| "Protecting Home" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 23:04 CDT
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*giggling* Go Youko X3 I'm so glad they mated
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Reviewed By: Bluesavorqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice bondings but i need to see you write more because its getting interesting and my nerves are going haywire
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Title: ch 16?
Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 21:04 CDT
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very good. i really like the description, though it was kind of short. please update soon!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 00:30 CDT
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very nice. the relationship between selena and kurama doesnt seem as forboding as before. The plot seems to be thickening. please update soon
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki (not logged in) On: July 13, 2006 15:02 CDT
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YAY X3 It's a cool fight^^
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Reviewed By: critical eye [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 16:55 CDT
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Not bad but there are also some things I don´t like. First why would the human hating Sesshoumaru mate with his human ward who he raised all on his own? OOC! It´s like Kagome mating with Shippo! I just hate the usual pairings, it shows absolutely no originality. And your own character is to perfect- sreams like Mary Sue! Youko is also OOC, he is a cold, murdering thief despite how many authors here on MM describe him otherwise just to fit him better in their idiotic fics. Sorry but it´s just too hard to find a really good crossover with IY/YYH were the characters are everything but not what they really are.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 10:56 CDT
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Yay =3 Things are starting to heat up^^ Plz update asap
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea (not logged in) On: June 09, 2006 01:54 CDT
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very nice chapter. plz update soon !! ^^
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 17:38 CDT
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YAY^^ I love it =3 you know what to do.... update :)
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki (not logged on) On: May 25, 2006 15:36 CDT
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Who is he!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? Plz update and stop leaving us in the dark *puppy eyes with a puppy pout*
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 18:51 CDT
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awsome story, please update soon!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 20:05 CDT
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Oh oh oh!!!! Is Tsume her former mate!? PLZ continue I love it^^
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 17:01 CDT
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lmao this is rich :3 Plz continue.
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Reviewed By: yay4air (not logged in) On: April 24, 2006 16:45 CDT
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i love it!! Youko seems a bit obsessed though. But you did a very good job with keeping inuyasha in the story, especially with kagome. most fics just cast inuyasha out of kagomes life. anywayz awsome story, please update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 22:49 CDT
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LMAO
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