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| "Miles 'Foxy' Prower!" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Title: I am rach[insert all the numbers here]
Reviewed By: Rach123454321 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*phew* I thought you stopped the story, I am glad it was just writers block, incredibly LONG writers block... =D YAY!!!!!!! Shadow was finally found out! O.o;; how did you come up with that rhyme though? The one Armic said to his rock. I am horrible at rhymes >.
| Title: The wonders of chapter 20!
Reviewed By: fairy-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 05:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YIIIIIIIIIIFFYYYYYYYY!!!!!! *huge hug* YOU UPDATED, YOU UPDATED, YOU UPDATED!!! YAY! You have once again officially made me very happy! ^_^ You actually had me worried there for a while lol. You're right, writer's block is a horrible, evil thing - I really hate it when I get it... but I'm really happy that you're over it now! A writer as brilliant as you are should never get writers block, NEVER! *smashes writer's block with Amy's Piko Piko hammer* Mwa ha ha! Take that you fiend! Ok, ok, I'm done know lol. Let's get down to business - describing the ultimate awesomeness of your story!! This chapter was wonderful, as your chapters always are! Once again I found myself in a state of awe as I read your beautiful descriptions! Everything was so detailed and well explained, I felt that I was really there in the story; I could picture it all perfectly! The first two sentences were like poetry! I know I always ask you this, but how on earth do you do it? I could never come up with something as good as that. And Shadow had finally revealed himself! I feel kinda sorry for him though, having everyone surround him like that and bombard him with questions he can't answer, poor guy. But I loved the way you described his love of the night from Armic's point of view! Speaking of which, the little golden Chaos boy was as cute as ever! And the magic gemstone of his that gave Shadow his voice back was such an amazing idea! And original too! I'm must admit, I'm really curious as to how it all worked... Oooooooooooooooooh, now you've got me thinking about it I can't wait to find out! Eggy's immature behaviour continued to make me laugh out loud (great job!), but the bit I loved the most was definitely the girl talk! Lol! Amy, Rouge and Cream sitting in a tent talking about guys! That was absolutely brilliant! Cream blushing about Tails while Amy and Rouge ganged up on her was just so very, very, ultra cute!!! *_* I wonder if she'll ever figure out that Chris likes her too… But the sweet bunny and the kawaii kitsune are destined to be together! *pulls out Tails+Cream forever banner* DESTINED I TELL YOU!! Lol, yeah I'm a little hyper today, but that's the effect your fanfic has on me! And trust me, that's a good thing! Thank you so much for such a great update, you have me waiting in anticipation for the next chapter! So please, please update as soon as you can Yiff! You rule forever, never let anyone tell you otherwise! ~_^
| Title: 10 THUMBS UP!!
Reviewed By: Clonetrooper198 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I SWEAR!! I they remove this story i'm gonna*censored* A brilliant story with brilliant ideas! What's to remove about that? Writers block is nothing to worry about but just don't just end the story without finishing it otherwise all your dying fans won't be so happy!
| Reviewed By: xVampire-Heartx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 05:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 19:: This chapter is amazing and if I were to write a comment on every part I'd be here all day. ^-^; I'm really confused and although this chapter has got a lot of explanation..it still remains..confusing. Still an answesome chapter though. =] Bring on Chapter 20!
| Reviewed By: xVampire-Heartx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 05:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Chapter 18:: All I can say is..I love this chapter.
| Reviewed By: xVampire-Heartx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 04:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 17 Woah..Knuckles has kind of gone out of character in this one. He's blaming himself for once most unlike the way he acted in Sonic Adventure 1 [telling Sonic that HE was the one who got tricked, not himself]..But it comes with a bit of Kunckles/Rouge arguing as we all know and love. And the flirtatious way they act and try to make it not seem so obvious. Anyway, the way Tails declines Cream's offer makes me really feel sad for her...I'm suprised Chris didn't go kick Tails ass. Also, Armic is like a young child in need of a parent in this chapter and way he holds on to Amy is really sweet like she's a sister...Keep up the great work =]
| Reviewed By: xVampire-Heartx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 04:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 16 I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit but it's about time you got some romance in there! I didn't really get why Sonic started losing his power while he was still Super Sonic...And why Eggman started crying O.o They were quite funny names for him ^.^ You're never gonna stop your rage against Fanfiction are ya? Haha. ^_^
| Reviewed By: xVampire-Heartx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 04:12 CST
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I loved this chapter! Especially the description of Armic...I'm sorry I have not reviewed the other chapters before this one but I will now review all the ones after this. Keep up the awesome work ^.^ P.S. I liked the evil version of Jingle Bells at the end ^_^
| Reviewed By: Shadow of Miracles On: March 20, 2006 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best Sonic stories i've ever read. It's funny, dramatic, adventurious and the list goes on (Actually i just can't think of othjer words) Anyways i was really hoping this could be a Shadow/Rouge (T-T) story, but it's still a cool story, i just hope to see more of Shadow. The only thing i didn't like was that you made Shadow a mute, but that's ok since that kinda gives a more realistic look to the story. Anywasy update really soon, please. Shadow out...
| Title: cool pleeze make the last bit!
Reviewed By: Tails Is The Coolest Fox That Ever Lived [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah man it's cool ,please make the last bit I really want to know what happens and the more romance scenes the better!
| Title: HOLY GOD!!!!
Reviewed By: Kijunuah On: March 18, 2006 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD GOD IN HEAVEN, MAN!!! Where did you come up with that awesomely awesome story? (It does have its similarities to something like DBZ though). Im tellin ya man, if this were a movie... OSCAR. Now, im a Sonic fan myself, but i dont watch Sonic X... Reason for this: 2 words; HORENDOUS VOICE-ACTING (would that be considered 3?). I like the way youve pretty much captured the essence of each character and the effects puberty has had on Cream and Tails. And adding a bunch of mature attitude really made them seem like Sega's been wanting to make an actual T(if not M) rated game. I do understand your explenation, despite what you may think(HEY, ive played Sonic adventure). Oh, and id like to say that the first few chapters really capture the characters...(have i said that before?) and crippling them made them seem more human and had more to relate with. The humor in these first few chapters seems to fit perfectly, the diologue, the jokes, and the actions of the characters(Especially when Sonic jokes about pissing on the master emerald... showing that hes more of an ass when not helping people), and i found it all hilarious. Even though I did find a couple (and literally a couple) flaws in the way your grammer was. it really doesnt make the story or anything else any less captivating. For this, you get my highest praise and respect as a fellow fan. Oh, and this may seem annoying, but im planning to post a fanfic(more of a fan...script...thingy) on this sight, because it seams like you can do anything you wish...unlike fanfiction.net, take a look if you want sometime...this year. But dont expect any action until late, scratch, make that REALLY late in the story...Im pretty much rewriting the whole mythology as to how i think it all came about.... I really should shut up now. Oh, and BTW... Armic is really cool, his siblings are pissants though(though i know you tried to make them that way). 10/10 P.S. Looking foward to that next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Tails11 On: March 14, 2006 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the whole explanation behind the creation of the Chaos Emeralds. Very good. Excellant work. Anything Shadow comes up with is going to be good, just because its from Shadow. May your next update appear as soon as you're able to type it.
| Reviewed By: tails_the_pimp [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 16:19 CST
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kick ass 8 emrealds thats kick ass now wheres fanfaq so i can kick there ass??
| Title: Not logged on again! ^^
Reviewed By: Rach1234567 On: March 11, 2006 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Story is still going good! They better not delete it, just like fanfiction did!! Do you plan everything that happens next when you write your stories? Cause it sure seems like it =D. You should try drawing a pic of tails.. to see how that looks.. lol. Can't wait to read your next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Watch 4 Stars On: March 11, 2006 08:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let's see...Wow is basically all I can say about this chapter...Shock of the year, this won't be a random review like normal...I'm not really in the mood; I'll tell you why later. I liked the way you portrayed Rouge in this. She does seem rather childish when it concerns jewels. Knuckles, love him, has a lot to think about thanks to Armic. It's good that he knows why he's had to guard the Master Emerald for so long, and I really enjoyed your explanation, myself. The "Crystal Kingdom"...Clever of you, but you are. I loved the CreamTails fluff. That eye-contact thing was a real teaser, I gotta say. It's true, Amy and Cream both have very motherly instincts. It's good for their friends to have them like that. Vampy Shadow, pure awseomeness. I'm just hoping he'll get a bigger part next ch. He doesn't have to speak to be cool. Sonic. What can I say about the blue hero? He's just...You've really and truly got that particular hedgie down pat. He's exactly like what you said, or what you had Tails explain, rather. Sonic doesn't enjoy feeling weak around his enemies, but his friends especially. That quality is shown in the games often, but (since you've added an element of this I feel I can safely do the same) it's shown even more in SonicX. Chris didn't have a big part in this cahpter, I saw, but he's not my favorite, so I'm fine with that. Don't get me wrong, I love the way you've depicted him in this fic. The axe rules! Cream is a sweetheart until the end. Bless her. It's good that she let Armic cry like that and made him feel better. Armic is a really cool guy, and I've liked him since the beginning, as you know. ~_^ He's so...He's such a sad guy, but now that you've given us the explantion of the Chaos Emeralds, I understand why he causes such a poignant reaction to so many of your readers. He may just be a better OC than Liliha, and you know how how awesome she is. Sir Alexander...You really do have a thing for names that start with "A" don't you? But it's cool. It was obvious to me, the second he said "my reincarnation" that Sonic was it. Then your description of him drove that nail even farther. Eggman is such a foolish twit...It's enjoyable, actually, to read about him. He's the only character, besides Chris, that you've made completely, and irreversibly OOC. Somehow, you've managed to make it work by giving them both moments where they're not. Basically, I love this story. I adore the characters and the way you've displayed them. I think that this is your best chapter thus far, albeit slightly confusing. As explanations in stories go, you've reached, and possibly surpassed, the bar on that. You didn't put too many distractions in between bouts of Armic's explanation to truly mess with a reader's head. Okay, I have to leave now. Love you lots, Josh. Nice, no FANTASTIC, job with this chapter. See ya!
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