| "The Tenoh's" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: unregistered On: February 12, 2009 01:16 CST
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yes so cute, totally needs to be updated
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Reviewed By: psp mario On: February 10, 2008 01:28 CST
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this story is so cute that I'm almost speechless, I am a huge H/M fan and the idea of the family meeting is great. Albeit slightly used, but not enough that it distracts from the story. I just hope you don't turn this into a "Meet the Parents" or "Meet the Fockers" parody that would suck! But I trust you not to do that. The idea for their meeting and and their love together is original and I love every word of your story. I cant wait for your next update. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Haruka_Michiru4evr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD I'm caught up in the story! Whats wrong with Michiru? Is it carried over from her flu of a few weeks ago? Does the relationship with Anji convince Haruka that her mom and family would be ok with H/M together?!? And will the cousin FINALLY see the obvious instead of going "oh they look pretty close..." The angst is killing me!!
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Reviewed By: Haruka_Michiru4evr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 23:11 CDT
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I always love a good Haruka/Michiru pairing ^^ They're my favorite characters in the series I love the story so far (just finished chapter 1 lol) and hope that you continue the H&M ^_^
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Title: so sweet!
Reviewed By: Hikaru-Rosered2 On: July 12, 2006 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hwat stuff mate! hehe hot story you got here. I really enjoy reading it and i hope that you up-date again ~VERY~ soon. now were to begin? 1) very sweet story, i havent read one like this befor. I also enjoy the pairing, but, its one that doesnt often change. 2) were did you come up with this idea? rating time! Style of Writing: I love your style of writing and the format. you make it very easy to read and thats important for someone like me, because you have spaces and your paragraphs dont clump up. which is a good thing! (has trouble staying with a story that has bad formating) Spelling and Grammer: Now, i know im not one to talk about spelling or grammer, but i did notice a few things that were not spelt correctly or the grammer was off a little. But you still got your point across and thats what counts. Originality/Creativity: Wonderful! great! Like i said befor very original and creative. I havent read a story like this befor and i have read alot of fan fiction!
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