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Reviewed By: Latch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 09:48 CST
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I don't... understand how this only has 14 reviews? It's so unbelievably well written. I literally did a double take at then number, believing surely there was a number I had missed out in front. I'm almost horrified to see that I was mistaken. I hope you have more confidence in your writing that a number displayed by reviews. This was an absolutely amazing story. Very well written, with a fabulous character development. Your style is writing is truly enviable, and allows one to sink fully into the story. I ended up burying my face in my hands, to stop from laughing loud enough to wake the neighbors a few times. I really, really like the place that you ended it as well. You have such a sure grasp of places and characterizations and a way word words. I find it very, very difficult to leave reviews at all, and I'm sorry for that when I find amazing stories like this. I dont have the best grasp on conveying to others my good opinion. I recognize that I'm probably failing to impress upon you just how wonderful this story it. So.. any warm fizzies that you're getting from this review; multiply them by three. Maybe four, if you're in a good mood. That might, hopefully, show you the depth of how much I truly loved this story. ♥
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Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i'm sooooooooo way late w/ my review but i'll just say the same thing. i love it, you almost broke my heart when you ended it but when i saw that there was going to be another story, i cheered!! this was great, i enjoyed it to the fullest and its totally one of my favorite fics of all time!!
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Title: woo
Reviewed By: Honey Nut Loop [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 18:35 CDT
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Started reading this on adultfan ages ago. Just found it again. It got rather long and it took me all evening but i've finished the lot. Love it. Can't wait for the sequel, that is if you haven't already started it *runs off to check*
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Reviewed By: Mally [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 02:50 CDT
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*Cries* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write the sequel now!!!! ohh so sweet! *sniffles* i want more! youve rekindled my love of sei/squ!!! ill so hunt u down if u dont keep writing! *begs* good work!!
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Reviewed By: Varchess_Sniper On: April 02, 2006 04:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was fantastic, i really loved reading it. There are a few gramatical/spelling errors in there but - who cares! It didn't affect the meaning. It was totally based on the relationship (*squee!) and yet still had so many other well developed characters and little side-plots to keep it enthralling. Well done!
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Reviewed By: S On: March 19, 2006 17:06 CST
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Oh. My. God. That's really all I can say to sum up my general feelings about this. Most excellent- your skill astounds me, especially when I looked at the dates all of this was posted on. How can you write so well, and such a wonderfully long story in such a short period of time!? This HAS to be one of the best fanfics I've read for SeiferSquall! It was so cute! I just love what you did with them- very in character, very believeable, and they were all oh-so-loveable. (Or, in Squall's case from Seifer's POV, oh-so-fuckable) I loved this story- please do write a sequal! I'm surprised that you don't have more reviews for this story- who wouldn't want to sing its praises after reading it?! This is definately worth quite a few rereads- again, please write sequal! I honestly have no clue what to say about it- no word seems strong enough to convey my absolute love of this story! (One of my favorite parts was when Seifer and Irvine saved Squall and the Seifer taught Epson a lesson. Well-deserved lesson too!) You're a very very talented writer- looking forward to reading more from you in the (near?) future! ^_^
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Reviewed By: margyy On: March 16, 2006 04:33 CST
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aww that was soo good :) i cant wait till the sequel!! :D
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat DD On: March 10, 2006 18:59 CST
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Okay it took several hours a day for one week but I finally read it all. I don't know what to say, wonderful and decent come to mind. There are moments I didn't like, things added that would have been better without but overall I can't say I don't like this story, even if I didn't like we didn't get the shower sex. Don't you know thats the best sex?! That and Zell is hardly in it, his part was the smallest of all and since you made such an effort to involve everyone its dissapointing. And in all truth chapter 45 was my favorite. I always almost sad when it turned out the way it did at the end. If it became the true ending I think I would have cried and any story to get me emotion is something extrodinary. All the nit picking and jeers aside I really like this story and the characters, at times there is a little OOCness but with the romantics that girls (and boys) can be I think thats a good thing.
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Reviewed By: margyy On: March 08, 2006 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! That was SOOO good! that "helping hand" chapter was..whoow.. i almost cried! it was soo sad! butr im happy it was a dream ^^; this fanfic is sooo gooood! i lov it! ur the best!
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Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not totally sure what magicalness the 5th reviewer is speaking of but I think that Seifer is perfect in this story and so is everyone else. love it all. one of the best stories ever...I don't know how many times you wanna hear it from me but here it is again. You're awesome and I look forward to the next installment of this wonderful story!! yay, luv blizz
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Reviewed By: margyy On: February 23, 2006 04:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is SOOOO GOOD! ^0^ i really love it, i have to say its probly one of the best SeiferxSquall fics i hav read :) i love it completly, except for one thing.. >.< in alot of other fic with Seifer that have happened after the war, he usally has some sort of wierd magical-ness left over from Ultimicia.. it would be really cool if youy brought that it ^_^ but anyways, great job and i hope you update soon! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Kikvws On: February 22, 2006 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! I've seen this fic a couple other places, and I can't get enough of it. Great play of dialogue between Seifie and Squall; very, very IC. And smashing sex between them, as we all know it would have to be *drool*. Also loving the grey area of Rinoa-bashing minus the actual bashing. She comes across as a real human being who made a mistake, not the way she's usually painted in fics as being the root of all evil. Granted, I love those fics, too, though ^_^ Anyway, I think you've really painted Rinoa as a really believable character, especially melding personality traits that obviously come through in the game with your own tidbits to *cringe* actually make her easier to empathize with. Nice, easy-to-read, descriptive language that sucked me in the moment I started reading; and could there be anything better than nearly daily updates? All in all, I adore this fic and am looking forward to seeing more from you!
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Reviewed By: Blizz On: February 21, 2006 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you make my day so very happy every time I see an update from you. i love it all, the love, the little cute fights, the writing and description, everything is perfect. if i had you chained up and under my command, i'd have you write forever :P of course i'd definately draw you some squall and seifer goodness :) keep up the outstanding job and continue soon. luv blizzardangel
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Reviewed By: stardragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I've enjoyed reading your story. Your writing style is good. I am looking forward to see where your plot will take you (and the FFVIII gang). Keep up the good work. :-)
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Reviewed By: kikvws On: February 15, 2006 22:52 CST
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I love this fic to death! Excellent, outstanding job keeping us readers on our toes and lulling into a false sense of security. Always ready to gobble up more of this lovely fic!!!
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