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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, those were some great chapters! Loved reading each and every line. Bravo, as always, on a job well done! ~Ang~
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My first time reviewing, since I just recently stumbled upon this story, via RhiannonoftheMoon. I just wanted to tell you that the originality of this story was great, and I ESPECIALLY love the twist of Kagome's immortality. Everyone else tries to make her immortal through the 'mating', but I think thats a ridiculous idea. The idea of Kagome, and ONLY Kagome becoming immortal because of the Shikon Jewel... genius. I also liked how these two didn't feel like they were rushed into being a couple. Yeah, it happened fast. But it seemed natural, and that's good enough for me! Sorry for the amazingly long post - I just had to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. As you said, I am now awaiting the best part.... Citrus, AHOY!
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Title: Ch. 16
Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Completely and totally AWESOME! This chapter simply rocked! Awesome job on the battle and I loved the descriptions and everything. Loved it, LOVED IT! Congrats on the nephew. :D He sounds like he's a cutie!
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 11:58 CST
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I love the way you write!!
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: December 08, 2006 06:56 CST
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First off congratulations on the little nephew! Second the battle scene was delicious fantastic! oO i loved it and Juria being trapped in the mirror...we'll i wouldn't want to be her but she derves it! and kagome was hilarious when she saw sess in that coat..oh yeah who wouldn't go crazy? lol can't wait for the next chapter and i'll be waiting patiently as always. ^^
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 01:49 CST
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It was a very good battle scene. I don't know how anyone can write those, they are so complex. You had a lot going on in this one and you kept your focus. I could visualize what was happening and often when a battle scene is written it is too hard to follow because it's easy for an author to get confused and muddle up the description. I enjoyed reading this. I was so surprised to see Kanna. I had forgotten all about her and one of my favourite parts of the story was her house. Go figure.
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 17:51 CST
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That was such an awsome chapter! And such a great line when sesshomaru told kouga that kagome was his not kouga's. Woo whoooo! go sess! again that was a GREAT chapter! Thankyou for the update! looking for the next one when you have time!
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Title: Great Job!!
Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you write action just as well as lemons..although I am not sure which is harder since I think both are just as hard to write. But it was amazingly clear and you could picture it happening just as it was written. Kana played an excelent role in this fic. Wonder where Kagura is....I like your stories with her in it. Well done chapter..cant wait for the heat now..tee hee...thanks for the update. Oh and congrats on the nephew..yay!
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 12:22 CST
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Yes!!! That was a great chapter! I loved the ending of that chapter too! "Can you keep up with this sesshomaru?" "Puh-l-eezee, Can you keep up with me, mutt?" THAT was SPECTACTULAR! *stands up clapping* Hooray for great authors! cookies and a round of captain morgan's all around!! (I know. wierd combo...oh well)
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Title: Ch. 15
Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, a new chapter! I was hoping to see an new chapter for this story when I saw the new story posted. Awesome chapter. I love how everything is coming together and I love how you have woven it so well. The dialogue, the descriptions... everything! I love it and I can't wait to see how the next chapter unfolds! Wonderful job, as always! Bravo!
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Title: OO
Reviewed By: Ladydot On: December 01, 2006 14:32 CST
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wow that was amazing! and just picture fluffy like that mentally...if only he was real...*drool! i can't wait at all for the next chapter its going to be amazing i just know it! Keep up the great work i'm forever your slave..Ladydot ^^
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Reviewed By: sweetness92490 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 00:04 CST
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love your story!! are you going to update??
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Title: please
Reviewed By: monk-miko On: November 12, 2006 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still waiting for that next chapter. I keep on coming to the story and hoping to find a chapter there waiting for me. I just can't wait anymore. Its killing me waiting for it. I just can't wait to see what happens to Kagome and will Sesshoumaru get to her in time. I'm thinking that Kagome has to much spiritual powers and they may have to go to the extreme to get them. I just need that chapter soon cause I'm just dieing for it. Hope to see one soon, I'll be looking for it.
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 12:42 CST
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yet AGAIN all of my favorite authors updated around the same timeframe. do you guys have like a secret organization or what? well anyway, I just baked GIANT batch of halloween cookies yesterday *holds out tray* Take one and pat yourself on the back for yet another beautifully written chapter.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: monk-miko On: October 16, 2006 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been waiting for this chapter for a long time. This one was great but short. I just hope that Kagome gets out safe and I wonder what they are going to do with her. This was the best chapter. Please write another soon cause I'll be waiting for it. This was just to good. Please write a long chapter next time cause that was the best
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