| "Whispers of Memories and Promises Forgotten" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Title: a sequel?
Reviewed By: gen50-inlj On: January 21, 2007 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just read one of the reviews where you said you were going to write a sequel. YES!!! do drop a word or two in your lj, please? i think a sequel to this would be great. i dont care how you want it, pwp, short story, chaptered story, whatever! that would be soooo good to hear! i checked, that was Sept when you said that... yes, hoping that between then and now, you have the sequel somewhere in your brain... but hoping it doesnt interfere with your CH one! as you can see, i dont know what i used as code in mm so it is better not to log in! take care now.
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Title: whispers
Reviewed By: gen50-inlj On: January 21, 2007 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a delightful sight, Sesshoumaru writhing, and all because of him this line says it all for me. this is one of the rare fics that have Sess unconfused and completely sure of his feelings for inuyasha. Sess is sure that he loves inu. AND for once we have inu demurring.... a bit. what's to think about (if i were inu, i mean)? there i was thinking, wouldnt a mated one almost die without the mate? but then it would depend on the author, wouldnt it? i think your torn's still the best of the 3 that you've finished that i've read that is. waiting to see Centennial. that is lovely and humorous. but i like this short story as well.... with you gone at aff, i feel a bit sad there, but glad you are here when i can follow... and still read...
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 03:05 CST
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That was GREAT. I really love your work! Does it have to be finished though *puppy eyes* lol. Shigure-san
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 03:42 CST
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This story is really touching, I did like the sneak appearance of Inu-no-Taishou *giggles* The way writer's portray him is always really different (including myself) so it's interesting. Also, you made IxS's relationship not just WAFF-ed and fluffy, you made it believable and your writing style is very constant in it's depth and GREAT quality. Top marks! LOL. I hope to see more stories from you soon ^_^ -- Love Shigure-san
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Reviewed By: CatHappy:) On: November 11, 2006 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best that I have been reading. It is one of the best it gives me chills just to thinking about it. Thanks so much for a great story. Let me know when you get more sorys out so that way I can read them to. thank you.
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Title: I know this is late but...
Reviewed By: tinkrbell3 On: October 21, 2006 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just read it this morning or night whatever time you think 2am is. You are a freakin' genius. This story is brillant, the whole goddamn thing. And you even made Sesshy get his arm back in a dignified, believable way too. Really though, the whole thing seems kinda real if you understand me like it could actually be part of the manga. You really good. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Polka Dot On: September 22, 2006 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a sweet fic. Sort of a long PWP though.
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Reviewed By: DemonGoddess On: September 20, 2006 03:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot BELIEVE that this has had only SEVEN reviews so far! Exquisite story!
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Title: Whispers of Excellence
Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaahhhh, this fic was like a long, cool drink of water on a hot summer's day. It was refreshing, creative and touching. The love between the brothers that turned to *false* hatred due to their forbidden relationship was well-done. Inuyasha's confusion and ultimate acceptance of the situation was very in-character for him. He wants love and acceptance, but it's hard to give when you don't love and accept yourself. Sesshomaru carrying the burden of their secret and forgotten love was wonderfully done. He wanted his brother in his life, and would take that interaction any way he could. He was willing to hurt himself to heal his brother--the mark of real love. The lemons were hawt! I envy your writing skill in that aspect. Daddy Inu's characterization was right on for a parent--he felt remorse for his now overly harsh punishment, but pride at the fact that his sons are stronger for it. Overall, an well-crafted piece. Adding you to the favs!
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Title: Whispers of Memories and Promises Forgotten
Reviewed By: Narakulover77 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 03:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and being the first Inu fic I have read I love it, the way you made the relationship between the brothers was touching. I hope to read more from you which you know I will. Guess who without reading my e-mail addy.
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Reviewed By: brais_aingeal On: April 24, 2006 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was an excellent story to read. I'm glad to have finally gotten to read one of your stories. 'Cause as you know my cousin is hooked on Sketches for some reason. I can't wait to read the new stories you are planning. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Soma-san [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome. It was wonderfully written. Very descriptive and extremely impressive. I love it. You are an awesome yaoi writer.
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Reviewed By: elleven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you deserve more reviews than you have. your writing skills are amazing, very visual and poeticly fluid. I would repeatedly reviedw 7000 times JUST to make this fic look as impressive as it to the browsing readers. i enjoyed this fic very much. ^_^
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Title: SQUEEEEEEE!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You came over!!! I had no idea you were posting here until today. As always, an excellent read. You make the best yaoi I have ever read! I have yet to work on my yaoi (ducks head in shame) but I did get several chaps in. One day soon, I'd like to peek at it just for opinion's sake. Again, BRAVO! to one of the BEST yaoi writers in fandom!
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Reviewed By: mshutts [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 17:52 CST
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If I just say 'awww, cute', will you kill me? Seriously, though, it was well-written. Kind of makes me wonder what's going to happen next. (Presuming it continues on in real time from the end of the story.) Oh, question: Have the marks always been present for everyone to see on Inuyasha's shoulder from the getgo? And, if so, why has no one ever said anything about it? I would think it would be something they would ask about especially since he never scars. I would also think that someone they came across at some point would see the marks for what they were. I still like the story and the way for them to have had a past relationship without having to change the complete line of continuity in the series. Nicely done. (Sorry for it all running together, I still can't figure out how to get the line spaces to stick.)
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