| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Title: arrrrgh!!
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 22:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you kno..its wrong that ur sooo good at leaving us killer cliffhangers....im literally pulling my hair out to find out what Jilli is gonna say!!!! its a complete waste for me to ask u to update soon, since u do anyways...but still, I CANT WAIT!! LoL great fic btw....
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 20:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first time I've reviewed even though I've read all your Purity fanfics, save Purity (I feel bad...), and I HAVE to say that you are an amazing writer, you're plots and characters are so original and they seem to have a life of their own! Purity 3: Forever was the one that got me hooked, but my favourites areJustification and soon-to-be Shameless. The conflicts, whether they be man vs. man or man vs. himself (Cain and Gavin) have always turned out amazing and the results, awe-inspiring. The couples you put together are just so cute! I can't wait to read Evan's and Gunnar's. I'm frankly amazed that you've got these stories all plotted out in your head and that you're actually making all 12 or something (I can't remember the exact number). What I actually reviewed for is because I was wondering if you could give me the names of Toga's and Sierra's children. (I've got Gunnar and Coral.) I'm making a family tree. ^^ There are so many lines here and there, crisscrossing over thatta ways. It's confusing, but I love ALL the characters and they're relationships with the others and their mates. leeksandmisosoup ^^ P.S. I completely heart your "mating marks" and "inner youkai"s!
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Reviewed By: Hitomeshy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 19:42 PDT
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This is very suspenseful. I really want to know what happened that Christmas. Also, Gavin finally knew what aould happen to him when he doesn't take control of the beautiful things around him. Anyways, keep writing. I hope what Jillian says will help Gavin to tell her that he loves her and will give her that half diamond necklace that she so rightfully deserves. I'm still working on the pics. As soon as I get my hands on a scanner I'll post them. Bye!!
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Reviewed By: sweetsauve [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 15:17 PDT
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That is an evil cliffhanger!! Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 13:49 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO!!! This is the cruellest cliffhanger that I have ever seen, yet I am forced to appreciate your genius. Extremely well done, as always.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 12:29 PDT
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Oh you are so bad leaving me with that cliffy. I was getting so giddy when I realized that there wasn't anymore story. LOL. I'm on the edge of my seat I hope you update soon. ~Usagi
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 12:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! Thats so cute! And poor Gavvie...he had to run away to deal with his...problem! This was such a good chapter...can't wait to see how Jilli explains her absence that many years ago. Hopefully it'll strengthen their relationship...having the truth out i mean. Loved the update Sue! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 10:23 PDT
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All I can say right now is poor, poor Gavin. The man must be a saint for not touching Jillian before now. How did he survive all those years. Jeesh! I feel for him, I do, and I'm not even a guy. It also looks like he and Jillian are going to have "the talk"- the one they've been needing to have for years now. I forget, have you explained why Jillian withdrew from Gavin for those 2 years, or are we going to find that out soon? On a side note I'm wondering when Jillian is going to find out that she has a stalker. Somehow I don't think she's going to thank the men in her family for keeping that tid bit of information from her.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 10:22 PDT
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NOOOOOO!!! Why'd it have to stop there? That's so sad! EVIL CLIFF HANGERS!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kyasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 10:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh. What a cliffhanger. I'll be haunting my Inbox from now on. lol
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Reviewed By: xiamurgodx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 09:52 PDT
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`Anything for Gavvie . . .' she told herself . . . even if it meant breaking Jillian's heart all over again . . . I got sort of confused on that sentence. is jillian talking about herself, or was is she talking about breaking gavvie's heart again? Anyways, great chapter and thanks for sharing your stories with us readers.
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 07:26 PDT
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woa..."The Boner from hell"...LOL that was hilarious....u should have named the chapter that...LOL! poor Gavvie! hahaha...I'm glad they didn't have sex! They should get all the talking out of the way first...and HE FINALLY ASKED! its about time! but AAHHH! A CLIFFHANGER! Ur Evil! lol this a funny chapter...thnx for sharing..buh bye!
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Title: Me Again!
Reviewed By: InUyAsHaRlZ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 06:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm leaving this review, not for P:6, put for Justification. I do this because I like for you to know how much i simply adore your writing. Okay, on to review! P:4 was absolutely stunning, believe it or not i figured that Cain/Gin would be together before Kich/Belle. but, as always, you surprise and amaze me. Good Luck with all your gorgeous writing! InU PS- I'll start P:5 somewhere around in August, It seems i'll never catch up to you, Sue!
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Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 02:56 PDT
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Aww man what a cliff hanger hehe, i will be eagaerly checking my email every 5 min to see if y ou have updated for however long it takes you hehe. i cant wait till the next chapter, im sure you hear it enough but ill say it again. you rock at writing. untill the next chapter
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 22:08 PDT
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Aww, that was a really sweet ending! Hopefully this time Gavin doesn't say it was a mistake.
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