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| "Banditos" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: Colddaye On: April 27, 2006 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so enjoying this! This is the best AU fic, hands down. I do like a good angst, but part of me wants the happy Hs/R... It's amazing the style and voice you've given to the characters - meshing the old west/zombie world with characters we're familiar with. The Madelyne/Caine excerpt confused me for a moment, if only because I read the updates once a weeks or so, and tend to forget certain points (like the Blood, Inc., moniker). Also, special kudos for writing the only fanfic that makes me scared to read it in the dark. I look forward to seeing how this plays out!
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: April 25, 2006 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So the he Caine was always talking about decided to be a her instead. And exactly how many kids does that man have? You know what I'm not even going to pretend I know what's going on, I'll just wait for explanations as they come. This chapter was heavy in the Virgil side which was great. The thing I love about Virgil is his morals, and does that boy have morals,I wonder how Richie is going to feel after he finds out about them. I was wondering if Blood Inc was going to meet up with Virgil and them again, I want to see some Ebon/Adam interaction, they're always good for some drama. Oh yeah I liked the way Ebon stood up for Shiv, we'll at least in his own way. I hope Charger's alright I don't like the sound of him having scartches. And you know the thing that sucks the thing that I hoped wouldn't happened happened, they're all sperated again. It was great, and sorry for my moving in to many directions.
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: April 24, 2006 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Caine? I can't believe it what is he doing over there? I thought Hotstreak said he was miles away. Thses guys just can't get a break can they? I feel something bad is about to happen. If Caine sees Hotstreak still alive and fighting the zombies it's only a matter of time before he's targeted. I hopr Richie isn't seperated form the others they just got united, and I hope Junior is sperated from the others. He seems like the type to know what needs to be done but doesn't do it just because he is that stubborn. I can't believe this friggin' cliffhanger, update soon:)
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: April 19, 2006 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang Hotstreak needs to get slapped, some romantic reunion. I can't believe him especially after what Richie told him before the zombies and after he saw him getting 'punished' you'd think he'd believe Richie. And that poor boy would rather be near an ass like Junior then someone like Virgil and Adam, he's all messed up and I have to put blame on the Alvas and now Hotstreak. I can't wait to see what happens when Hotsreak gets back, and I do hope Richie gets better, hopefully no turning for him. If Virgil knew what that bed he was laying on was used at I could only hope he would have knocked some sense into Hotstreak. And I do hope Sharon is okay, she's the strong type of woman she can make it. Oh yeah I wonder what Richie thought about that whole lavender thing, and will Hotstreak ever give him his books back?
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: April 19, 2006 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He can't turn, it's not fair. Besides he wasn't bit by a zombie he was bit by some weird possessed woman. Besides if he were to turn wouldn't he have done it a while ago along with the other two girls. And friggin' Junior that boy I swear. Now that Richie has a purpose he wants to use him, but apparently he was that important if he left him behind. What the heck was that cloud and why did those riders let Richie live, was it because he already smelled died or something?
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: April 17, 2006 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where are those zombies headed? I hope it's not toward the town, I mean I don't like Alva's group but I'm starting to like Teresa and Jessie. It's like Teresa is the motherly figure and Jessie and Richie are the kids, that's the impression I got from the beginning part. Friggin' Junior I felt like hitting him every time he swung his hand. As for those beast things I'm wondering were they came from. For some reason I can't believe they would have come from the same person as the zombies, I mean why make a creature that can benefit those you are hunting? As always I'm loving it and I have no idea if I should be joyful or cursing your description use, it gets gory I tell you what.
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: April 17, 2006 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that was crazy. What the heck possessed her? Was it the spirit of Caine(that's his name right?) or was it some soul that was fed on from the zombies? It weird the way the other girls seem to resent Richie but at the same time they included him in their circle. I'm so glade to that Richie finally made an appearance. There's three groups I'm following now there's Richie's, Hotstreak's, and Virgil's and I have no idea who I'm more eager about. Anyway it's nice to hear from you again.
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: March 05, 2006 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is not even fair I'm really getting into this it's crazy. I've never even thought of Kangorr as the leader it's always been Ebon. And I didn't even see Blayne being Kangorr it was all shocking. I'm so happy Hotstreak took some of Richie's books they seemed really important to him and it's sweet that Hotstreak would think so. I can't wait to see when Hotstreak and Richie are reunited it should be interesting. Now it's like I have three people to want to read about you've branched this fic into three pieces. I want to see what happened to Richie, than there's Virgil and Adam, and of course now there's Hostreak and his new friends it's getting really exciting. I can't believe the way Ebon is he's all decked out I think I might like him in this fic, but I'm still a little if-ie, I smell betrayal somewhere with him, but it's probably my paranoid self. I already know I'm going to have some kind of love/hate thing going with Shiv he always does that to me. Oh yeah and I love your descriptions all of it the sweet amber eyed parts and the gory blood soaked parts it all great. I'm all giddy over this fic I can't wait for more so I'll be looking out for any updates.
| Reviewed By: shampoo marea 2 On: March 02, 2006 10:19 CST
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good chapter...i wanna know what will happen now =P
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: March 02, 2006 09:03 CST
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I'm proud to say I didn't cry. The whole there's no crying in baseball was from a movie called 'A League of their own' But anyway i could understand Virgil being in shock I just hope he comes out of it soon. It just seems that Virgil is the type who can't ever really get over something, which is understanding, but could manage to be pulled out of it with the help of friends. I think that with how close Francis and him seemed to be he would need that support the most, so it'll be interesting to see what happens when he realizes that he drove it away. It would seem if they needed help with the zombie thing they would go to kills tribe they would know about spirits an d what not, but than again what if they wee attacked too? I don't know if the Zombies are following Francis are not I mean Caine said he was unimportant, and why would they let him escape in the first place. The only way I think they would start to target Francis is because he knows how to kill the and that if he told enough people the zombie master would see him as a threat. It that's true they must also be after his buddy Blyne. I liked how Francis had Richie in the back of his mind, he must have really left an impression. As for Sharon I really do hope she found a way to escape, when Robert started to attack the living he came in a direction that was off the ranch right? So if that's so maybe him and Sharon were trying to escape and Robert sacrificed himself for his daughter, it seems like something he waould do. Well I hope you update soon I'm really getting into this zombie thing.
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: March 01, 2006 12:28 CST
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Aww no fair, you seem to be having a habit of cliffhangers. I still can't believe I'm reading a story about zombies, I mean sure I'll paly a video game with the in it,but I just never thought I'll read about it. It's not as bad as it sounds, reading a zombie fic I mean, I'm getting into it. I think it's more of the mystery of this 'he'and where exactly these things came from that got me hooked. It's a lot different than the first time you had the Richie whore story out, with that one it was more like a Romance thing this one is all gore. I really don't see how you are going to pull off a Hotstreak/Richie here, but I can't wait to find out. Now I don't know what I'm more eager to find out about, what happened at the Hawkin's ranch or what's going on with Richie. I'm going to be crying with the whole ranch sence aren't I? Who ever heard of someone crying while reading a horror fic? It's like there's no crying in baseball.
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: February 28, 2006 15:27 CST
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Reviewing Chapter 3-4: Okay now I'm hooked, there was just too much action in that last chapter for me not to be hooked. Zombies I really can't believe I'm reading a fic with zombies I hope you're proud. What the heck were those rider things? How are the Alva's going to escape with everyone, I mean I don't think the zombies are going to be leaving any time soon. Poor Richie why is that boy always targeted, I mean he had to be born with a bullseye on him or something. I had to laugh at the part about Hotstreak and his prematurity, at least he's honest. I can't wait to see what happens next, and I'm going to stick you to your promise of some romance, I want to see how that goes.
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: February 28, 2006 13:34 CST
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Reviewing Chapters 1-2: Yay it is the Richie whore story. It was great but what happened to the lemon, only limes? Anyway I have one more chapter to go so I'll probably give a longer review than, but right now I'm in class.
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: February 28, 2006 12:31 CST
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Reviewing Chapter Prologue: O_O What was that. I mean that sure is a way to start a fic, I'm just amazed. I saw it and I'm all alright she posted the Richie whore story! What did I get a zombie story it was a shock. I got to tell you I love the description I mean that zombie guy kind of reminded me of Razel from Soul Reaver.
| Reviewed By: shampoo marea 2 On: February 28, 2006 11:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it`s like this movie I saw...mmm don`t remember the name.good job..now u made it more interesting.=P
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