| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 18:43 PDT
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Aww that's so sweet of Gavvie...I just hope this Cody guy stays a good character.
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Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 18:05 PDT
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Man on man sorry i havent reviewed in a while. computer issues. This story is really starting to heat up. the whole not knowing who micky b is and y ou throwing these random people around im all jumpy like, is that him, is that guy him hehe. ANyhow i still think the setting is great as i live in Montana. i wonder if we wiill see anyplaces i know hehe. anyhow keep up the great work and we will see you the next chapter
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Title: Missed Reading Your Works
Reviewed By: crolynx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 13:57 PDT
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Hey Sue, Just got caught up after being moved around the world. Great work on Purity 5. This story is developing fast. Is Mickey B. someone that they already know? When will Jillian realize that she's being stalked? The fallouts gonna be huge ain't it. Miss having you Update on FF.net, but I understand your reasons. Thanks for the PDFs of your previous works. I really enjoyed being able to read them while traveling. Well I will anxiously await your next chapter. Ja ne, Crolynx ;p
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 13:19 PDT
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Yikes, this Mickey B character certainly knows what he's doing; that's just creepy though. If Gavin wasn't blood thirsty before, he is now lol. Anyways, the ending part with Waterspell scared me for a big, until he listened to Gavin...I thought that it'd be a re-run with what happened to is grandfather.
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Title: Good story :)
Reviewed By: Yukimi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 12:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, a great story. :) Thank you for sharing. I have one question that's been nagging me a bit. Nothing big mind you, as always you did an excellent job. I'm just wondering, from what I've seen in the anime and some of the manga, most of the creature youkai had tails... but you never mention any of the full youkai having tails... Just an idle curiosity. Not a complaint. As always, great original characters. Though Gin and Cain are my favorites so far :) Also, you mention Evan is going to be Purity 9... I'm wondering who 7 & 8 will be. Maybe Gunnar's in there somewhere? Any way, thanks again for continuing to post your stories and let all of us read them even though sometimes it's rough for you. Best of wishes and I'll keep reading as long as you keep writing.
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Title: Stunning...
Reviewed By: LadyinRed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 18:15 PDT
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Wow wow wow... your writing is intriguing, super original, your characterizations are so realistic that it commands attention. I am easily drawn into the emotions portrayed. Your thorough elucidation of the situations leave no questions... unless you want them to :) I just caught up with you after reading all of the other work you have posted here, and I must say your talent has held me captive for the last few weeks. I created an account just to review here... Outstanding, Breathtaking, and Amazing, may you continue to be inspired by whatever is is that grants you such fluidity and grace.
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 05:29 PDT
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You gotta be kidding me? I was wrong? And here I thought I was being clever...Great chapter, I'm sure this is not the last we will see of that Major guy...but I was wondering about how long this story will be and what other Purity characters will make an appearance, like those from Japan. Nice job,Peace out
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 19:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. That Mickey B is starting to piss me off. In a good way though. How did be become so obessed with Jili... poor girl. Gavin was really cute in this chapter. Keep up the good work! :D
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 01:23 PDT
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This is gonna be one of those stories where I wish I was in it so I could beat one of the main characters (Gavin in this case) over the head with a bedpan until he comes to his senses. The bedpan of course being the official Bludgeon of Love, replacing the wooden 2x4 by near-unanimous vote at the Worldwide Love Consortium of 1979. Preferred by four out of five dentists!
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 19:05 PDT
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Gavin makes me really sad... I hate the Major guy, he can just go burn in hell, cutting Gavin off like that...argh! Anyways...really like where this is going...anxiously awaiting your next update ! :P
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 18:57 PDT
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Aww, that chapter was sweet, but then sad at the end. Poor Gavvie, he needs a hug! Hmm, should we worry about this Major dude?
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 21:55 PDT
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Sess vs Inu - - - Bas vs Evan....hehe interesting....i hope these two end up working through their problems in a more productive way... You know what you have me doing NOW? after i read an update...I get this urge to go and find "more jilian and gavin" fics...but then i sadly realize that they are your creation...and i must wait for you to update...but in the end its ALL WORTH IT! I love your characters...they are all so unique...and they pose realistic personalities and real life situations that people can relate too...I JUST LOVE IT! thnk you for sharing!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 13:51 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heheheeh Ok this chapter is just want I needed. I'm sick again.(I swear sometime I could give Kagome a run for her money when it comes to sick days.) SO this chapter maybe me laugh and made me love Evan all the more. I really can't wait to read Evan's story and find out what happened between him and Bas. Well I hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 13:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel sorry for Evan... but then again Bas is right.... O.o Great Chapter! Cant wait for the next one. Ooo family tension. :P
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Reviewed By: sprsnc20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 00:45 PDT
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Wow, this story's really getting good. First the stalker, then Gavin's disaster at the bar, and now Evan's getting dissed by his own brother. Where have we seen that before. . .? I can't wait for Jilli's "therapy" to start. By the way, I learned something interesting a while ago and thought I would share it with you, though you may already know this. In Japanese marriages, the groom normally marries into the bride's family, taking her name as well. In this case, it doesn't really matter if InuYasha has a family name or not, since as soon as he marries Kagome he would take the name Higurashi. This isn't meant as criticism, I just thought you might be interested in knowing this bit of info. Anyway, great chapter and awesome story as always. Keep up the great work!
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