| "Much Too Young" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anna May Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 11:51 CST
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hey, are you ever going to update this story? it's a good story and i want to know what happens. please update.
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Reviewed By: red haired demon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 01:37 CST
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its bin like 3 months since you updated are you going to finish it or not?? like let us know!!
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Reviewed By: dark mousy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 20:22 CDT
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i cant beleave you left us hanging like that i want to know what happens next please write another chapter soon i love the story. from jess
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Reviewed By: Anna May Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 12:49 CDT
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a very interesting story. a sad predicament that no one should go through. you are a talented writer. i cant wait to see what will occur in the next chapter. :thinks: and i thought Haru liked Yuki? :shrugs: your story, you get to manipulate the characters and their feelings. anywho, keep up the good work.
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Title: YAY!!!!
Reviewed By: gothic fuzzies (not logged in) On: September 04, 2006 01:28 CDT
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YAY!!!! You're back! Woot! Haru kiss Kagome...finally! YAY! Update again soon. L8ER, DUDE!
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Title: 13
Reviewed By: red haired demon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
squeal ☺☺☺☺ ; that was sooo great please write more almighty writer (i only call the best writers almighty)
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Reviewed By: red haired demon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 22:13 CDT
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this is awesome please update soon by the way your a great writer ☺☻♥
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Title: UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: July 07, 2006 15:43 CDT
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: raven( aka Guardianovthe3rdgate) On: June 18, 2006 14:20 CDT
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Momiji's story was correct it is the ones who suffer the most that cry out the least. But like Kagome sometimes one can't cry out, the fear holding them like a vice grip. It is a hard read and probably harder to write. I understand the pain, and the terror of abuse better then i wish to, please keep up the good word, people need to know that being abused is not their fault nor can they take any blame for it. Update soon and I seriously hope her step fatehr and step brother get a serious dose of their own medicine. ja.
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Reviewed By: little mouse1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 20:06 CDT
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so good . update.best story i heard
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. That's a very depressing story. To tell you the truth, I was going to stop reading it if something good didn't happen in this last chapter... I feel VERY bad for Kagome in this story. VERY bad. And nobody could do anything about it? Couldn't Kagome run away? Or could somebody just kill her stepfather?! ='( Hmmm well I'm glad she gets a little bit of hope at the end there... But I want to know what happens next! Why is Haru not being mentioned more? Not that I don't mind or anything, I just thought it was a Haru/Tohru fanfic... Anyways.. REALLY good fanfic, albeit depressing... There aren't enough Furuba/Inuyasha crossover fanfics... That why it's so nice to read a really good one. =D
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Reviewed By: gothic fuzzies (not logged in cause I'm in school now) On: April 11, 2006 07:34 CDT
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I love your new chapter. It's awesome. I can't review at home cause my laptop got taken away. GRR! Oh well. Anyway, great chapter. I love Fruits Basket and InuYasha crosovers!!!!! Yaythose kind of crossovers with the really long name. Okay buh-bye.
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: April 10, 2006 17:38 CDT
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By the way isnt Akito a girl??? I know that in the manga Akito was found out that "he" is actually a "she"......oh well!!! ^__^
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: April 10, 2006 17:34 CDT
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Awsome!! ^__^ that was a great part where Momiji tried to help Kaggie. Write a part where Haru and Kaggie kiss!!! that would be so cute!! teehee *^__^* keep up the good work!!!!
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 07:58 CDT
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Short but sweet good chapter!^^
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