Reviewed By: N_Yah On: January 07, 2003 08:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, not only is this a pathetic half-assed attempt at a story, but its also a nonsensical, paedophilliac, peice of utter horse crap.
You should feel proud as a writer, thats assuming of course that your sole purpose of writing this fic was to motivate your auidiance to hate/wish to maim you.
I could go on and give more detailed reasons as to why this is a blight on the internet, but frankly I doubt anyone would read past the first few sentances anyway. That and I don't want to give you the dubious honour of having a review longer than your fic.
-N_Yah |
