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Title: From Todesengel
Reviewed By: To Things of Minds On: July 22, 2006 17:49 EDT
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Dear Thingsofminds. I'm glad that my story could touch you and that to some extent, you could relate and understand the characters. You seem like a very interesting person and I would very much enjoy further contact with you. Please feel free to email me at FlatterMeRotten@aol.com Thank you and please contact me if you read this.
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Reviewed By: thingsofminds On: July 22, 2006 12:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been by far one of the best fanfics i have ever read and believe me when i say i have read a lot of them.I'm a lot like Trunks except for the drugs i'm exactly like what he was.The only difference being i don't have someone to love or a friend who gives two fucks about it to try and help me.Mind you i do realize i need help it's not normal to feel such a form of detachment or joy when i hurt people emotionally, but what's the point in changing when i have no one to do it for?.Honestly speaking i think of dying every other day and have attempted suicide about 3 times already, but of course i'm too much of a coward to even do that i would be doing the world a favor anyways.Truly i'm a disgusting creature feeling sorry for myself all the time of course nobody has to know about that.Thanks for the story it was worth reading, it actually conveyed something besides the sex.
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Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: vegetachik7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 22:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know if my words can even describe the absolute awe I am feeling toward this story. I have NEVER read a fanfiction that has brought me to tears before, but Strong Heart has done. The symbols, situations, details, characters, and EVERYTHING was just astounding. I loved...LOVED the comparisons between the Trunks. It's amazing how similar Trunks is to Vegeta..or how he used to be. I was shocked by the father/son relationship and all the hardships the characters had to go through dealing with Trunks. The descriptions of scenery was so spellbinding. When Trunks' heart is finally opened, I was drawn into his world as he saw beauty for once. As I read, I was absolutely sucked in as Trunks treated others so cold-heartedly, but it was written so perfectly. I could keep going on and on. Each character had his or her own unique relationship and situation with Trunks. Through his cold actions, he changed those around him, and then,he was ultimately changed in the end. Ah, the end. My heart litteraly stopped when Bulma tells Trunks about Mirai. I actually felt a shrill of terror at the haunting words! The plot, set-up, and planning of this story is genius and I am blown away by your writing style(as usual) and awesome ideas. Great, perfect...I have to stop because this will never end. Amazing!
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Title: Heart Stoping
Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 18:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I started reading this story I wasn't totally sure I was going to like it but I did. Life is always filled with hurt, even love is. This story is a masterful blending of lost and awaking, realtiy and the space beyond this life time. I was competely drawn into you words. (dispite the formating troubles MM is clearly having). It's imposbale to detail to you how this tory made me feel and it DID make me feel. Pain, relife, anger and longing. The ending put a cap on everything in a way that makes you sit back and say "Dear Gods...." There is a glaring lesson that you covered so perfectly, nothing worth havig comes easily. You must fight, you must be willing to put your own heart on the line. Coldness will leave you suffering in dark lonelyness in the end. Thank you for writting this. ~Wind to your Wings, Kethry~
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Reviewed By: Chloe On: April 11, 2006 04:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see I'm not the only one who cried the whole way through that last chapter. Wow. The end hasn't sunk in yet at all. I need to find some tissues now. Um... I will probably be back later to make a more useful review, but for now, just... Um... No words left. Wow. More later...
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Title: Good one!!
Reviewed By: MAYLINE On: March 31, 2006 14:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I not into reading yaoi oriented stories...but this one was awsome! Even the plot of the story was too good to not get a read...most of the things that heppened here shcked me..although that at some point I was going to get crazy by the gore of some chapters,,,specially David's case...but the final chapter...OH MY GOD...I CRIED AL THE WAY WHILE READING IT!!!! Is hard for me to cry whith a story and you made it...congratulations!!!
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Reviewed By: anz On: March 20, 2006 08:23 EST
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explosive...just one question....? trunks says.."the dragon saw to that..." what exactly does that statement mean? other than that ...very explosive~!
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: March 18, 2006 19:04 EST
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Beautiful.
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Title: Unexpected
Reviewed By: Teera On: March 18, 2006 17:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn girl..that just blew me away..As I said before, I WILL have to revisit this story because there's so many things I haven't fully grasped..the words you write, they are so beautifully written and they describe destruction in the most gorgeous ways..ways I can't even begin to imagine. And not to mention how shocking the ending was..Damn..I feel, awestruck because it's like, oh my God..This story inspires me to be better; it's just stunning and leaves me in amazement..like, okay, I have to go back and fully understand this..
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: March 04, 2006 17:41 EST
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Hey great to see you're posting here while AFF doing its thing. You got more love on this site than I thought, I thought maybe people would be FREAKING OUT! Hahaha! Anyway this is great even though I've read it all before you should post everything here in the mean time, give us all something good to read. Thanks
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Title: @.@
Reviewed By: PINAS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 15:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THATS STORY IS FUCKING SWEET. KEEP ON WRITING.
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Title: jljljl
Reviewed By: Awesome On: February 11, 2006 10:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: 651484654 On: February 10, 2006 23:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue.... I love it already
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Title: Amused as Hell
Reviewed By: Bruces_Girl On: February 10, 2006 15:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew I'd find you somewhere! I'm gonna review it here too because this story is so fucking awesome. I've never seen a story that catches my eye like this one does! I'm posting Breath of Sorrow here too. I can't stand it anymore!!!
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Title: O.O.O.O.O
Reviewed By: lolololove On: February 09, 2006 17:28 EST
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WHAT THE FUCK!!!!! O.O
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