| "In Love and Hate" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anon 78 On: June 05, 2009 20:23 CDT
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Lame story.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: villagefox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 17:16 CDT
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This fic is so damn good! plz continue. I am a personal lover of dark and mainly gorey and morbid things. Its refreshing to read something so fucked up! LOL! But seriously, your story is so well written that i feel like i know every detail. plz update soon! Villagefox,
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Reviewed By: Spinner2009 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 22:41 CDT
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great job on your latest chapter! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Akane Kageno On: May 11, 2007 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story! It's so interesting, you never know what's gonna happen next. I love how different Shuichi and Yuki are, it's as if they'd almost switched roles for awhile. I love all the drama and angst. Now you MUST write more!!!!!!!
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Title: !
Reviewed By: Spinner2009 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's an amazing fanfic! wonderful job it must be hard to write about Shuichi like this! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Korune On: October 12, 2006 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't expect to like an angsty Shu, and I normally don't, but I like YOUR angsty Shu! I want him! =P Keep up the good work. ^_^* Oh, and, surprisingly, even though you don't get down into the **ahem** details... So to speak... I really don't mind with this story! In fact, it's nice, really. And your choice in music, hellz yeah! BIG thumbs up on that! ^_^* I'm just wondering how you're going to untangle the mess you've made, if at all you will, in this fic! Just don't send them all to shrinks... **crinkles face** I never enjoyed, or got anything from, going to them quacks... -_-;
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEeeeepppp...so good...must have update...it is so well written and the story line is so intense...please update as soon as possible. I can't wait...onegai :3
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Title: WHEE!!
Reviewed By: Gravi_fan5209 On: March 27, 2006 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! KEEP GOING!!^___^
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (NSI) On: March 27, 2006 12:07 CST
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O.O how did I know they were gonna do that. Naughty Naughty. Oh, glad to see the new chapter though. Anyways, told ya i'd be back XD Yes there are a few typos here and there but nothing so bad that we can't understand what is going on. I hate editing my own stories, after I re-read it for the 3rd or 4th time i usually skip over things, though no on purpose. Anyways, good chapter, keep up the good work. Until next time. Ja ne! Fujinakaheero
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful fic you have here. yes, it is dark and depressing in regards to shu. but, i like angsty. i've never read a fic about cutting and it's been, insightful. i know people do it, but it's still so sad. i hope shuichi finds peace. yuki is a bastard in this story, but i suppose every one deserves forgivess. i'm wondering where you will take this fic. can't wait to find out.
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Title: yeowza!
Reviewed By: AngelofLight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Ohhhhh Tatsuha's pissedddd *sing-song tone* The question though is.. is he pissed at Yuki (well that kinda goes without saying..) or Shuichi. And I can't stand Ashlee Simpson either. SHE CAN'T SING! Eh, moving on... Keep up the good work! I feel so bad for Shu-chan but also for Tatsuha. He's just stuck in a really bad position, heartache galore for him. Update again soon!
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (NTS) On: March 08, 2006 13:25 CST
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Hey! My first review for this story though it should've been sooner. Anyways, just wanna stop by and say I've been keeping up with this story and think it's good. Though if anything I would get a BETA to just go over this and correct your mistakes and what not. Usually good spelling and grammar makes a story better so I am just suggesting it. Anyways, until next time. Ja ne! Fujinakaheero.
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Title: i love it
Reviewed By: inuyasha_lover5209(not signed in) On: March 08, 2006 12:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome....poor Shu...I cant ait till your next update! p.s. ^_^ lovin the darkness! p.p.s. Don`t stop writin ur good!! p.p.p.s. i dunno just like to do this O.o Well your story is great keep writin!
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: Dark5209 On: March 08, 2006 08:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is awsome this is the first gravi fic i have ever read and i love it i cant wait till u update!!
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Title: Excellent Work!!!
Reviewed By: Kamui Amou On: February 17, 2006 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even with swearing and Suichi being suicidal, this is still an enjoyable and creative story. The plot is clear and unique and the additioal lyrics that were added to the story gave it a nice touch. I did however find that there was little to no yaoi reference. And being a story targeted at boys love I have to say that it did not achieve it's goal. I hope the author takes this into consideration in their future chapters. All in all I liked this story and gave it the high rating that it deserved... please continue to write on this current story.
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