| "Separation and Reunion" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady P.I.M.P On: May 20, 2006 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh..........please update.Poor Winry!
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Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 21:54 CDT
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Okay, so I just read ch.6....I'm wanting to know more about this journal as well as the rest of the story. I don't really know what to tell you besides my wanting for this story to continue...
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Reviewed By: KawaiiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 23:53 CDT
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update soon!!
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Reviewed By: disnemoon On: April 16, 2006 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update this story soon. Its too good to leave it hanging like that.
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Reviewed By: emeraldoni [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this series (though it could be longer). anyways, have you ever seen the FMA movie? thatr might help you with ideas for this. it takes place after the series and stuff. i cant wait to see what else is in store for this story though, its kinda sad... keep up the good work though!
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Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 18:57 CDT
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The way the show ended...wow, but it's so cool to read fanfics cuz that way it can continue. I'm so glad that I found this and the other site and all the great writers such as yourself...it's awesome to get lost in reading such colorful stories!!!
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: February 28, 2006 05:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You seem to be one of the only people out there who would write an EsxWinry fict. I dont know why that is though. Anyway great looking foward to next chapter.
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Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 20:40 CST
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OMG! That means Ed is alive! Yay! But I don't want Winry to KILL herself! That's horrible. But so good at the same time! Does that make sense? I love it, I really do. I can't wait to find out what happens. I've been working with a good friend of mine who is going to school to be an editor. She's been helping me with my story, which is why I haven't updated in a while. I'll see her on friday to work on chapter two. Just keep an eye out. Can't wait to read more. This is great. Jessica
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Reviewed By: eternal17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 13:55 CST
Comment/Review:
thank you for updating, continue writing :)
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Title: YAY II
Reviewed By: DeronsDemonGurl On: January 31, 2006 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so happy that you have updated. I can't wait till the next chapter. I think it is fine if they start out short just don't keep them that way ok. Hope you update soon. I be looking out for the update. XD
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: DeronsDemonGurl On: January 30, 2006 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is such a great story. You gotta get out more chapters soon. I luv both of the prequels they were awesome too. I hope you keep writing. Sorry I didn't review those i was to anxious to read this one though. But trust me they were very very good. Keep Writing. XD
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Reviewed By: eternal17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 17:59 CST
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your fanfic is interesting continue writing please
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Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 13:28 CST
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Oh you are so bad. Just leave us hanging why don't ya. I am really excited to find out how things go. Can't wait to see some more of Ed. I got the second chapter revision posted. But I'm going to change up the order of the rest of the chapters. Keep an eye out. Talk to ya soon. Jessica
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Title: Yay!!!!!!!! a sequel!
Reviewed By: yamilover32 On: January 18, 2006 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!!!!!!!!! I finally get to read a sequel, & its very good so far! Poor Winery, Ed better get his ass home, & soon! O.K., thanxs for the story & update when you can! Now, I gota go find Edward! *runs off with a torch screaming, I KNOW YOUR OUT THERE!* Thanxs! :) :p ;)
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Reviewed By: eternal17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 14:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Please continue writing Im full of curiosity, i thing it will be a interesting fanfic
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