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Title: Nice surprise
Reviewed By: vox dei On: March 29, 2006 22:00 CST
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Don't usually take a flier on a new author and end up so pleased! Read first 9 chapters in one go. I like the fast, condensed-but-fleeting writing style. Spare words still perfectly captured the image of Heero seething at Duo and the girl on the beach, or the priceless hug scene a few chapters back. Heero's completely unrequitted emotions are a sad but realistic part of the story- so when will Duo even realize his friend wants more than friendship? One last thing- Howard-as-narrator is brilliant and original.
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Reviewed By: Link Worshiper On: March 29, 2006 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gaaaaaaaaah, been a long time since I found a fanfic that made me fangirl squee so bad. MEGA PROPS!!! The scene with Heero watching Duo while he slept was so simple, and yet so moving.
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Title: HAHAHAHA!
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: March 28, 2006 09:12 CST
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Poor Heero's goin' crazy! I want to know why Howie's drinkin' so much. UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: WickedGame [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 15:34 CST
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i usually review this over on the ML, but i thought since the next chapter was already posted here that i would review it here. this is oblivious duo, isn't it? the one that has no clue that heero is in love with him? poor heero. he obviously is stuck between a rock and a hard place. and i wonder why howard is drinking himself to death? as always we are left with some pieces of the puzzle solved and more unsolved. good job!
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Reviewed By: ShinigamisBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this fic is pretty good! It's original and the writing style really brings out the uniquness of the fic. I can't wait for the next part! Keep up to awesome job!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: March 23, 2006 16:57 CST
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bad day for duo....confusing day for howard....an upsetting day for heero. hopefully the next day is a bit more cherry for the trio. update again soon!
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Reviewed By: PurpleBunny On: March 17, 2006 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Nice story. Cute Heero. Funny Duo.
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Reviewed By: Tuatha On: March 12, 2006 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey, I'm back again. This chapter was great and I can't wait for the next one!
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Pyrzm not signed in On: March 11, 2006 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm really enjoying this. i love seeing the boys through Howard's eyes. You've really nailed them. More please!
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Reviewed By: Kourutusunie (not logged in) On: March 11, 2006 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like it. Can I see some more in the near future? I really like how Heero and Duo can one minute act like a couple then not the next. More chapters! More chapter! More more more please!
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Title: Awww
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 13:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So cute... Must update!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: March 11, 2006 02:24 CST
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hmmmm....it must be interesting to be howard to observe heero and duo. haha.....well, hopefully he'll be able to survive it! update again soon!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: March 05, 2006 20:29 CST
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hmm......it's good to see a different point of view of heero and duo's relationship from someone else (especially howard). i like the interaction between all three so far....i can't wait to see what else howard notices from heero and duo on his trip on Earth. Update again soon!
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Reviewed By: lo On: March 05, 2006 09:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job. I like the point of view you are using. Nice.
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Reviewed By: Tuatha On: March 05, 2006 03:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Wow, you write really beautifully, you don't get that very often. Please write more soon, I'm desperate to see how this continues. Why did Howard come to Earth? Just for a holiday?
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