| "Fate of the Damned" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Title: omg I haven't reviewed since April o.O'
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: December 09, 2008 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Time sure does fly! More so for me when my family is in and out of the hospital ^^' Very sorry for not reviewing earlier! I actually had to reread this fic to remember what was happening! im so ashamed, do please forgive me for being an inattentive reader. I love where this is going so far and cant wait to see what happends at the dinner table, should I expect a food fight? (lol) Cant wait for the next chapter, please update soon, and merry christmas lest I forget ^^'
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Title: fate of the damned
Reviewed By: mystralwind [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm with the other reviewer's!!! A parting scene for the boys that makes the Vamps nearly wet themselves. A tentative hug (b/c of the fresh wounds)and a soft lingering kiss..lol Eat that Baku and Marik.. Now collect your slave and wipe the leaked semen from your pants before it gets sticky!! Neener. :P It would be soo hawt, I don't know if it fits with your plans..
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Title: fate of the damned
Reviewed By: mystralwind [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 14:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I left your review on ff.net this time. Thank you so much for the update! I'm pining away wondering if Baku will notice Ryou this chapter; all the feminine curves and appeal. lol I know Marik will see it, but since he hates that subservient personality we won't have to worry. I just know that stinker will want Malik nearby to ogle at. lol "Thank you for my gift, brother dear." lol Baku will probably see the clean blonde and notice how pretty he is as well, but again, the personality will be a turn off. Will Marik truly see the 'pretty' blond?? lol Hey, pretty is pretty. Anyone would notice. It's probably why all the other slaves whisper. Seto?? at the cook line?? Ewww bad.. He might hit on Ryou.. shudder* bad for both of them if Baku wants the boy.. It is Mokuba, right? The heir?? lol Who were the demon trio children? Ow, so many questions.. lol
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Title: Yay, you updated!
Reviewed By: Shut_Down_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 20:51 CDT
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lol, it's ok that not much happened. Sometimes you just need those sort of 'space-filler' chapters, right? Anyway, I really look forward to seeing how it all unravels. Good job!
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Title: Fate of the Damned ch 8
Reviewed By: mystralwind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still, a nice chapter. Poor Ryou, his future sure isn't looking great. Bakura likes the slaves submissive but he whipped Ry.. Maybe he did it just to preserve his image but he could have at least checked in on him. I guess that wouldn't do. That's probably why Otigi had the orders he did. LOL Malik is so asking for it but Marik seems to like him fiery. Funny how Otigi had those same orders regarding him. lol Marik has to break Malik I guess, but parting the boys should do it. I wish you'd allow the boys a parting hug, kiss scene that the vamps could witness before you separate them. So sad. :( To lose your best bud, brother, and person you may be falling for.
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Reviewed By: george16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
..I absolutely love your style of writing i fell in love with this fan fic and you as a writer ..i really can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: sglily [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 19:03 CDT
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Glad to see that this story hasn't been forgotten! Ryou was thinking quite a lot on his way to his "punishment"! ; ) Very interesting converastion/interaction between Malik and Lord Marik... Since my interest lies more so with the Ryou/Bakura relationship, I will be curious to see how you develop that since it appears that Lord Bakura has little if any respect for his human lookalike.
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Shut_Down_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ I do adore this story so much! I don't really have anything else to say, which is wierd because I usually have more than just one statement...Anyway, good job, I can't wait for more!
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Title: Update soon^^
Reviewed By: Ryou's succubi On: March 26, 2007 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so good^^ Thats made my day! =D thankyou! Update soon,if you don't thats fine^^ I just like reading what you have already posted its great =D Keep posting,I hope Ryou will be okay *huggles*
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Reviewed By: Shut_Down_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty please update?? I will luv you forever!!
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Title: You are amazing!
Reviewed By: Shut_Down_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG This story is amazing, I can't wait for more! T_T I don't want Malik and Ryou getting hurt, hope it's not THAT bad, anyway, I love this story so much, keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: ryoussuccubi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've been reading your fanfic for quite a while never got round to review it sorry.Anyway you have very orginal ideas and creativity.I think this fic is awesome and at the moment its my favourite fic.Please keep updating!your story rocks!^^
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Reviewed By: sglily - nli On: July 14, 2006 21:06 CDT
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I really like your story here about vampires, demons, and human slaves. Bakura is an evil bastard and his part is well written. I am really curious as to how you will have Bakura suddenly become interested in Ryou as something other than just another human slave to be looked down upon and harassed - I would assume through his son perhaps? I look forward to that moment! Well, if Bakura was a badass, Marik appears to be even worse. I thought it was amusing how Marik totally disregarded Ryou and tossed him aside like a used tissue without a second glance - instantly classifying Ryou as not his type. I guess that Ryou is making some sort of headway with Bakura's son if the little bastard actually felt remorse for hurting Ryou's feelings and/or making Ryou disappointed in him. Malik seemed to have a deathwish in this chapter! I look forward to reading more of your delightful story!
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Reviewed By: Dani Lynette On: July 14, 2006 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story althoe i REALLY feel bad for Ryou and Malik. Who is his mom anyway?? Thats been bugging me. Oh well i guess ill find out when you update!! BTW, UPDATE REALLY SOON, OK?!?!? I absolutely am addoring this story!!! I cant wait to read the next chappie so put it up soon, PLEASE!!!!! >_< Ja!!
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Reviewed By: kokosada [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 13:24 CDT
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*glare* If you don't update soon, I'll kick yer ass!!! *lunges, but Kara holds onto her ankles* Kara: Oh, no you don't. She still has to finish the story before you kill her. *gives an apologetic look* I'm sorry, but lately she's very peeved for no reason. OP: No reason? No reason?! I'll give you a reason! *throws computer mice, but blinks, when realizes what she's done* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!
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