| "A Different Path" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: GMusick On: February 10, 2006 01:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. I've always enjoyed your stories so one more is just icing on the cake. I'm interested in seeing how everyone has changed as well, good times ahead. Oh, and bravo for the Akane bit. I don't see how they ended up together when all his other finacess were so delectable. Ranma has brain damage indeed.
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Title: Hmm.
Reviewed By: j0 On: January 31, 2006 23:09 EST
Comment/Review:
Looks very promising - keep it up. I'll rate it when there is a bit more written. :)
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Reviewed By: pspinler [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 23:54 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderfully creative! Great humor! Very good writing! I'd very much like to see more of this. -- Pat
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Reviewed By: pspinler [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 23:54 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderfully creative! Great humor! Very good writing! I'd very much like to see more of this. -- Pat
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Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 04:16 EST
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akanes looks last of ranmas girls her cooking last out of the entire human race her fighting skills on par with ukyo barehanded maybe even better than ukyo bare handed but akane's personailty is sadly the best dispite her temper she's never tryed to drug ranma or force him to marry aginst his will something that ukyo kodachi and shampoo are all guilty of if akane learned to control her temper she would be easly the best of ranma's girls
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Reviewed By: AzureSky [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 20:35 EST
Comment/Review:
Great start. So Ranma can recharge his ki from having sex with women? lol I want to see the ripple effect.
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Reviewed By: Wizard Surreal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 13:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
One question, are you in need of a pre-reader? Because I'd be more than happy to help (I'm also, coincidentally, over 18 ^^) Well, until later! Haven't seen enough of the story to get a full glimpse of what the correct ratings should be but right now they're based on only the first 2 chapters.
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