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Title: Purity Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner *Offline* On: April 03, 2006 07:02 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow. Kagome's has one hell of an attitude! Can this be a Hiei/Kagome pairing?
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 10:40 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: ryu-lover On: April 01, 2006 10:37 CST Comment/Review: I like the pairings you've picked. I also like Yusuke's thoughts on the room needing redecorated. I take it sparks are going to fly?
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Title: KEEP GOING Reviewed By: hiei_kagome_kurama-yoko_4ever31 On: March 31, 2006 21:48 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: o pls continue because i just luved it very much
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Title: Didn't read yet Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 14:49 CST Comment/Review: Oh no! I didn't read this story, but I read your notes, and I want this as a Hiei/Kagome story! PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 14:22 CST Comment/Review: I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 12:48 CST Comment/Review: PPS.... I don't know why but I've never got'n into the yusuke/kagome fics. I HATE that paring. I don't even think yusuke is hot! His head looks deformed. sorry... kind of like seph from FF. he's hot and all but his head looks weird.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 12:45 CST Comment/Review: ps.... have it be Hiei/Kagome. And the reviewer under me is just being mean. But sort of true... I didn't think one of the flashbacks were a flashback either.... sorry...
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 12:41 CST Comment/Review: Oh come on! You can't just leave off there! Update!!!
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Reviewed By: WolfJade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 18:22 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Well, my one major fault with your writing is the number of flashbacks. You don't need to so many. When I was reading it I didn't even realize it was a flashback, even though I did see the flashback sign thingy. So in the future when you write you don't need to put 'flashback' there. The flashbacks are fine on their own like they are happening right then. Now another part I have an issue with, I think your going way to fast with how things are going. If you had had Kagome stay with her evil mother for longer it would have given more depth to the story. It just seems as if you want every part of the prophecy completed quickly when it would probably be best to let it go slower. Prophecies are meant to take a long time, and I agree that sixteen years is a long time but hardly anything with the prophecy happened in those years except for the evil. But when she turned sixteen everthing has been happening way to quickly in my perspective and frankly it just makes the story seem dull and boring. But it has potentional. I don't want you to take this the wrong way. I'm enjoying the story, there are just so many plot threads that should be expanded on and not ended abrubtly. Okay, now for one of the real reason I'm reviewing this. I've never enjoyed a Hiei/Kagome or even Yusuke/Kagome. I'm a Kagome/Kurama and sometimes Kurama/Youko/Kagome shipper. So I guess I'm voting for that. I think you or some other author said something about their being a lot of Kurama/Kagome stories on here, but all I seem to find are Hiei/Kagome which, no offense to those who like that shipper, I would probably never ever read. Of course in my opinion it's always up to the author to choose the shipper. I don't think it's always a good idea for an author to write a shipper she doesn't believe in or like for that matter. Keep up the good work. I hope I wasn't in any way a nuisence or even cruel. I just have a lot to say.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 15:30 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really loved it! Keep u the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 11:05 CST Comment/Review: HIEI/KAGOME --- hm... could be Yusuke, his mom is nice enough... despite the drinking... But my bet's on Kurama. His mom seemed like a sweet lady. Plus, with her staying at Kuramas place, shed be more likely to meet Hiei. Cause I doubt Hiei hangs around Yusuke's much. In case Im right................... Black tanktop that says in white writing "Insane but cute, so Im worth it." or "If you can read this... stop staring at my chest." either one, your pick. & Black pants, drawstring, snug (but low) around the waist & semi-baggy on the legs. LOVE THE STORY!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!! PLEASE ^-^
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Reviewed By: Kagome4Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 22:31 CST Comment/Review: Good story
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Title: KEEP GOING Reviewed By: yusuke_kagome_karama_4ever31(not loggin) On: February 25, 2006 20:15 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hiei/Kag/Yusuke! please and please update cause i just love the story
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Reviewed By: DragonsDarknessFlame On: February 25, 2006 16:41 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I think its Yusuke and i still say it should be a Kag/Hiei pairing there perfect for each other (well in my opinon that is) I really love this story update soon please!
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