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Title: darkness
Reviewed By: dude910 On: February 24, 2006 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u are good i never read a fanfic that actually making love with another guy and thanks for the way u explained how her privates look like write another chapter continueing on when she is in the hot spring
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Title: Darkness
Reviewed By: gumdropz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 09:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you continue this? It looks like it's getting somewhere REALLY good!
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 08:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I know I reviewed on FF, but I just had to say, while the posted version on FF was good, this was by far a whole hell'of a lot better!!! I really enjoyed reading it again with out the editing. *sighs* Simply wonderful!!!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 08:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh!Damn,there like the energiser bunny!They keep going and going.Remainds me of someone.please continue.
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: February 22, 2006 20:54 CST
Comment/Review:
felt the need to read this again.....just thought i'd let you know. lol. (oh yeah, im still waiting!) *chuckles*
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Reviewed By: freakhorrorchick [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OWMG!!! That was a great begening!!1 I love long chapters so keep it up and update soon!!
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Title: Neisha
Reviewed By: Neisha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!That was absolutely AWESOME on sooooo many levels...I loved how you portrayed Sessy without even having to say who he was and I agree with the others that this would be a wonderful story to continue if you so chose, though I completely understand why you'd keep it as a one shot...it's simply amazing just as it is...My only hope is that one day my writing could be half as good as yours....Can't wait to read more of your works, and thank you for sending me the link to this story....I have you on author alert through ff.net but I am not sure how to do it on this site as I am still relatively new to it, but if you post more to this site that won't be posted to ff.net could you PLEASSSSE send me the link? Thanks again and I hope I get to read more soon.... Neisha
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Reviewed By: Damn On: February 21, 2006 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That waz so hot
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Reviewed By: AzureRain [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 20:50 CST
Comment/Review:
all i have to say is that you should so continue this story!
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Reviewed By: *Insane On: February 21, 2006 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. That was amazing. It's one of the best I've read in awhile. You really shoud continue and not just leave it at that.
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Title: Darkness
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 11:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Oh no no no!
Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: February 21, 2006 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You cannot leave it a one shot with an ending like that! *jaw drops, holds back giggles* You're trying to kill me aren't you? lmao! you could really run with this if you wanted, it's very well written. Keep up the wonderful work, I can't wait to see if you run with this or if you start another story!
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Reviewed By: ms potts On: February 21, 2006 08:32 CST
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this is an amazing oneshot!! pls im BEGGING you! turn in into a fic, pls?!! PLEASE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 01:45 CST
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Absolutely fucking brillant. I LOVED IT! I demand you write more chapters ;-;. Please?
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH COME ON!! DONT END IT THERE!! That was cruel, i wanna see kagome find out it was sesshy'kins!! I wanna see more fluffy-sama!! Whaahahahaa!! Update, or i'll never forgive you.
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