| "A Romp In The Park" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Title: grumbles... Russian didn't post right
Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: May 09, 2006 13:05 CDT
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I am sorry... but the writing of the Russian exclaimations I sent didn't post up looking like they should.. sorry.. pouts...pouts..
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: May 09, 2006 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok this chapter has got to be the best!! Kudos!! Whoot!! Whoot!! Whoot!! Whoot!!! Bravissimo!! Bravissimo!! Fantastico!! Fantasutikku!! Suteki! Odoroku-beki!! èñïûòûâàþù& egrave;é ñòðàõ!! óäâèòåëüíû&eac ute;!! There you go..In English, Italian, Japanese, and Russian!!! Literary Goddess, I humbly bow to you!!! You Rock!! This is super!! It's Splendiferous!!!! Ranma on 'display' while protecting Akane. -disappears for a moment.. background noises of laughter, choking and wheezing.. sounds of someone returning- I loved it!! I am loving... LOVING this story more and more as I read it!! Poor Inu.. puppy not a happy camper. something has taken his chew toy and blankie away. Poor Kagome. Having yet again someone else in control of her body.. this makes, what, the third or fourth time it has happened to her.. snickers.. maybe she wears a sign.. I enjoyed being inside Ranma's mind when he got interrupted.. Man, that has got to hurt a guy! I cringe for him. And what will the Jewels influence do to Akane's armor? She won't be happy if she doesn't get it back. And what does the Armor have against our favourite dog boy. Pouts. Baka armor!! Leave Inu's bits alone!! I cheer you for having Inuyasha assess his envirnoment and the potential threats with the way you had him do. That was a wonderful touch. And then to add on to it with Ranma's response to that assessment. WOW!! Am I ever floored by your talent!!... giggles... gone from romping to rumbling to romping to rumbling... Love it!! Hands over several large boxes of virtual Pocky. Then goes to build an alter for honouring author... You are right up there with InuFan625, Sueric, Doggieearlover, Silent Sky... just to name of few of my avid adoration receivers. What can I truly say? I don't think there is enough words to describe just how awesome I am finding your story, your writing and your talent!! I thrill to see new chapters come out and I love going back to re-read the other chapters!! I am wondering with the Jewels influence upon the Armor.. If it will take the combined efforts of all three or just Inuyasha and Ranma to battle it from Kagome? I loved how you described Inuyasha's aura and how it changed and reacted to Kagome's aura. ... Also shakes head in awe struck amazement... Inuyasha..taking a 'licking' (pun fully intended of course) with the kiss... not fighting back... WOW!! Awesome!! I really enjoyed how you have masterfully described the untamed and desirable magneticism that both Inuyasha and Ranma have... Heck.. it is only natural to have a response to it when it is That strong!!! I think you have all the Ranma half and Inuyasha fans all nearing passing out from the build ups then slowly eased down then back up and now with this added treat of treats!! .. ponders.. I wonder if there will be calls for Inhalers, Oxygen tanks, Tifibulators, Vibrators, Ice, Water.. etc... At least we'll go with a big bang... I wonder do people really explode literally from too much pleasure....??? Can you hear it? That is the sound of all your fans throwing a celebration for you!! You go girl!!! Can't wait for the next update. Please keep up the most excellent work!!
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Title: to foursome or not..
Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: May 08, 2006 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i enjoy this one. i usually don't read crossovers, mainly because i have no idea who the crossover part is! i just can't get my head around a foursome. i do like the idea of them getting *together* in the same area, they seemed to be turned on by each other and mimicing what the other couple did. i think that could turn out to be much hotter and more sensual than an all out foursome. plus with how possessive inuyasha is when kouga comes around i don't think he'd be the kind of guy to share. i'm keeping an eye out!
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Title: Aria_Sunsoar
Reviewed By: Pianogoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
way to go!! This is great, I'm totally enjoying this read....hmmmmm, a foursome sounds like it could be a lot of fun..... :o)
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: April 12, 2006 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YYYEeeesssssss!!! Whoot! Whoot! Whoot! What an awesome chapter I just finished! Welll.... I guess I have to say "Literary Goddess". I have added you to my short list of writers I give this title to. I guess your husband will have to learn to live with this new title. ( unless he is a little jealous... tease-tease) That was sooo awesome! WOW!! I love it!! I like how Inuyasha and Kagome have decided to wait until they can get preventive measures. Umm... Will normal condoms be okay with demons? I wonder... with the immense stubbornness, head strong determination and orneriness that Inuyasha has to him. Prephaps Kagome should get everything possible. Maybe Sango or Kaede would know of something that can be used as protection. Not til after Naraku threat is over. Or will hanyou be sterile? like with mules? Of course Inuyasha does have 50 some odd years of repressed hormones in his system. Poor Inu. The scene with Akane and Ranma. Very nice. Very hot! What a seductive temptress our little Akane has turned into. Yep. Telling Ranma about the morning after pills. Now will they tell Inuyasha? ... smirks. imagines dog boy begging like a little puppy.. prephaps they can all sit together and dicuss techniques and approaches. Kind of compare hentai notes. giggles hentai-ish. Prephaps a Fantasia party? lol... I really doo soo loooveee this story. You have kept it flowing strong and true with each chapter! What a writer!! What a talent!!! What a cold shower I need!! laughs... I bow to your talent. I will eagerly await the next chapter. And no matter what the outcome will be the true winners are Kagome/Inuyasha and Akane/Ranma. Please keep up the most excellent work!! You totally ROCK!!! And such a delightfully sweet and delicious twist you added with the Armour attaching itself to Kagome. What will Inuyasha do? How will he take this 'attack' to Kagome? We knew he will go into Protect Kagome Mode and become well for lack of better term an attack dog. I have my fingers crossed that you win some awards!!! And I say again Thank You and Thank you for sharing this story with u and for writing such a delicious dessert!! You ROCK Goddess!!!
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Title: This is your barbeque
Reviewed By: kalaong [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... And it tastes goooood. I'm waiting eagerly to see where you take this. I just hope your main course is as good as your appetizers!
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Reviewed By: Concern On: April 12, 2006 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is soo graet but a foursome is totally out of the question not like i'd stop reading if it happened but im not sure it would be good i mean maybe they could watch each other ya know like they both do it at the same time to their OWN partener i understand that its your fic but i think that would be a bad idea
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Title: PLEASE NO
Reviewed By: Kelsey_Fantasy On: April 12, 2006 03:12 CDT
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nonononono dont make a fouresome thats just so JUCK! Ranma loves Akane, Akane loves Ranma, Kagome loves Inuyasha and Inuyasha loves Kagome do you really think any of them wold put up with anyone else doing stuff too the one they love?
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: March 30, 2006 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay.. Got internet back! And lo and Behold~ a wonderfully surprising treat! Updates and improved chapters!! I can't begin to express to you just how much I am enjoying your story! I really thrill to read it. You have certainly keep the characters true yet matured! Wow! I gleefully chase my tail in circles when I see your story. I do have a question? Is this all happening in one day, one afternoon? And if so are they off in a more secluded part of the part that is barely visited by other park go-ers? want to know if others are finding this a deliciously kinky and sinfully voyeuristic as Ranma and Akane/Inuyasha and Kagome are finding it... giggles. When I read about Akane using the kettle of hot water. I thought did she have that hidden in her panties?!!and started laughing at my thought. I can't wait to see more from you I love your cliffies!! They are great! Please keep up the most excellent work. I plan to go and re-read all the new tidbits. (growls at internet connection- grumbles made me miss the improvements)- Can we have a vote to see if is okay to have Kagome and Akane making out to drive the boys completely nuts? Will we get to see Inuyasha full youkai D/s love scenes? Can we vote on this too? I think you totally rock!! I will be checking out you other story that you have as well. So again please keep up the most wonderfully and excellent work.
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Reviewed By: Taro MD On: March 28, 2006 10:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm a Ranma/Inuyasha lemon written by a woman... clear recipe for success!
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Reviewed By: ~ME On: March 27, 2006 20:50 CST
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Another great chapter -- so very hot ^_~ and lotsa Inu & Kag....yummmmmm! Oh please, no foursome :( as hot as everything is, I still can't see my favorite couple in a foursome -- I think this voyerism is a stretch, but it works -- they're still 'in character' in a great way :D It'd break my heart to find those two with anybody else....or just in a big orgy *bodies flung every which way*...can you really DO that?? *an innocent bystander asks...* ^_^ Please, Please, PLEASE.......no foursome -- I love the fic as it is, two semi-seperate entities :)
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Title: More!!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You keep managing to outdo yourself. It was just HOT, no other way to put it. (At least until Kagome temporarily threw cold water, so to speak, on poor InuYasha.) I'm enjoying it immensely and look forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: Amazing On: March 27, 2006 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so great please please hurry with your update
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: March 24, 2006 13:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, the addition you did on chapter one - a really nice touch. oH MY-I liked it. It has really improved the story. I'm quite pleased with it!! Really increased the flavour and flow of the story. Gave it an even more magical touch and presence to the story line. Wow!! you certainly have a wonderful talent there! And I can't wait to see the next chapter! Please keep up the most wonderful work! I just want to re-read it again to saviour the newness of the story!! Thank you for sharing the story with us!! Thank you!!!
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Reviewed By: ~ME On: March 21, 2006 18:53 CST
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WooHoo--good chapter! Love the Inu & Kag stuff ^_~ ....and, no! I wouldn't expect you to do any 'Inu/Kag' time JUST for me....obviously, the story was heading that way -- I could just read your mind :) (I'm gifted, don't ya know?!) ^_^ God! Those two together are the BEST! Yum!
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