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"So Blue 2--Here We Stand" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ]
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 Title: great story!!
Reviewed By: v0uki [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 21, 2014 14:53 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved your story! and the others.. I didn't read finding peace yet..you must be the author in fanfiction.. I dont understand why you didn't publish this masterpiece in fanfiction.net. it is a little difficult in mediaminer to find stories.. I hope someday you will finish this!! I had great time reading it..
 Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: green integration [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 02, 2012 16:17 EST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved this and so blue! Not going to lie when I first read the first few chapters of so blue I nearly gave up what with there being no bv...I am so glad I stuck around because this story was just amazing! The dynamics of your story were just heart-breaking showing how losing one child affects the whole family! I loved your portrayal of vegeta, what with him never giving up on his son and I really felt as though they were cheated he was alive all along and on earth no doubt! And then when finally they found him and he was wished back for a moment in time everything, their little family was back and everything was perfect...but perfection only lasts for a moment and it was shattered! I also really felt for Bra, they neglected her which is such an abnormality as usually she is the treasured child, the one that breaks vegeta's hard exterior, but here it was the loss of their child that stopped them from really taking care of her how they should have! The bond between Bulma and vegeta was portrayed beautifully what with it fading, I almost felt like screaming at them to reconcile and oh god what is vegeta thinking at the end...I am dying to find out! I really hope that you come back and finish this...this is one of those stories on my top 10 that I am dying to see finished I would literally pay you to finish this! I would also love to see maybe a short fic that shows how BV initially got together, we catch glimpses here and there and the way you describe there story just sounds like it was amazing...that would be an epic fic, a prequel maybe (but hey just a suggestion!). But even if you don't I mostly just wanted to write this lengthy review to show you my appreciation of you amazing and heart-breaking writing! Thank-you I enjoyed reading all of it!
 Reviewed By: mini blue  On: December 26, 2010 12:39 EST
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Wow I fell in love with both so blue and so blue 2.. I read this story during xmas ... plz finish it would make my year of 2010..
 Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 07, 2010 03:17 EST
Comment/Review:
!!!!!!! its been so long... and you left it unfinished... :( I may cry myself to sleep... you have so much talent and this story is so wonderful. I hope maybe that you will come back to this. :)
 Reviewed By: lalalaa  On: March 15, 2008 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm surprised you're not on like a thousand reviews! I loved the original - and i love this one too! you're such a great writer!
 Reviewed By: justkizzmy  On: February 22, 2008 10:01 EST
Comment/Review:
awh you gotta update soon. This story is great! I normally don't leave reviews but like I said this story is one of the best ones I've read here. So can you update soon?
 Reviewed By: rachael12222  On: November 12, 2007 13:25 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
O M G. that's all I have to say.
 Reviewed By: LareBearr [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 03, 2007 02:48 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You have no idea how happy I was when I got the email saying you updated. lol. Omg~he's gone again?? Poor Vegeta. Ah, can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^
 Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Noukie  On: August 08, 2007 05:01 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awesome, I hope you continue soon. I check here regularly, I appreciate your story is so unique!
 Reviewed By: Free-sprit - not logged in  On: July 18, 2007 04:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
That's was just the missing piece - fineally they're 'together' again, Bulma and Vegeta I mean. Really do hope that you're gonan continue...!
 Reviewed By: Anouk  On: July 17, 2007 07:15 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Amazing! I hope you continue! :)
 Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 28, 2007 07:58 EDT
Comment/Review:
still here, still readin, still love it, keep it up. .)
 Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 09, 2007 23:43 EDT
Comment/Review:
hell yeah, you tel her maddox. love it, gotta go to bed, keep it up. :)
 Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 09, 2007 14:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
hey girl...you did great (once again)!! this story is getting better and better, although it's still a sad one *snif snif*. However, one thing, it seems that you forgot your punctuation marks or that they haven't been uploaded well.. but it was still really really good to read..so good job ;-) I'm waiting for the next chap... lovies EV
 Reviewed By: Happy Clam  On: April 29, 2007 12:27 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Beautiful! Heart-achingly, soul-stirringly beautiful! Excuse me, I'm going to get some kleenex now...
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