| "Lesser of Two Evils" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 20:51 CDT
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I was right, YES!! I knew that Radi had a *really* soft spot for our man Piccolo. Training him for Frieza, my left butt cheek! The starry-eyed Saiyan is out there booking the temple and hiring the caterer...but I digress. I like that R takes P seriously now that he's proven his worth. I do wonder if he's concerned that if P is *not* the perfect submissive, that will come back to haunt him? As for Z, I could just feel the love between he and R--odd, isn't it? Is R just proud that he's trained such a good toy? or is it like star f***ing, 'cuz Z is so close to Frieza? I can't wait to see who P is off to see...thankya, thankya, thankya--that was a good dose! My stomach got all tingly in the first paragraph... :-P
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Reviewed By: Makota [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is fast becoming one of my all time favorite fics. I love how you write 'evil Piccolo', I haven't seen anyone do it as well. The story in of itself is very original and I'm more than curious to see what happens next. I know you're very busy but update soon!
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Title: Oh no!
Reviewed By: bdegrees [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 05:07 CDT
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The plot is thickening! I wonder if we will ever get to see what Lord Frieza would do with Piccolo..and what would be in it for Radditz? Frieza and Piccolo are my two favorite character, you know, I can't wait to find out what happens! And who is Piccolo going to pay a visit to?? Great update, can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: March 06, 2006 15:03 CST
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Sneaking in for a bit of catch up here. After reading chapter 5, I feel somewhat less sorry for Piccolo though; what a gruesome little mind that Namek has- maybe it is better he weren't in control. I have to say, Radditz certainly seems to have had fun shopping. (Why kill the cashier when he can shoplift with his hair?) Now these mentions of Frieza are coming up... That training better help him then.
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Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 14:24 CST
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OMG! Maybe it's because there was only offscreen death in this chapter, but I do detect some heartwarming stuff there. Presents! Special training for Frieza! Getting to control his own vibrator! Maybe Piccolo doesn't realize it, but I think Radditz is in lurv!! This was so good, pix.
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Title: Gah!!
Reviewed By: bdegrees [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 02:29 CST
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Damn! Why do I feel sorry for Piccolo after all that he has done! I loved the scene with Radditz talking to Vegeta on the scouter. Ha ha, Radditz. Enjoy being the strongest while you can!! I do hope that Goku will come back for revenge, but, I have a feeling that this is not where the story is going...Great job. Delightfully evil...
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Reviewed By: Piccolo's New Fan On: February 25, 2006 10:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kami you HAVE to update soon!!! This is way too good to not update!!! I have to read more!!
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Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 21:28 CST
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Gods, with every chapter, I just like this story more, and it's not getting any less gruesome, or any more heartwarming. Depravity in all its glory--well done!
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Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 13:17 CST
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Things on earth are getting worse--yikes. These guys really are testy, aren't they? Poor Krillin--what a way to go! I hope they are all in Otherworld planning their revenge... Piccolo is invigorating, to say the least. And Nappa IS gonna love him, and vice versa. *starts chanting softly* Nappa, Nappa, Nappa! I'm still on the edge of my seat, so bring it on.
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Reviewed By: lord_of_the_pies [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 14:14 CST
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This pulls me in further each time I read it. Radditz continues to amaze me with his violence. (It is great how Piccolo is still retaining his humour though.) I liked seeing their interactions in this chapter yet again; Piccolo appears to have gotten in over his head this time. (And do I detect a hint of Nappa?) I wonder what kind of havoc Radditz will cause on Earth now...
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Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 07:41 CST
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Both of them dead? Ooooh *shivers* you're eviler than I thought, or Piccolo is... There was one thing that struck me as off somehow, when P expresses twice the thought that he wants R to kill G quick so he can get f***ed--the second instance just doesn't seem to follow the first, I dunno...(it probably struck me in the first place 'cuz I was thinking the same thing--'nuff with the fighting already, guys! Get nekkid! *fans pervy self*) I can't wait to see what these two get up to next!
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Reviewed By: Elene K On: January 29, 2006 18:39 CST
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This seems so much fun. I'm going to enjoy it. I love Raditz being an evil monster.
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Title: Kewl
Reviewed By: AyAnA iSh Me On: January 28, 2006 11:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very kewl so far. O.o A little strange at first because of the pairing, but it's really cool. Please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: 65465 On: January 28, 2006 00:07 CST
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man, this fic is really good, you deserve more credit
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: bdegrees [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 02:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great start! I love the use of first person perspective. Never considered this pairing before, but I think it is very interesting so far. I'm a little scared for Goku...Great job!
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