| "Shattered Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
| Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
Reviewed By: margyy On: February 22, 2007 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yaaay! That was great! ^_^ It totally made my day!! Im happy you had some Sephiroth and Tseng in there :D I really can't wait till they get together ^^
|
Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 01:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i started reading the shattered arc not too long ago starting with the reduct but it was so good that i finished the story by reading the older version and moved on to shattered dreams i love this story very much and wasnt able to stop reading until i got to this point i read 57 two days ago and was sad to have reached the end of what you have written so far 58 was a nice surprise.I LOVE this story very much and i enjoy reading all of your creations especially the shattered arc and desperate reflections. I would appreciate it if you updated both stories more often. Keep up the wonderful work! and PLEASE UPDATE THIS AND DESPERATE REFLECTIONS SOON!
|
Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 09:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm with Yuffie. Who Seph sneeze at? I really think that story needs to be told, even as a one shot. I liked the the strategy, the arguments, and the way you're working them back into a cohesive force. On my previous comment, I just meant that it was cool that you used the new canon to show just what a b*tch Lucrecia really was. We all know that "Tragic Lab Accident" is "I knocked him off to advance myself" in Shinra Scientist speak. I used to think Lucrecia was a victim. Now I just think it's a pity she never really got what was coming to her. I mean seducing the son of the man she killed, just to turn him over to Hojo for experimentation? I should stop before I go off on a rant about the lack of morals in a fictional character.
|
Reviewed By: margyy On: January 26, 2007 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh!! That was a great chapter!! ^__^ Just what I was waiting for! Cloud to finally tell them Sephy is in charge! I can't wait till the wedding! I hope there will be some good Sephy/Tsengness >:3
|
Reviewed By: ChessyKat (as always too lazy to sign in) On: January 12, 2007 11:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do believe that this is my favorite chapter so far. It was amazing. I loved the fact that you managed to include canon from Dirge of Cerberus. Maybe Reis and Archer could hook up. That would be cool.
|
Reviewed By: margyy On: December 13, 2006 05:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh that was great ^^ All the family members names cracked me up. Poor Cid haveing to put up with that family, at least his niece is untainted though. Im quite curious as to what his father said to him, and I think that Cid coming from a rich family makes perfect sense. How else would he have gotten such mechanic knowledge, and chances to work with Shin-Ra? Im curious as to what ur reason are though ^^ Great chap. thou, can wait till the next update! I want to see what happens when Cloud tells everyone Sephiroth is gonna be the leader, and we need more SephyxTseng ^_^
|
Reviewed By: margyy On: December 03, 2006 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeay! I FINALLY caught up XD cool fight scene between Cloud and Sephy, but the het scene? umm it was good.. just not what im usally into XD; but we all knew it was gonna happen between Zack and Elena. Your totally getting me into SephyxTseng, I love the chapter with the dinner where they were being all shy with eachother hehe ^_^ PLEASE write more with them sooon! and again, hurray for being caught up!!
|
Reviewed By: AnkouMagpie On: November 17, 2006 12:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Tseng, playing tes party-now that is the shizna. I love how you mix the sadder parts with the lighter parts. There is always some much going on, and with some many characters, just like if the world was really ending. And you manage to keep it from getting to busy or confusing too.
|
Reviewed By: AnkouMagpie On: November 15, 2006 17:24 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm up to 49 now (or is it 50? >
|
Reviewed By: ChessyKat (yet again, too lazy to log-in) On: November 01, 2006 09:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummm... I'm all choked up. I like the realism you have stressing them more and more. But... my heart aches for them even if I'm a Rude/Reno shipper. But then again you somehow managed to get me to like Cid/Vincent when I'm a Vincent/Tseng shipper. I put that down to your talent as a writer. BTW are you going to continue that FF8 fic?
|
Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that explains a few things. Nah, Seph and Cid fishing? LOL! If I could only draw. *snickers* good chapter. Hey, when are the triplets coming in to the story? Or are they on hold until "Shattered Children"?
|
Title: For Chapter 47
Reviewed By: hecate_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the last chapter, when I said "low point", I meant a part that I liked least about that chapter. Just like "high point" means the best part or something of an event, or writing. Anyways, will we ever get to see what Lucrecia told Sephiroth? Is Vincent his father? These were the questions that you left us hanging with in the last chapter, and the fact that they're still unanswered is the low point of this chapter. The high point was the fact that Archer didn't try to get Cid back, even though he's angry at Vincent and being vulnerable with him at the time. And we now know why Archer broke up with Cid in the first place. I can't believe that someone willingly married Hojo?!! Of course, it'd make sense that it'd be someone just as twisted as he is!!! I still want to know how Alice and Balaam ended up working together in the first place. I hope that in the next chapter, this question, and the previous ones in the last chapter, will somehow be answered in the next chapter.
|
Reviewed By: ChessyKat (yet again, too lazy to log-in) On: September 25, 2006 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. The tone was right on, But... I think that it would have been better served to show the conversation between Seph and Lucrecia (and Zack's response) before the conversation that Vincent had with Erebus and friend. It felt like you let it hanging a bit, and you still have those questions from Seph to Vincent. No offense intended. Great new on the Redux though.
|
Reviewed By: hecate_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I *love* Chapter 46, "Mother"! The only low point was Cid and Vincent's argument over Vincent visiting Lucrecia with Sephiroth. But I *LOVED* everything else. The sex scene, Vincent bringing Seph and Zack to Lucrecia's cave and telling her off. And who's that second voice that's talking to Vincent near the end? Is it Ifrit? Or Jade Tiger? Keep up the good work!
|
Reviewed By: Ankou-Magpie On: September 14, 2006 17:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Gods, but your brillant ^-^ I remember you saying somewhere about a reno-reeve story about how they met? Well, if you ever do, I'll turn it into my personal bible ><
Can't wait for the next chapter.
|
| Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
