| "Different isn't always bad" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: Squishy Penguin On: January 23, 2006 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The melons are large. Muhahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha . Anyways nice chapter.
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Reviewed By: The-Tool-Man On: January 23, 2006 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story but you need to add more chapters, definatly liked the 100% American whore thing.
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Reviewed By: The-Tool-Man On: January 23, 2006 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story but you need to add more chapters, definatly liked the 100% American whore thing.
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 16:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Kewl plezz update
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Reviewed By: Miss Vanilla On: January 19, 2006 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One Word: HOT
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Reviewed By: Pimping Jonesy On: January 19, 2006 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Missy x33 On: January 19, 2006 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic. I like wat you did with Kagome's personality, It's better then her being all shy, happy, nice and crap. Don't change anything about your characters. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Burple-Monkey On: January 19, 2006 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE! Write more. Oh ya and meet me at the dock at 9 i'll be the one wearing the yellow rain jacket tring to tame the rubber dukie. (>^_^)>
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Reviewed By: cougiecat12 On: January 18, 2006 21:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Well the concept of the story has potential, but... ermm... Kagome seems REALLY off. I know AU= OOC, but her character isn't even believable. Ok, so she's a slut who had a really traumatic exprience when Naraku murdered her father, but you could make her a bit more rounded. For one, I don't think I'd be talking about stuff like that in the middle of a classroom. As for sex being a natural part of life, that's fine, but you make her sound like a nympho! Anyway, if you toned her down a bit, the story would be a bit more believable and you could continue with what sounded like an interesting plot. Oh what was Sessy doing in the class anyway? Anyway Ch 1 == good Ch 3 == ???
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Title: great
Reviewed By: inulover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great fic keep writing. little confusing to tell whose talking tho. But i loved it
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 19:21 CST
Comment/Review:
That was kewl!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: freakhorrorchick [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Please update
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Reviewed By: kagomerocks241 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 06:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update I really like this story
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: Livin-in-a-cardboard-box [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 21:04 CST
Comment/Review:
good story i really likes it
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Title: cooll
Reviewed By: Livin-in-a-cardboard-box [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story i like it
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