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| "The Swim of Things" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] | | Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 › » ] | Reviewed By: KratosOrian On: February 08, 2011 16:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that this is one my all time favorite fanfictions i have ever read for Eva. Personally, I am a huge AsukaXShinji fan and i feel that you did an extraordinay job evolving their characters including the huge build up for each of the pilots to overcome their separate issues and ultimately find love. I hope that you can continue this fic, I know that it must be hard to think of where to go after a huge piece like this. | Reviewed By: DarkCaspar On: December 13, 2010 17:28 PST
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I really like this story, and would like to see you continue it soon. I hope that you still want to continue it, and have the time to do so. I've been waiting for the next chapter for a year now 8P It's a great story | Reviewed By: Kuronosa On: July 17, 2009 13:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very, very well done. It's taken me 3, or maybe is it 4 days to read the entirety of what you have up right now, and you aren't quite done yet. I think that this is probably one of the best Post-Third-Impact fics that I've read, and probably the least smuttiest of all of the M/X rated ones that I've read on this area. Your lemons(Smut), are tastefully done. Not to many of them that this is a lemon fic, but not so few as to seem out of place. That...and the fact that you only go so far into the scene and allow us to imagine somethings gives you a better style. I absolutely love what you're doing with the Chosen's Eva training, turning into useful things that they can do for fun. Although that's probably why Asuka's still pretty strong. I could go on forever with everything, but as I am laking both time and room, I should end this soon. I have seen a few grammer/spelling errors(I remember seeing a quite, when it should've been quiet.) Overall, a wonderful piece of work so far, just finish it.
| Reviewed By: Daetor [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 04:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe not the best of chapters, but it was still quite entertaining and I don't know about other people but I laughed quite a bit at some parts. These chapters full of fluff work quite well for someone like me. I loved the WoW bashing, because I've seen how obsessive some people can get about it and the situation you described can be more common than it should be. Of course, WoW is only the figure head right now, it's not the only MMO type game that ruins lives these days... So, I'll be waiting for the next chapter while enjoying the fic. I wish I had more to say, but, there's nothing I could say that would make any difference, the fic is good as it is and I can't say that I want any changes in the writing style or the length or anything. Until next time. ^-^
| Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2009 17:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Been waiting for an update to this one. Again I find everything to flow quite well and it reads very nice. Not much if anything to criticize on. I find the journey to this point to be enjoyable and fun. I'm looking forward to more.
| Title: outstanding
Reviewed By: InversedInvsion On: April 01, 2009 23:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be one of the most original fan fictions of evangelion I have ever read. You have a good story by focusing on the children's life without the evas and the problems with everyday life, the best pairings aswell. The characters relationship with each other is perfect along how these characters do not seem OOC. I'm glad to hear that you have not abandoned this fic and look forward to future chapters. For a fan-fiction this good, waiting for new chapters will be worth it. and on a final note "Swim of Things" really is my favorite Fan-Fiction
| Title: You are continuing this, right?
Reviewed By: Ret Nuh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 14:29 PST
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I haven't abandoned this fic. Just been really busy these last few months and haven't felt like writing that much. I have started again and have half of the next chapter done so it is being worked on. I can't really say when the next chapter will come out though, too much stuff happening at one time right now for me to set a concrete date.
| Reviewed By: Jmb0 On: January 05, 2009 23:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are continuing this, right?
| Reviewed By: Daetor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 06:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's amusing that this is the first time I drop by at this site and I ran into this story. First time I ran into this on Darkscribes and there it only had 6 chapters I think and I really wanted to see more. When I ran into 33 chapters I knew that I really had a LOT of catching up to do right now. Personally I love this story, I'm just a sucker for this kind of mushy WAFF filled romance stories. I won't complain about OOC or anything like that, because that would be the most idiotic thing someone could do seeing as people do change in time and the way you worked on the characters certainly seems plausible. *laughs* I can definitely understand the rating, even if I mostly skip over the lemon parts (except when they're overtly sappy and romantic, I'm a sucker for romance stories, even though I'm a guy) Another thing I like about this whole thing is its length, good long stories are hard to find sometimes and me being the kind of person that likes to read, well, let's just say that even if short stories are good, they just can't compare with a good long story. Oh, I have to mention that I'm completely in agreement with your depiction of Kaworu, I think you're the only one that pulled that off really. Yes, he might have been all lovey dovey for real, but I believe that in the series he was intentionally attempting to screw with Shinji's head, especially knowing what he had to do do complete the mission or whatever his true intentions were. So, bonus points all around for that one. We may never know the truth, but Anno left a lot of things open for the fans specifically to have them come up with their own answers. All in all, I loved this whole thing so far and I can't wait to get more of it. Good luck to ya with all of your work and I hope to see more soon as this is one story that definitely deserves to be finished.
| Reviewed By: Cloud1014 On: September 29, 2008 20:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
---Nice update, and I like how you handled Kaede. What's next?
| Reviewed By: bigguy1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 02:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome
| Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 12:04 PDT
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Another fine chapter. The trip was a great idea and I loved the interactions between everyone, including Li-mei's vengance. Well written and very enjoyable.
| Reviewed By: XDorsaiX On: August 03, 2008 10:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is quite possible the best Evangelion fic ever written, period. It has all the best pairings and the writing style is superb. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 19:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has been a total joy to read from the start. It has been very interesting to watch the relationships and characters grow throughout the chapters. I find it very well written with few if any errors. I must admit I find myself getting a bit impaitent for any updates you make. I'm looking forward to where you take this and how you round things out. I'm also curious if you are ever going to end this one ;) No hurry on my part because the number of paths that you can take from your writing is astounding. Keep up the good work. Keep writing along.
| Reviewed By: mcgahr On: June 29, 2008 01:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Discoveried your story last week, had a big week catching up and enjoyed every aspect :-). Impress with your ability to plan & develope your story lines over many chapters, impressed with your effort to reference different cultures (Japannese, German & USA), impressed and grateful with your dedication to writing such quality & quantily of pross on a regular schedule. Off to reread the story and wait your next chapter
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