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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 23:25 EDT
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That explains that. But there's more to resolve.
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 15:34 EDT
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hoorah! new chapter, Kags seemed very authorative, I was scared XD
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Reviewed By: Kallipso Eclipse On: April 17, 2006 12:10 EDT
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I love it. That was a classic way to take care of the amazons have Kagome put them in there place. I can't wait to read more. What is Kagome and Ranma going to do about the Tendo's?
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Reviewed By: Vex The Warlord On: April 16, 2006 10:07 EDT
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I noticed another reading this one. Airen is misspelled.
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Title: Back again ne?
Reviewed By: inukoro On: April 14, 2006 23:19 EDT
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ahh i only just realise you have updated since i couldnt read your updates befor for some reason.. mayhap it was the computer. anyway i just remembered that you have not correct your little wrong. you still owe me a review XD. yeah i think thats it. oh and i think the last bit of the meeting with cologne was quite interesting.
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Title: I'm back....
Reviewed By: Strawberry Inuyasha On: April 14, 2006 20:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again. I just finished with the last two chapters... Well, there's one more fiancee to go. Akane... Maybe the crazy one. But.... I'm rather curious where this is all about to lead. I'll be keeping a look out. And doing research. I have a possible idea. SI.
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Reviewed By: Kammi On: April 14, 2006 18:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that this story has me tied down to it and tight! I love it! I can't even begin to say how interesting and VERY original this story is! See, I was one of the first people to join MM.org way back when and back then, the stories were of quality and people reviewed when they read. But as of late, the stories are all crappy with poor spelling and grammars skills and hardly no one reviews anymore. You are one of the exceptions! Great job! Keep up the good work! ~Kammi
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 08:06 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**opens mouth...closes it** Um... **continues doing fish impression** Ummm...... **shakes self** Wow.... I think my world just tilted on its axis. Kagome as one of the founders of the Amazons? I *hope* you're going to explain that more next time. If not, do a side story! It was a nice touch though, having Cologne be the one to decide that the "engagement" is over. Very well reasoned and thought out. And a good point - without Cologne's tricks, Shampoo would have had to retreat in defeat a long time ago. **giggles** I also got a kick in finding out that Cologne had a hand in her own defeat, so to speak, with the correspondence between she and Kagome. Poetic justice, that. I was glad to see the deeper definition of the "single soul" thing. I understood it in theory, but this helps a lot. Anyway, I must do some actual work now (since I am reading - and writing this review - on my work computer. **evil grin**), but I am looking forward to the next chapter - most definitely. I can't *wait* to see Akane (and the rest of the Tendo's) reaction to the news. As always, great chapter, and I am SOO looking forward to the next one!
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Reviewed By: Calamity - Queen of Cordite On: April 14, 2006 04:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still hangin' in there. It's a great Inuyasha story. Of course, like for some others, it stopped being a Ranma story for me when you removed the 1/2 part. As I said though, it's a great Inuyasha story. I tend to agree with Vex about the MWC thing. Calling them the "Nerima Wreckers" makes me thing of when my grandma tried to be hip and totally screwed up the coloquialism she was attempting to use. It is a bit distracting for the primarily Ranma fan. Lastly, don't listen to Mr. Axelrad. We work to gether developing my own stories and he's always trying to get me to leave cliffhangers, even to the point of having a rediculously short chapter to do so. He loves them, no matter what he says. :p Anyway, good work and thanks for the nearly religeous updates. Calamity
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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 04:20 EDT
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(sweatdrops at your reaction) Yay, the Amazons are out of Ranma's hair! Or are they?
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 02:07 EDT
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i am so happy... cologne got put her in her place, i have been dying for the old bat to be knocked down a few pegs for ages... she annoys me... update soon... kay i know you'll update tuesday but i just felt like saying that in hopes of an extra chapter :hint hint nudge nudge:
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Reviewed By: James Axelrad On: April 13, 2006 16:35 EDT
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great chapter i just wish you didn't leave it at a cliffhangerr thankfully, i am sure you will be putting out the next one within a week
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Reviewed By: Vex The Warlord On: April 13, 2006 11:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay. Your misuse of titles and names have been bothering me and we're gonna clear this up right now! Nerima Wreckers = The Nerima Wrecking Crew. Theres some more names you've been screwing up But i cant remember right now... When I Remember them I'll Inform you. Other then that a fairly good Fic. Dont be disappointed by my ratings. Im quite critical of all fanfictions.
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 11:19 EDT
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woohoo kags finally gets to meet one of the wreckers... this ought to be good... i cannot wait for the next chapter to be posted... good luck with finals mine aren't for another month but my theis is already becoming a problem... stupid argument won't turn out the way i want...grrr
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 07:57 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Probably thought you lost me there, didn't you? **winks** I left early last night because of my Yami no Matsuei DVDs (Must. Watch.), so I didn't see that you had updated until I got to work this morning. And yes, I am writing this review from my desk at work. @_@ Anyway..on to the review! Nice chapter, by the way. I liked the amount of intimacy you showed between Kagome and Ranma. She wawsn't trying to push herself on him (like some other women we could name!) when he was upset or anything. And I can see where it would be tough for him to be telling the fiancees that he has had it, and its all over. I am wondering why Kagome keeps looking at that old jewelry box for though, as well as to why she is going to go with him this time. I am sooooo looking forward to the answer. **grins** Anyway, you have fun with Hellsing plot bunnies and exams (if it makes you feel any better I'm in a business finance class right now, and hating every second of it), and I do look forward to your next chapter. Good luck on those exams!
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