| "Much Too Young" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Title: ssstoop in the name of love!
Reviewed By: ohmygoddess2 On: March 22, 2006 11:17 CST
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step sister?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SCARYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY so good must update! this is shiroi hana
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 15:54 CST
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: March 19, 2006 11:26 CST
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What the hell is up with the hello step-sister? is akito connected to Kagomes stepfather? dammit im totally confused right now......well continue the good work though let there be more Haru/Kag goodness!!!!
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel(nli) On: March 09, 2006 04:44 CST
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i like this ^_^ ur doin a super job... lol i ain't gonna liek tho i do wish that your chapters were longer. well keep em commin and i really look forward to your update :)
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Title: UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!!!!
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: March 06, 2006 17:24 CST
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UPDATE ALREADY THE SUSPENSE IS KILLIN ME!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 13:18 CST
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: March 05, 2006 09:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! Haru and Kag togetherness! WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!! *^___^*
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Title: i hope her father dies!!
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: March 05, 2006 07:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap this is good and add haru and kagome together there wasnt much of them together i want to kno wat happens between them!!!
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Title: chap 8
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 00:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: February 27, 2006 16:29 CST
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0_0 *hides* SCARY ENDING!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 17:08 CST
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Title: good
Reviewed By: fluffyschick15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a very good protray of a person life under that type of situation, please write more when u can bb4n
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: February 19, 2006 08:43 CST
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*blinks* What did happen?
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 08:15 CST
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*goes to murder her father*
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