| "Out of the Shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Whatsername [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 11:58 CST
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Okay, here is the reson til why i write here so much. I cant view the new reviews if I don't write something like this first. My computer is a bit fucked up =/
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Reviewed By: monkeyray On: March 20, 2006 06:01 CST
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it's fine, you can take as long as you like. it's your story! I was reading the end of the chapter, and I wondered why Anya didn't really get hurt during the fight...did she? I don't remember reading anything like that, and I'm curious...
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Whatsername [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 03:30 CST
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It has been a bit hectic this week and I haven't got a chance to write anything but it is on its way =)
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Reviewed By: monkeyray9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 17:10 CST
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I think the only think you might want to fix is grammar, but otherwise this has been going very well. If you can, try to use a program like MSWord to fix your spelling and grammar mistakes. ack, a cliffhanger! I can't wait to find out what will happen! ^_^
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Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: Whatsername [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 13:11 CST
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thanks for the reviews this far, though there haven't been any critisism, thay have encouraged me to continue
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Title: -
Reviewed By: monkeyray On: March 13, 2006 08:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry I haven't had time to read lately...but I just got myself up-to-date! Chapter 17 is truely exceptional, and I enjoyed reading everything you added since my last reveiw. I hope that you won't get too discouraged during your writing. Good Luck!
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Title: Okay, here is the deal
Reviewed By: Whatsername [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 14:56 CST
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I've noticed that there are some that have read the newer chapters. When you review, you don't even have to write anything. It really isn't that hard rate using the scale above here ^^ If its good enough too read but not to rate then I guess that I should just pack my stuff and leave, right? I still have my story, even if I don't write it down, in my head.
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Reviewed By: RoronoaGirl07 On: March 09, 2006 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love reading your story. Your writing is very interesting. I hope you keep writing because I love reading your story.
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Title: Super
Reviewed By: Shousan On: March 02, 2006 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww i realy love your story.. Please write the next chapter as soon as possible.. or even the whole story, very curious how it ends.. hihi. Just great
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Reviewed By: monkeyray On: March 02, 2006 09:04 CST
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I love the additions you made! The new teams and members you added are very nice, and everythings mysterious. Good work!
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Reviewed By: RoronoaZolosGirl On: March 02, 2006 08:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. You are a wonderful writer. I can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Talaeka.... On: February 25, 2006 13:55 CST
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ohh i love this story!!! you must update it very soon!!please
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: monkeyray9 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 08:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, i'm sorry for not reveiwing before! My computer screwed up...anyways, great fic! i can't wait to see what will happen next!
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Title: intersting idea
Reviewed By: TitusandDriger On: February 18, 2006 05:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the idea and this fic is good i love the hole kai being a loner bit
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Title: Hmm
Reviewed By: Whatsername [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 12:01 CST
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nothing's happened here yet.. ='( I'll just have to wait and see...
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