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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 › » ] | Reviewed By: tamara On: May 11, 2008 11:24 PDT
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well that just cut off about 94% of my comment. :( ehh... basically, I feel like I should slap myself for bad judgment. Reading everything in between makes the lemony moments that much steamier, and sometimes, just the verbal foreplay and the dirty comments are hotter than the actual thing! Kagome has some crazy willpower. Of course she's fending off Inuyasha, which any girl on here would have a problem doing if your Inuyasha came to life, but, I don't know about anyone else, I find Miroku's pervertedness nearly as yummy... haha. Maybe I'm just a sucker for dirty implications, but if I was in Kagome's position... I'll leave that open. I get it - Kagome's supposed to be wholly devoted to Inuyasha, and Miroku to Sango but... that drunken scene had some other possible scenarios running through my mind... BUT, off that topic. Miroku has to be my most favoritest character... I love all his little comments, especially the "You've changed, Kikyo" comment to Kagome, and the "besides, they shape my ass nicely" regarding the leather pants. The shower scene with I/K was yummeh! I would've ripped the shower curtain back, and to hell with caution... haha. But I suppose the scars on her back played some part... and I guess hate can push you to irrationality (cause that's what I'm calling it, cause you have to be irrational to turn down something that gorgeous, egotistical prick or not). I love the little French thrown in... I'm taking French now so I've picked up on some things but I still have to read the translations. :( I find the realness of Kagome's predicament with Bankotsu really saddening, but I think you portray the emotional aspects and the feelings very well. I also think you have a fetish for torturing characters and putting them in impossible situations. :P This reminds me of COTD because of that. Consider me excitedly [impatiently, hehe] waiting for your next update... :) Keep writing! I get giddy just thinking about your next story after this. xD
| Reviewed By: tamara On: May 11, 2008 11:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I just wanna say I'm sorry for writing a novel, cause I'm just overflowing with comments to make! I'll admit, I read COTD and it was ohmygod drool-worthy, and so when I first saw this I basically just looked through it for the citrus warnings. xD (which didn't work anyways because i only checked the beginning of the stories, not the descriptions >_
| Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: May 09, 2008 08:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh, i am so ready to see what happens in the next chap. what a way to leave off. you are truly the master at cliffies! 'jiro is too awesome and such a bad ass. i love him! he is just the right balance to inu and sess's personalities. such a bad boy... not that inu isn't. lol i think miro has to be the most hilarious guy ever. gawd, the things you have him say make me laugh 'till it hurts. i swear. how do you do it? effin' funny as hell. and on a side note, that bitch at the daycare. OMG! *rips each limb off and shoves them up her A$$* k, i feel better. well, as expected from you, this fic just gets better and better. i love it and i am just glad that you updated. no need to apologize. i understand that life comes first, even tho we wish it didn't. take care, and update when you can. t.c.
| Title: Blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Blaccwolf123 On: April 30, 2008 08:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it.Finally sesshiles sees rin.Jiro is exactly how I thought he would be.Update soon.
| Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 16:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, I think I know who kikyou is banging now! I don't know if I should say it b/c it'd spoil it for anyone reading the reviews who hasn't got it yet, but..I'm decently sure I'm right. ;) Anyways, I love how Miroku stuck to the 'Mola Rom' thing. I kinda wish Kagome would've made an appearance though...but I'm sure Jacky is taking good care of her. As for Inu..I feel bad for him. The ending of this chapter makes me feel like everyone (including Sesshiles and his funky electric green...*dildo*) are gonna gang up on him in the next...but maybe thats just me. We'll see. ~Amber/
| Reviewed By: eriste [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 22:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. Sesshy's poor world is about to get flipped all to hell and back! Please update as soon as possible, because I have to see the result of these bombs dropping!
| Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 14:25 PDT
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I LOVE IT!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!
| Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 00:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! you can't just leave it there, you have to let us know what happened! please have more soon!
| Title: DAMN
Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 22:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was one Reunion! i bet Jiro was like wow in his Head what a shocker! if he caught on that fast all it needed was Kagomes Drama and you'd have ANOTHER SOAP OPERA!!! THIS STUFF STAYS FUNNY!.
| Reviewed By: New Fan On: April 25, 2008 05:11 PDT
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I have not laugh so much reading a fanfic until I came upon this chapter. I was dying laughing at the very end of the chapter. I hope that you will not wait to long to update becasue this chapter was just excellent. UPDATE REALLY SOON.
| Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 01:06 PDT
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I'm so glad you updatd. I've been re-eading the whoel story a couple times to the point where I pretty much haveall the dialogues between Inuyasha, Kagome, and Sango memoized... and i was just thinking whether you'd update anytime soon. I was so pleased that you actually graced us with another chapter after such a long wait rather than an author' note promising another chapter. And, what ending! That should totally go down in math books as the function "Chaos=2.5(youkai+human)" LOL. Anyway, lookng frward to another chappie,hoping you update soon, since you don't have an escuse like I do... so I'd rathr write more than go through eye surgery... I must be a pioneer, never heard of a twenty-one year old getting cataracts before. Hope ou hear from you soon, and please, try ot to stress out. It's very damaging to one's health. Love ya.
| Title: :]
Reviewed By: blackr0s3[[Not logged in]] On: April 25, 2008 00:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww. I was so happy when I recieved the alert that you've updated! x] I couldn't stop laughing when 'Jiro had that irish accent..I really cannot imagine that. Lmao, but it is an amusing image, haha. I'm even needier for the next chapter! What will happen next? UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN! Please?
| Title: :]
Reviewed By: blackr0s3[[Not logged in]] On: April 25, 2008 00:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww. I was so happy when I recieved the alert that you've updated! x] I couldn't stop laughing when 'Jiro had that irish accent..I really cannot imagine that. Lmao, but it is an amusing image, haha. I'm even needier for the next chapter! What will happen next? UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN! Please?
| Reviewed By: Peachkeen14 On: April 24, 2008 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG U LEFT A CLIFF HANGER!!!!!!! HOW DARE YOU!!!! ( but i have to admit yash's mix up was hilarious...^.^) there better be an update soon!!!! i wanna know what fluffy-sama's gonna say!! and i thought jiro was also there to take care of bankotsu or have u just not brought that up in the story yet? hmmm wow and a chapter without kagome, well i tell ya one thing there was soo much drama in this one that...wow i just dont know but UPDATE u horrible cliff hanging author
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 19:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh that was brilliant.... Assuming things makes thing so wrong.. "Actually, he's not an alcoholic at all; Alcoholic's go to meetings and confess their `problems' to their peers, professionals go to bars and have a lot more friends. They have sex more often too." great line!!! "I have conquered fishnet." god now I wanna see a picture of Miroku in leather pants (trousers) and a fishnet shirt... Oh and the grapefruit comment was to DIE for!!!! Toran was a total ****** in this chapter... oh this was great too Sighing heavily, Kagejiro responded, "When I see a call coming in from America, you get my American accent. I never know who the hell is ringing me, so I got ta play the part, you see. When I get a call from Japan, they get a Japanese response, and when I get a call from England, I tell em' to fuck off. The accent ya get depends on where you're calling from. This, however, is a much more relaxed state of mind." What happens if he gets a call from Australia???? (thats where I'm from) Is InuYasha ever gonna "shack up... with his girlfriend's cousin" properly soon?????
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