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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 00:40 CDT
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the plot is so thick i can't even tell what is going to happen. I definitly didnt' expect that little exchange between inu and kags.. hmmm very interesting. I was wondering when naraku wouldn't show his ugly face lol!! Jsut liek naraku to get everyone else to do his work for him hehe. Update soon please!
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Title: Errrr!
Reviewed By: Aya Kazeki On: July 11, 2006 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhh! You are WAY too good at this cliffy thing! But I love it! Keep up the GREAT work!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 22:47 CDT
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great new chapter. can't wait for the next one!! Keep on writting I can't wait to see just what Kik. has in store for my fav. couple!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: July 10, 2006 20:14 CDT
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Awww....Inuyasha hugged her. That's so smuffy that it made me smile. can't wait forthe next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Braden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 15:54 CDT
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Awe, thanks for using my quote! I think I might start doing that too... Soo, 12 days, huh? I know you; you're gonna wait 'til the last day they have to solve the mystery(sp?), blah blah blah. Everybody does it. Don't make Kagome leave! It just got to the good part! *pouts* I just got back from the beach, so I'm gonna take some down-time before I write anything, okay? ^-^ Guess what? I've got something for ya! It's a muse (if you've ever read YoukaiYume's stories, you'd know what I'm talking about)! It's a cross between a cat and an eagle. I'm not that great with animals, but I could draw it for you to let you see what it looks like! You can pick out a name on this site: http://baby-names.adoption.com/origin/japanese.html This one's great 'cause it has the meanings of the names too! TTYL! ~*Kitsune_Magic_1*~
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Reviewed By: Selenide88 On: June 23, 2006 21:03 CDT
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Damn! So Kagome is actually considering acting upon Inuyasha's previous words.... terrible. Oh well though, makes for a good cliffie! Haha, I'm glad you updated! I'm very eager to see where this all leads, perhaps someone will stop Kagome... hmm? :D Well, 'til your next update! Take it easy!! -Selenide
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: June 23, 2006 16:16 CDT
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NOOO!!!! 12 days left. kagome better find the purest act before they die.
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon *Oh no i forgot to log in sorry my bad meant to but forgot also read my stories MUHAHAHAHAHAHA* On: June 23, 2006 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
White Wolf of the Moon: Well at any second in this story it has made me wonder one thing *pauses for a second* Wolf: Don't leave her hangin. White Wolf of the Moon: *hits him on the head with a hammer* Was I finnished. Wolf: *hides in a corner* Sorry master. White Wolf of the Moon: Now where was I. Loup: I dunno. White Wolf of the Moon: Shut-up *fires my patentend hit and no miss rocket* Loup: *runs like a chicken with its head cut off* Call them off call them off. White Wolf of the Moon: No you deserve it for *gets interupted by Ray* Ray: Where's my ice-cream. White Wolf of the Moon: *tries a rope around the freezer and hangs it over a fiery pit of death* Ray: NOOOOOOO *tries to get the frezer* Sita: Don't worry i got ya *Jumps on the frezer and cuts the rope* Ray: You idiot *then they fall down the hole* *5 minutes later* White Wolf of the Moon: We are here to honor the last moments of Ray and Sita. Julia: Yes she's dead *gets hit by a flying hammer* White Wolf of the Moon: NOw to honor their finaly wishes i shall bring their bodys back to life and let them live it again. Sita: You idiot we aren't dead yet *jumps out of the hole with Ray* Ray: How could you. Ookami: Kill the creator. White Wolf of the Moon: Why did i have to let my brain run free. My brain: *pops out of my head* It's not that i just may have acidentaly gone to a crack house gotten drunk and possibly done alot of damage to myself. White Wolf of the Moon: I need a new brain I'll see you later after i get back from the Anything You Want but Nothing You Need Store *jumps out the window* Ookami: We may have made him lose what's left of his mind. White Wolf of the Moon: *jumps back through the window* I'm back from the surface of the sun. Loup: Yep he is way to far gone. White Wolf of the Moon: I have something to finish that i never got to now shut-up and let me start. Loup: Your hair's on fire. White Wolf of the Moon: *sees the fire and turns it to ice* Okay now to finish my first sentence i have found that Kagome will most likely never leave and fall in love with You-know-who. Wolf: You mean Volemort. White Wolf of the Moon: NO now shut-up. Also great story and can't wait till you update.
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Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 04:18 CDT
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OMG, OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!! I... must... read... MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great job i love it i love it i love it i LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! it is soo awesome!!!! I cant wait to see (or read, whatever) what Naraku has to say about Kagome being with Inuyasha *gets an EVIL grin* mwuahahahahahahaha *cough* ok now that im done with being evil for today *checks off being evil on list of things to do today* lol :D keep up the great work I am dieing to read the rest!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: page 13 On: June 23, 2006 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Good Good! Keep up on the updates it's a really good story!!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 23:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
ohh yay!! An update!! that made my day! Good chappie but i feel like narakus abotu to come rear his ugly head any second now..
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a captivating story. I really like your use of the "Beauty and the Beast" foundation. I am looking forward to new chapters!
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
White Wolf of the Moon: Don't worry about your chapters being short at least you update me haven't in a while i need to i will soon stop hassling me. Loup: The creators mind has left the building. My Brain: Damn someone noticed *flies back to my head* Wolf: What the hell is going on here. Ookami: we were giving a review but our master has lost his mind. Sita: That really is the understatement of the year. Ray: I totally agree. White Wolf of the Moon: Just for all of those comments I shall do this * puts my hands on my head and begins thought making* Loup: Everyone run he's making another creation *jumps out the window* Wolf: We must stop him. Sita: No let him do it we need some more people around here. White Wolf of the Moon: And Eureka it is done everybody welcome my new creation Julia she is the first witch i have created. Julia: Why me why did he have to do it *looks at me* I hate you now die *pulls out a bazooka and a freeze ray and fires at me* White Wolf of the Moon: *runs away* This creation is a memory of you and also i forgot to tell you this story was great *runs into the sunset* Loup: He's leaving us again. Sita: Let him go. Wolf: *checks his bag* He took all the cookies again. Sita: Kill him *runs after me* My Brain: He never should have let his imagination run free.
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Title: Eee!
Reviewed By: Selenide88 On: June 10, 2006 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha, wonderful as usual! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!! Aw, I'm glad that you're beginning to show a softer side to the rough hanyou, he can be damn arrogant/stubborn sometimes. Anyway, I'm desperately awaiting your next update!!! Great Job! :D take it easy!
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