| "Bodyguard" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] |
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Title: ; _ ; Thank You soooo much!
Reviewed By: XxRuler_of_the_DarknessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
; _ ; THANK YOU!!!! I'm soo happy you updated!please update again soon!!
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Reviewed By: @___@ On: May 27, 2007 02:50 CDT
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This is a freaking awesome fic!! Please update soon and some of your other stories ^^
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 23:29 CDT
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It's been a while yes, but you've more than made up for it!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 21:21 CDT
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OMG!!!! I loved it, and Naraku finally knows what it's like to do someone else's dirty work. HA! I love it! *sits up and begs* More please!
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Reviewed By: pupp [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 16:14 CDT
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*glare* YOU must UPDATE NOW!!!
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Reviewed By: GILLSTER On: March 16, 2007 19:27 CDT
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WTF,WTF,WTF,WTF,WTF,WTF, IS TAKING YOU SOOOO LONG ?????? HURRY UP AND UPDATE YOU DIDN'T UPDATE IN OVER AT LEAST 4 OR 5 MONTHS?! HURRY UP I'M WAITING!!------- BY THE WAY THE STORY IS REALLY REALLY GOOD 3>
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Reviewed By: rissa On: February 01, 2007 23:18 CST
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for the record,models don't always have to be pretty,like porn stars,or prostitutes,they just have to be unnaturally skinny.prostitutes just have to be really desperate,and porn stars just have to be willing to take off their clothes in front of a bunch of people. sorry about all that...um...Really good story!
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 08:58 CST
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I found your story like it alot. In the coming chapters will you explain the history between Naraku and Inuyasha? can't wait till the next update.
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ooohhhhh!!!!!i can't believe you just left off teh story at the best part!!! i hate you so much!! okay ! i take it back! please write antoher chapter and post it soon!!! i so want to find out what KAgoem does adn what happens next between them.!!! thanks bye^^
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Title: Nice Try
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 07:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I know this won't go over very well but I just can't read your story. I read the summary and loved the idea immediately. It is for the most part original or a mostly over looked plot. I had high hope for it but I was unable to get through the 1st chapter. I skimmed the 2nd. Your story is fine for those whom don't care about detail. But questions like: "What does Kagome's house look like?", "Why is Sango there?", and "What does Inuyasha look like since his true human self has black hair?". These are just the questions I had after reading half way. The dialouge could be better but that is not the problem. You take so much away from your story when you don't stop to describe things. This is not a script. We have to rely on you to make the atmospere. We don't even know we are in Kagome's house until you get to Inuyasha's introduction. The most describing you do is when you talk about his room, which by the way is a bit odd. Why would you live under the person you are supposed to protect? Across the hall or beside her is more logical. Like I said you will probably just brush this review off since 61 other people just don't care that your writing could be much better than you showed. And on the slim chance that your writing did get better during the later chpaters in this story, you need to go back and redo the earlier ones.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 10:12 CST
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Nice.... you're a bitch and you're mine. That'll go over well. lol. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: xAznPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's evil -_- i mean seriously kagome and naraku kissing? like ewwwwwwwww but anyways update soon!
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 22:13 CDT
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Poor Kagome and Inuyasha but Inuyasha should just tell her what's going on. It seems that because he's not telling her that's going to cause trouble.Please write a new chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_cute_doggy_ears [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 14:42 CDT
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Yay you updated story! Though it was short i still enjoyed it. Inuyasha better stop acting all mean! He's hurting Kagome ... though whatever those bad guys are after must be serious if he must distance himself from her, huh? Well update soon! Bye.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 12:55 CDT
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Damn well InuYashas just a plain dumbass ,huh?
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