| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: sovereignty+too+Lazy+to+Sign+In On: September 13, 2012 07:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"She was so tired of the drama" (chapter 25), but we're not!!! lolz! |
Reviewed By: sovereignty+too+Lazy+to+Sign+In On: September 13, 2012 04:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude.. I cant believe I found I mistake! In chapter 18 (just a missing 'd' (I assume) in): "Goodbye always complicated things, and that was one thing he and Kagome didn't nee. Kagome would understand. Or so he hoped." |
Reviewed By: sovereignty+too+Lazy+to+Sign+In On: September 12, 2012 07:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And since I've read 50 shades of grey (bored + everyone was talking about it + would love to see it if Alexander Skarsgård from True Blood plays the main male) I do NOT understand why people like it so much... or WHY it seems to be such a great thing for the bondage/discipline, dominance/submission, and sadism/masochism (BDSM), considering the main character hate most of it an shies away from it. Then again I don't think the general public would be ready to except a story as lovely as yours as a world wide phenomenon. Then again I don't understand why people like 50 shades, it's really a well edited, bad AU twilight novel with the names changed... It SCREAMS fanfiction. (ok time to stop ranting about how much I dislike twilight and anything that comes with it and its disturbing creepy, bad influence for young girls issues/problems which creep me out more than some weird Japanese tv shows...) |
Reviewed By: sovereignty+too+Lazy+to+Sign+In On: September 12, 2012 07:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey an unidentified reference to the Wizard of OZ... in chapter 3 (rereading again...) I love this story and at the end I get to read a new chapter! But not tonight... bed time now! |
Reviewed By: Sahora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2012 12:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI!, I didn't know u had an account in here... :P I have to say about this story: " OMG, how did I miss it until now??? it's been a week of sleeping 2 hours a day, and reading during work time... I simply could not stop, I was at the edge of my chair every time... I love the work you have done in here! I will wait patiently the end (?) of the story, even thou I have mixed feelings about it... ( I really want to read the next chapter but I don't want this story ends :P) U have my full support, as always, I hope you are doing great, and see you around! XOXO Sahora. |
Reviewed By: oniguts On: August 16, 2012 21:09 PDT
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I have been following this story forever. I'm sad about Jiro, but am so happy Kagome is okay. |
Reviewed By: bluerose3514 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2012 20:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Epic. Enough said. .... No... not enough. Lol. This chapter was amazing. I was just about to go to bed when I saw you had updated. I almost cried, because it has been so dead lately of good fics to read. Wonderful job. It's really sad to see Jiro go. He was honestly one of my favorite OC of all time... such a bad ass. Lol. Glad you haven't given up, this story is awesome. Can't wait to see what comes next. |
Reviewed By: CityOfFallenAshes On: August 09, 2012 23:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definitely one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. I just wanted to say that one, Bankotsu needs to go die in a hole and two, you've completely changed my outlook on Jakotsu. If Jakotsu hadn't been a bad guy in the manga/anime, I seriously believe that the way you showed him would have happened. You've made me fall in love with Jakotsu's character, compared to five minutes ago before I read this chapter that I wanted to strangle him. If you think about it...he really could be this caring and stuff, and I wanted to thank you for changing my outlook on him. :) When I see Jakotsu in the anime when I rewatch it, I'm gonna ignore the Band of Seven attitude and cheer for him, thanks to you. Now, I must read just ONE more chapter before bed...okay, ten more. XD |
Reviewed By: renomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2012 23:33 PDT
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I cried. I loved Kagejiro so much... He had really grown on me! I'm so saddened that he had to die, but I'm glad that Kagome us okay.. I totally didn't expect for that to happen! I am so attached to this story!! I've been here from the very beginning of it and it's amazing how far it's progressed. Thank you so mych for the update, it is very much appreciated!! |
Title: Holy shit.
Reviewed By: Immoral On: August 08, 2012 23:20 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy fuck. Despite the long intercession you STILL have me hooked on this blasted fic! JIRO?! Whyyyyyyyyy?????? And how? What I really, reeeaally, want to know now is what Miroku wanted to tell Inuyasha before he left for the hospital. Kagome's dad is a fucking jerk. I can't believe he STILL won't see her. Well at least Kik grew a heart. Anyways, I am glad to know you're alive and hope that you are doing well. Thank's for posting (offers fresh cyber cookies), I look forward to the next!! :) |
Reviewed By: smcforlife On: August 08, 2012 21:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, you're worth the wait. Straight out of the ballpark. |
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 (not signed in) On: August 08, 2012 21:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. This story is amazing. It makes my whole day when it's update and the wait is always worth it... so freaking worth it because your writing and your unique plot twists are always amazing. With how bleak this chapter began and how little hope everyone had on Kagome's recovery.. I really thought she was a goner. I even contemplated not reading the story any further because I wouldn't have been able to handle it - after all she's gone through and after all she's overcome... she doesn't recover. That would have just killed me. I'd probably be crying for days. I'm so invested in these characters and in your story. I've loved this story for years and it would have been absolute torture to have everything end so horribly for everyone. Jiro was definitely a favorite character of mine and and he's definitely one of the most memorable original characters in the IY fanfiction fandom. I can't believe what a huge sacrifice he made.. and while I'll miss him, I'm just so relieved that kagome is completely healed. I was completely throw off with the whole revelation of Jiro and Midoriko. I was not expecting that plot twist but it definitely makes everything even more interesting. I'm going to have to re-read some of jiros scenes to look for any clues I missed.. I have to admit, sometimes with my rush to get to Kagome's and Inuyasha's scenes I skimmed over Jiro's parts. I hope Bankotsu is killed slowly. I want him to suffer, and indefinitely wouldn't mind if Kagome's father is thrown in there with him. I hate that man just as much as I hate Bankotsu. They deserve to die painful deaths together. Thank you so much for this chapter. It was such an exciting treat.. it really really made my whole day! Thank you! I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Angelica_Pierce [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2012 22:39 PDT
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Hey, I hope you're still around! I'm looking forward to seeing how everything works out! |
Title: Loved
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2012 11:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved your story and hope there is more added soon to your creativity. I'd love to see how your stories progress and can't wait to see more entries. |
Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2011 13:36 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh oh, it just crossed my mind! The trouble is far from over aint it? I mean if Onigumo had a pic of Inuyasha as Sha, and Bankutso has no idea that Inuyasha and Sha are one in the same (simply theories) then that means Inuyasha assumptions were wrong! And what my sexy ass Irish sex on legs was saying about Inuyasha reading too much into it was right!! So yh... PLUS - what did Kikyou want out from the guy she was shacking up with - also since the theory was that Onigumo was in liege with Oberon, then Kikyou would have known about that underground world... and she doesnt. So, the there's more shit to hit the fan - and am wondering if Naraku has something to do with it as well. Becuz u said his father died and he made piece with his cousins; and Kikyou proves that she worries for Kags - family is family (well not for sexy pyscho Bank) and Naraku is alone, therefore Onigumo and his older bro and other relatives are all Naraku has - so... wanting to hand him over to the Taisho is... unrealistic? ... Am just rambling here, but yh... fucking love your fic *cheeky grins* And I'm hungry for answers - Update when you can!! =D |
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