, along with a very touching storyline, and one that's been so well written. Its excellent, really, really brilliant. You must had worked hard to write this.
Keep it up!
~Shi-koi~ |
Reviewed By: Shi-koi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Normally I wait until I've reached the end of a story before I decide to review, but I couldn't help myself! This is wonderful!
I love the fascination Ren has towards Kagome (aww so sweet, it's kinda like Yu-Gi-Oh! with the Yami/Hikari situations), and his mother's reactions to hearing about Kagome and the unfinished Shikon no Tama were brilliant! (*grin* Inuren insisting he's not marrying her. Denial is not just a river in Egypt....heh.)
You've made it so easy to get lost in the fic, I'm sitting here wondering why I can't type faster so I can go ahead and read the next part, such sweet torment. *snicker* Just from reading the first two chapters I have goosebumps.
Excellent work so far.
~Shi-koi~ |
Reviewed By: lil rach On: April 30, 2003 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're such a great writer! i love this story i can't wait till the next chapter!!! inu-yasha and kagome's love life is soo sad! this is a great story and i love the new characters and the ren guy! i wonder whats going to happen to him. keep up the great work! :) |
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: January 11, 2003 21:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I love your story!! You are a very good writer. I can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Mari [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2002 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG!! where's the rest of the storie? i need to read it!! c'mon please keep writing it!! Inuyasha and kagome are lyk totally meant 4 eachother!! OMG, did u see the Inuyasha movie?! it was sooooo gud!! omg!! i kept rewinding and playing and repeating those steps over and over agen 4 the sweet parts!! i was crying full-on, omg!! u shud totally c it!! (if u dun) and and and there's ANOTHER inuyasha movie comin up in japan during winter vac. and its sumthing u dun wanna miss!! :o) well, hope u write soon!! :o) |
Reviewed By: Hoshino-Chan On: October 19, 2002 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you have any idea how long i had to search for the rest of this fic?! i first saw it on inuyasha.net and it was only up to chap. 5 (not exactly the best place to leave an I/K fanatic... lol) so i clicked on ur profile, then went to your site... then i came here and finally found the rest of this wonderful story! (except the part where inuyasha dies of course!) i was sooooooooooo looking forward to a confrontation between Inuyasha and Inuren, but i guess i'll have to just wait until the next chapter is up. i really hope you post it up sooooon! i'm dying to read the next chapter.
P.S. love the Ren pic you drew!
ja |
Reviewed By: inuyashasgrl On: August 19, 2002 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutly love this.i need to read more. i'm such a hopeless romantic and as u can see( by the sn) i love inu-yasha. just one thing i really hope kogome ends up with inu-yasha cause it's inu-yasha no one can replace him not even his reincarnation |
Reviewed By: Melly On: August 18, 2002 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really shouldn't give a rating on grammar or spelling cause i suck at both, but anyways, great chapter as always...cant wait for the next....hehe |
Reviewed By: Kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2002 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this story since the beginning, but, stupidly, I never reviewed^-^;;... Hey, to only be... a tenth grader(?), you write like a proffessional! I'm so amazed at your writer's style, creativity, and the way you can describe the character's inner feelings. I found that one of the hardest things to do is to describe the feelings of a non-original character, but you seem to have NO trouble WHATSOEVER when doing it^-^... which I find utterly amazing... This would be very well catagorized as one of the best fanfiction on the net! I really like to see more, because you DEFINITELY have talent ^_~
~P.S. You're story has even inspired me into an Inuyasha fanfiction O_O.... |
Reviewed By: Melly On: August 04, 2002 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god.....please write more.....it is sooo very good |
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