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| "Beyond Mortal Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 > » ] | Reviewed By: Mikko On: July 24, 2006 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.oo. Sniff damnit! So this is it, the last review I'm gonna leave; Yay, they didn't die! Wow, I think there is, like, 4-5 stories out there that have make me feel like I'm doing right now, you know, happy ending, no one you like died (exept SchuSchu but he was mean), ^____^ So I guess now I just hafta wait for the other stories with AxA being OOC XD Can't wait! Hehe, you should do a mini epilogue: AxA 300 yrs later: Nagi, Yohji, Omi, Manx, Birman, Persia: *Glaring daggers at Alucard* Alucard: What!? So I made one- six mistakes! What was I suposed to do! Starve?! Ran (to Aya): I still can't belive he turned them into Vampires! -.- *hysteric* Now I'll never be able to escape Yohji!! The end XD Man, I'm gonna miss the story, but, ah well, Untill next time! L8er!
| Reviewed By: Red-on-Black On: July 23, 2006 04:05 CDT
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It's the end! Darn it, I'm going to miss this fic. This last chapter is actually kind of...sweet in a way. Especially the ending! I especially loved how the rest of weiss and the others decided it was time for an intervention. And Alucard and Aya will be together. YAY! Anyway, I don't think I can ever forget this fic since it introduced me to a not quite expected pairing that still worked! I'll be waiting for the one-shots on AxA. Can't get them out of my system. :) Oh yeah, it was my pleasure on being one of your fans. Best of luck in your future fanfictions and other bits of writing. Happy writing!
| Reviewed By: Mikko On: July 08, 2006 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, he survived, and Aya-chan woke up! I can't really say that I'm waiting for the last update, cuz that means no more chapters after that *tear* Oh well, I have really enjoyed this story, and I'm glad you updated so fast^^ 'til next time, l8er!
| Reviewed By: Mikko On: July 08, 2006 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo that's a lot of blood! I feel sorry for him, having to go through all that *tear* heehee, gonna read more now XD
| Title: Arhg!
Reviewed By: Mikko On: July 08, 2006 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Daaamnit! My computer chrashed! Actually I'm starting to doubt here, you are gonna kill him, aren't you!? *cries* .oo. That would just be tooooo sad! (btw, I'm talkin bout Aya XD) Well, anyway, I liked this chapter, can't wait to read more XD Okay, so there is a way to turna Aya back into 'normal' again, I'm curious ^^ L8er XD
| Reviewed By: Red-on-Black On: July 07, 2006 10:00 CDT
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This morning I was feeling depressed since I had an essay to do today. I returned home and decided to see if you have updated or not, and behold, you did update! Now I feel so much more happier. lol. You're fic has become something I read if I'm feeling sad since I enjoy it so much. *gasp* Aya-chan is awake. Actually I'm not surprised since this is nearly the end. They had vampire sex in a church...why am I so amused at that and so not suprise? *snicker* If Anderson was there, he would have more than a fit! Can you imagine the look on his face if he did?! And I do agree with you, Alucard and Aya are just fucked up. They themselves don't even quite know how to describe their own relationship! But they are so lovable together that way. Always running in circles around each another. It's about time Aya 'submitted' to Alucard! Anyway, great chapter as usual. Can't wait for your next update. I'm expecting for it to cheer me up when I'm feeling sad again! LOL. I have full confidence it will. Happy writing. Update soon!
| Reviewed By: shu no baka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Alucard and Aya were just... Fucked up." That was a funny sentence!!!
| Reviewed By: Red-on-Black On: July 03, 2006 05:10 CDT
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Damn right Aya isnt't that stupid to call out for a dead man! Yay, you updated. Rejoice! I've been waiting to for you to update! lol. Wow, now even Alexander is involved. Nice twist by the way. I swear Alucard and Aya's relationship is so...indescribable. *Gasp* its going to be the end soon for this fic. *sniff* I'll miss it so much. Heh, but I'm exited to see the ending. I have to make this review shorter than normal. I have a few test and essays this week. Don't you feel special I'm taking time off to see if you updated?*snicker* To make up for this I promise a longer review for the next chapter.Anyway, update soon. No one can write an Alucard and Aya pairing quite like you! Happy writing. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Mikko On: June 23, 2006 07:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, go me, I'm catching up XD Wow, I really like this chapter; bathtub-sex, Aya turning Vampire, well, not a real Vampire ( btw, what happens if the chip is removed??) Alucard gettin' shot XD Wonder if Aya ever gonna turn into a real Vampire... Well, whatever, just as long as Alu and Aya doesn't die :D Looking forward to read chapter 16, *can't wait* XD
| Reviewed By: FJ On: June 19, 2006 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting cross-over. Creative and intriguing. Your style definitely has potential and room to grow. This is a good thing! :) However, I have to agree about the whole "rape-worthy" situation. I realize that this is "fiction" but the manner and context of the suggestion is rather trite, if not creatively lackadaisical. There were other ways such a thing could have been verbalized if sensuality was the desired emotion you wished to convey. The writing itself is not offensive, but rather it is the linguistic context that surrounds the phrasing which is questionable. As for "Schu-Schu" fanfiction, (dear gods, what an awful twisting of an already ridiculous moniker) I've read plenty where the man is NOT a rapist. Heaven forbid. You have the so much to offer without using such terms as "rape-worthy." I realize that rape can be used as a plot device, but once again, it the context of such thing which lends quality to the effort.
| Reviewed By: IzzyP On: June 17, 2006 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very confused. What the hell just happened? Is Aya evil now and is Alucard gonna come back to life? Gawd now i have a headache from trying to figure this out.
| Title: email review
Reviewed By: bewsbud [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 22:55 CDT
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I found your response...interesting. ~~"I meant that when someone exudes sexual allure as much as Aya did while he was wearing that outfit, I'm pretty sure some people would be dying to rape him"(quote from your response)~~ No. I didn't take the use of the term "rape-worthy" to describe someone as 'sexually alluring' *too* seriously. Rape is NOT a response to finding someone sexually appealing. Contrary to your "Schu-Schu"-line, I'm not against rape fic when handled properly (and please don't call me "Honey"). I have no problem with the sexual relationship portrayed between Alucard and Aya. This is 'not' about sex. It's about using a non-concentual, brutal attack as a compliment. This phrase garnered no less than 75 responses in my LJ...all found it offensive. The consensus was that the author was probably too young to see the importance of confusing attraction with rape. When someone you love is raped, and you've helped then struggle back from the edge...if at that time, you see "rape-worthy" as a harmless compliment of some type, then we'll talk. Until then, I wish you continued success in your writing endeavors. As I stated in my email, the writing in this fic shows promise.
| Reviewed By: Mikko On: June 16, 2006 17:07 CDT
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Oo another chapter!? Man, you are writing fast XD I was a bit surprised at Yojis comment about not finding happiness* since he's always flirting with girls, well, I don't exactly remember how he is in this fic, since it is focusing on Aya and Alu. But that comment was kinda harsh oO' But still, I liked it very much, and lookie; I've got another chapter to read XD Hehe, I've got some errors in my spelling, don't have the strenght to find a dictionary XD
| Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not Logged In) On: June 16, 2006 11:34 CDT
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I have noticed something. Your sex scenes are like reading an RP session. That's not a bad thing really, but usually when you're not the one RPing and have a set image in your mind then it is hard to follow what is being done and said. It is expecialy hard when you read an action, read some thoughts, and then read the other person's reaction. It is like you have to back track and remember what the action was to gage the reaction. Please tell me you did not kill Alucard. Omg...Please. That would break my little black heart. I don't think Aya would get over it, and I doubt that him going on a mass killing spree is a good thing for the story. He is sapposed to be a good guy! Even if you do intend to leave Alucard dead, I wanna know how you are going to continue this story that way. It is an interesting concenpt to digest now that I think about it, and I am sure that it would make some interesting things to happen. I mean, maybe Aya going on a mass killing spree to kill all the FREAKS would be a good thing, and the wold could live without Shwartz. Tis all up to you lady, but I am reaally eager to see what happens now. I'll miss all the purty little sex scenes that you did with the two, I was really getting into the whole blood and gore thing with them. Thanks for continuing to write such a great fic! Ja!
| Reviewed By: Red-on-Black On: June 16, 2006 06:52 CDT
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Brilliant chapter as usual! However, I just got confused at the ending. Really confused. The last 2 paragraphs sounds as though Alucard...died and is dead. But somehow it makes as though he isn't at the same time. Which is weird because I remember in the anime and manga Alucard got shot in the head with a bullet like that and he still didn't die. Plus at the like 3rd last episode in the anime Walter said to himself that Alucard was truly immortal and couldn't die. So does the last few paragraphs just imply he is dead or not dead? *sigh* Nevermind, I'll probably find out in the next chapter anyway. Poor Aya. He just can't keep himself out of trouble can he? Can't wait to see how he is going to get himself out of this one.*snicker* Roughly three or four chapters left!?!?!?!?!?! Oh no! *sigh* Well, I was kind of expecting that. Fanfiction like these can't be expected to go on forever. On the good side, I can't wait to see how this is going to end and especially how Aya's and Alucard's relationship is going to go. Oh yeah, I forgot to ask in my last review, since Aya is now bonded to Alucard, doesn't that mean that Alucard in a way is Aya's "master"? And shouldn't Aya be able to communicate with Alucard mentally? Or am I wrong? Anyway, update soon. There's no one in this universe that can write an Aya and Alucard "romance" fic like you do!
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