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| "Do You Really Know Me?" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Armina Skitty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where's the next chapter? I looked down and the next chapter wasn't there! I'm really enjoying this, you must continue. I like the way you added Naruto's whisker-marks btw, although sucks to be him in how he got them. Keep up the good work
| Reviewed By: randomHime *says die, not the story!* On: March 20, 2006 19:21 CST
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Hello, ignore my name, I really do like this story, because in a lot of au yaoi fics, its kinda like 'hey' 'hey' 'wanna @!?&' not thats theres anything wrong with that, its just im glad to see a fic where thet dont jump into the others pants as soon as they see it. i like how u switched the kyuubi with an abusive father, it makes sense...in a weird, dark way. but i really like it. however, pov is from a 1st person perspective. that pov u used, would be instead, location. I enjoy your writing style and hope you continue this fic. And yes, i will stalk u if u dont, using my pink ninja bunnies to hunt u down!!!!! Thats how good this fic is!
| Reviewed By: Setolover2 On: March 18, 2006 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I a few words to about this........I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON~~~~~~~! I also want to see what happens next. oh, and plz come to www.narutokun.net to become part of the chatroom, and i'm willing to talk about fanfictions with u. I'm a freedom of speech fanficiner myself. Ja ne!
| Reviewed By: nightsiren02 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 19:45 CST
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I only have one word to say...UPDATE!!!!! I really want to find out what happens.
| Reviewed By: loveless101 On: February 27, 2006 21:11 CST
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hey, i really like your story so far. not bad for ur first fic. keepup the good work and update soon.
| Reviewed By: bananagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 15:03 CST
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Dun dun dun .... this is a really good story so far! Please keep up the good work, and I'll be looking forward to your next update! ~ Banana Gurl
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