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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2009 01:01 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so she's just going to alienate everyone? this course of action she's chosen does not seem right. can't wait to see what happens next. man, how r they going to get together? how are they going to fix things? and more importantly, is sesshoumaru as big an asshole as everyone says he is? more soon!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 22:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy...I really don't have words to express anything at the moment, but I'll try. Poor Kagome. She's under so much stress she doesn't even know who her enemies are anymore. I'll get back to Kagome. Rin...ah, Rin. I still want to clean Sesshy's clock. He is one of my all time fav characters and I am having so many mixed feelings about him. I'm a little sad that we didn't see him this chapter, but I'll get over it. ^^ Anywho, Kagome. I just don't know what to say about that girl. She really needs to listen to her inner voices, but I know she's a little messed up at the moment. Poor Inu...poor baby. I just wanna cuddle him and tell him that it will be alright. I hope so anyway. And, I'm sorry, but Sango still gets on my nerves. She's just so...imposing. But, thank you sooooooooo much for the chapter. I nearly cried with joy when I seen it in my inbox. Keep up the wonderful work. This is still my fav story.
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Reviewed By: ninjagurl512 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 20:07 PST
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Thank you so much for updating. Well worth the wait. Kagome's a moron though and I'm pretty sure Inuyasha needs a hug now...Can't wait for the next chapter hun!
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 20:00 PST
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Tsk tsk tsk...how can Kagome be so smart and so stupid at the same time? I liked the first bit with Rin, a good bit of development for her. Really, Kagome has to stop and think for a second. But she was so busy focused on being pissed off and making herself more pissed off, she couldn't figure out the truth. Well, hopefully she'll wise up soon.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 19:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...I know she kinda went psycho and was irrational and so many other things, but you're Kagome is my friggin' hero right now. If that isn't a woman scorned then I don't know what is! Amazing chapter...has me teetering on the edge of my seat wanting to know what will happen next! Until next update! And thank you so much again for answering my questions on Monmouth! ~Amber :D
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 18:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was deep i am flabbergased. BUT THAT WAS VERY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope Kagome and Inuyasha get together and Kikyo Leaves town.......
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Reviewed By: avoria [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 18:58 PST
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Wow, I'd thought you'd stopped writing this story! I love this one, the plot and development is great.
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Title: Zookers
Reviewed By: Sakura Mikazuki On: November 14, 2008 05:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing. I really mean that. It's so refreshing being able to read a good fanfiction that puts forth effort and creativity. This story is a wonderful piece and I do hope you update soon. If I wore to make one suggestion it would be faster updates, but I as any other person in the world understand that life is busy busy busy. I would enjoy faster updates so I can find out what happens next. Cliff hangers are dreadful. I look forward to your next chapter. Ja'ne Mika
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Title: D/s in the story
Reviewed By: GLily On: November 14, 2008 00:06 PST
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Wow. Another amazing chapter. I really like how you have been tying the D/s into the story and the scene in the bathroom two chapters ago was amazing! I hope you will bring Inuyashas dominant and kagomes submissive natures out and into the story more. I look forward and eagerly await your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: peachzykeen On: November 13, 2008 19:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH WOW!!!!!! my mouth must have hit the proverbial floor about a hundred times!!!!!! who knew Jiro hid such pain!!!! and damn inuyasha's father...poor rin though, sesshomaru better make it better!!!! UPDATE SOON I AGREE 3 YEARS IS WAAAAAY TOOO LONG!!!!! wait, so is bank gone for good? and what about kikyo's affairs? r those gonna come out anytime soon? Kagome should of thrown those in her face!! how could she stand there and take it???! update soon !!!!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 14:10 PST
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This is a great chapter! It's good to finally know about the older brothers past. Can't wait to read more!
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Title: Review 500!!! YEYEYEYEY!!
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 10:38 PST
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Hi! Thanks a bunch for writing that chapter. I think Kikyo's actions were understandable. I mean if i found my cousin and my boyfriend together, i think i would react a lot harshly. But i think that secretly, Kikyo doesnt love Inuyasha so completely (it's a conditional love that they have) so she doesnt feel as angry as she would be had she been completely in love with inuyasha. Jakotsu's actions really bothered me (especially in the previous chapter) he deliberately sold out Kagome, even though he thought it was in the best interests of her. Friends can do what they must but i feel that in the end, friends are just friends and the situation between Inuyasha and Kagome was too complicated for such blatant revealing. Just a question: why doesnt kagome realize it's inuyasha in the club? Can she truly forget sha? Will she return to the club? Also, how can inuyasha just leave Kikyo alone like that if he intends to stay with her? Inuyasha seems to be complicating things more than they should be. Miroku has a point. If he really loves her, then he should be with her. Inuyasha's father seems to be the ultimate "bad guy" in this entire thing, because he has so much influence over his sons' actions, it's almost sickening. There comes a time when you just say "screw you", and i hope that time comes soon for both Kagome and Inuyasha. So, if Kagome's father called Kagome a whore, then that must mean Kikyo should know the truth (about that one time before the divorce.) If that's the case, I am starting to dislike Kikyo and her pretentiousness. I hope to see another update soon because your fanfic is amazing. It beats my required reading list any day.
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Reviewed By: tamara [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 10:34 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... cousin or not, I think I would say to hell with Kikyo after that whore/rape comment. Thank god for 'Jiro being there to talk some sense to Inuyasha, and I hope he realizes he doesn't need his father with him there. As far as Jakotsu, I could see how he'd think it was helpful. Still, if pulling them apart was his goal, apparently he didn't factor in ruining her relationship with her cousin and the fact that it's just removing one big issue and (hopefully) pushing them closer together. I hope she broke his nose too! xD Anyways... Looking forward to the next chapter, but I'm guessing that Bankotsu is going to be popping back up soon? Bleh! But I'm excited either way. (:
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Title: Blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Blaccwolf123 On: November 07, 2008 19:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter.I hope sesshomaru does the right thing for his kid soon.Update soon.
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Title: (:
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 (not logged in) On: November 07, 2008 18:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything left me breathless. I can't believe how cold hearted their father is. I can't believe how much of a hypocrite Kikyo is. I can't believe Inuyasha finally admitted to loving Kagome verbally. Frankly, I can't believe alot of things. I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE! I am so excited to read what happens next. (:
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