| "Better Things than You" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 20:03 CDT
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Wonderful story!!! I love victorian style romances and this is right up there with them. WHOO HOO!!!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 13:46 CDT
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really great story i love the jane austin feel of your story and am intrigued enough to keep reading!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 02:27 CDT
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Great chapter. Miroku is so funny. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Artic Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I love the story so far. It is going so good for you. Sorry about me taking so long to put out chapter 2 in 'Broken Shadows and Hidden Secrets' but I went to Canada for 2 weeks and had no axcess to a computer. I luckly write my story down so I got to finish chapter 2 writing it on paper. I will finish typing that chapter and I hope that you will review again for me. On subject--- PLEASE!!! update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: aznboi408 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the whole amazon thing,can't wait for inuyasha to catch up and take back kagome
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Reviewed By: aznboi408 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the whole amazon thing,can't wait for inuyasha to catch up and take back kagome
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 13:26 CDT
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Wow, I really didn't catch onto that FY moment..lol. Another great chapter, for a minute I thought Sesshomaru had a soft spot for Kagome, not in romantic terms, but friendly? I dunno...guess not though..lol. Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 22:00 CDT
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Great chapter, although I wish Inuyasha would have told Kagome's mother why he left her? lol oh well...I guess I can wait a bit more. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: mm-reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 14:15 CDT
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I don't understand why Miroku insists that Kagome dresses like a boy. The crew already knows she's a girl. What good does it do?
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 23:19 CDT
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Didn't seem boring to me. I'm guessing Kagome has ran away and onto Kouga's ship? lol. Well can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!
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Title: sobbing angel
Reviewed By: luv4inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story but it is so sad. whenever ir ead interesting stories i always try to imagine what happens next, but anyways....please update! i love this story. PS. im not from england or anything so im doing my best to understand the whole season thing. pretty please update!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 18:23 CST
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Yet another wonderful chapter. I'm glad Kagome has Miroku around, and I certainly don't feel bad for Inuyasha one bit. If they were to duel, I could only hope Miroku would kick his ass...haha. But I wonder what the real reason for Inuyasha leaving Kagome, was it what Miroku said? Well can't wait for more, update soon!
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 16:46 CST
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Based on your other reviews, I thinks its safe to say for everyone that this story is very intriguing indeed! I felt my heart grip when InuYasha and Kikyo trodded down the staircase... I love it so much, please continue your story. Till then~ ^_^
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Reviewed By: mm-reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 10:57 CST
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Interesting. Please keep writing. Duels became illegal before the early 1700s in England. If Miroku and Inuyasha duel and it becomes known or if one of them is killed, they or the survivor will have to leave the country to avoid prison and/or execution. I'm a fan of Regency novels and I find your story fun to read. I hope Kagome lets her anger sustain her as she does in the manga and she leaves London (as she runs back through the well in the manga) to get a grip on herself and prove that she is emotionally stronger than any one else (as she is in the manga since they all look to her for comfort and support) and she returns to London with her head held high...and possibly a Mr. Wolf with blue eyes noticing her kindness and beauty ~_^. Miroku is fairly in-character as the protective big brother in your story too. He always tells Inuyasha what's what when the hanyou messes up with Kagome in the manga. I hope he was being sarcastic when he told Inuyasha that Kikyou was better than Kagome. That did not come across quite right to me. But good job with your story and I look forward to reading another chapter.
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 18:37 CST
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Aw poor Kagome. Very interesting story , I like it so far. Can't wait for more, please update soon!!
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