| "When in Egypt" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] |
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Title: updated
Reviewed By: mahado cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 09:50 CDT
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hi i updated mahado so when your ready you'll see how i tortered marik today.
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Title: UPDATE AGAIN REAL SOON!!!!
Reviewed By: kagomegirl21 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update again soon i feel so bad for yugi and atemu!! i cant wait to read more!!! they just gotta be happy in the end!!
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Reviewed By: Fullmetal07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i absolutely love this fic! the story is wonderful and i couldnt stop reading, i read all 30 chapters today. i really like how the relationships and such ahave developed throughout the chapters and i am really starting to hope that Yugi and Joey dont go back to their time. a mix of emotions are brought into the story and i feel like i'm part of it, it can be pretty funny sometimes too (your co-hosts are amazing, by the way). i cant wait to read your next chapter(s) and find out what happens. this is one fic i dont want to end.
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Reviewed By: Cori Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Me: I LOVED this chapter. I wonder how Yugi's going to get back. Tira (my annoying muse): CORI!!! Ami (my favorite muse): I'll take care of her Cori. You finish your review and then go get that clorine out of your hair. Me: Deal! Ami: Oh Bakura, for Cori's sake don't kill the authors/writers. If you do this story is left as a cliffhanger and it will dive her crazy and Cazy Authoress + Writers Block = A story gone Loco!
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Title: i'm evil!
Reviewed By: mahado cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 20:22 CDT
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good chapter! but i'm still jealous of your writing talents.....give them damn you!......kidding well update soon ok.and i'll make sure to toture marik *grins evily*
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Title: UPDATE AGAIN REAL SOON!!!!
Reviewed By: kagomegirl21 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 09:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! poor yami and yugi i wanna see more soon!!! i want to see them happy together!! Update again soon!!
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Title: marik's mine!!!
Reviewed By: mahado cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 12:43 CDT
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yeah!!!! thanks for lending me marik i'm writing my next chapture write now...so at the end i'll introduce my new co host *grins evily* i can't wait to toture him!!!!! i'll tell you when it's done so you can read it afterwards....and just tell me when you want him back ok....great chapture by the way *winks*
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Title: hiya
Reviewed By: mahado cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just finished my gaia page now there's all this yu-gi-oh in the middle and 2 for my siggie and for my video i have everytime we touch yu-gi-oh video...and told my friends that i just liked the music..shh..need some help with your video? i'll help if ya want..
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Title: More onegai!!
Reviewed By: kagomegirl21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still so enjoying this fic!!! i love how they dont just suddenly say oh im in love with so and so. the fact that they are gradually finding out their feelings makes it so much more enjoyable with the suspense and everything. i can't wait to read more!! UPDATE AGAIN SOON ONEGAISHIMASU!!
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Title: team work
Reviewed By: mahado cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 17:16 CDT
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ok if you and me wanna do a team fic we gotta figure out plot and how were gonna do it! ok i know either you or me will create the fic and will have to pm or email each other constanly telling each other what to say...like i create 1 paragraph and you'll make 1 paragraph...like that...and if we do i wanna get new co hosts or we can keep them and add more...but i got another idea i heard that you have more ideas for ya next fan fic so that's when we could do the team fic or we could create it on our own terms either way is cool with me but i have ideas of my own....and i'm updating my fic right now...so when you finish when in egypt ok....oh and by the way where do you live cause i live in new jersey and we could have to work out time diffrence...this is gonna be challenging but fun!
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Title: ha ha
Reviewed By: mahado cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 15:35 CDT
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i found this really funny video on youtube so i thought you'd like it but bakura and marik would wanna send me to theshadow realm http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NuxWVMwnxxU
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Title: UPDATE AGAIN REAL SOON!!!!
Reviewed By: kagomegirl21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soo kool!!! 2 new chapters within a day!! i cant wait to see more!! update again soon and keep up the good work!!
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Title: i'm such an idoit!
Reviewed By: mahado cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 15:37 CDT
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i read the chapter that you talked about me and realized that i didn't buged you *slames head on key board* ow.....well now that i know i don't bug ya tell bakura and marik that i'll try to review every chapture.....not that i now how to review....and judging by are personalities we'll get along.....so i'm still waiting on the parposal that about the tag team fic...it's sounds weird i know but it might get good reviews....but people would most likely read it cause you helped...ive been told i have good writing skill's but that's only in my gaia journal which is on my account egypt girl which used to be the queen of egypt but you's only know why if you've read my journal from the begging....and i will write manga for a living even if it kills me! and it was inspired by kazuki takahashi...which is the creator of yu-gi-oh (i'm sure you knew that) my family tell me that i'm obssed with yu-gi-oh and to old but i'm 12 i know a girl that's in coledge and loves it but we met on gaia... p.s.i'm ashamed that i got a bakura theme for kitticat476 (1 of my many gaia accounts)i should of left the atemu theme there...and my friend seto fangirl still not finished with my mahado theme *sobs* i'm a mahado fan girl by the way..if you hadn't figured it out already....i like the charaters that hardly get noticed but i like main charaters too!i've been talking on the phone with mana012 for 2 years every day about yu-gi-oh..oh sorry this is a long review! sorry....i got carried away....well see ya around!can't wait till the next chapture!
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Title: hi again!
Reviewed By: mahado cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 15:14 CDT
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hi! thanks for responding in my review...and yes you pretty much answered all my questions last time....and i pm your avi and the person that told me about your fan fics were mana012...she's my best friend! and i think she would review you if she was a member of mediaminer but she only reads them....thanks for adding mahado and mana! (there 2 of my favorite charaters)but you didn't have to if you didn't want to...i don't wanna bug ya! oh and if i am please tell me and i'll stop reviewing....i mean it! ut i'll still read your fics though....but if i don't bug ya tell marik and bakura to stop buging ya about the reviews...cause i'll be your # 1 reviewer! but don't get the wrong idea i'm not some creepy guy those gonna beat you up and take your shoes....(i got that line from gravitation vol.1)hope you and me can be allies like penguins and cats! (my friend says that alot *shrugs*)till next time! p.s. if i bug you sorry
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Title: UPDATE AGAIN REAL SOON!!!!
Reviewed By: kagomegirl21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOh the suspense!!!! i can't wait to read what happens next!! please update again soon!! i want to see them happy and in love!! this story is so fascinating!! it's like a different version of the real story only with yugi and joey going back in time!! so neat!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!
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