| "A Mother Miko's Instincts" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: demon overlord On: May 13, 2006 00:06 CDT
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good they get rin out that stinky ass...what the hell is the ass eating refried beans....good story......
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 16:46 CDT
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The next chapter should undoubtedly be good.
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Reviewed By: JDLover90 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 16:11 CDT
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I'm loving the story... Kagome's a grandma!!! yay.. but please tell me nothing happens to the babies.... UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: me On: May 12, 2006 12:35 CDT
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YAYAYAYAYAY!! grandma!!! yay!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Jay [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 14:43 CDT
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oh, how cruel you are to poor shippo... lol. Hey, would you let Kagome and Inu spy on Shippo 'n Kanna again? please? pretty plse? *does puppy eyes*
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Title: holly f#@$
Reviewed By: inuyasha_man [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 06:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i didnt think shippo would fall for her. Any way wicked pick i hope you make more lemon sences in the next chapter you seem to be realy good at it then most athurs ive read on this inuyasha sectoin of fanfics. any pleaseupdate soon.=) ps. ppplllllleeeeaaaaaaaasssssssseeee!! og please!!!! =) any way kudos.
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Reviewed By: alleycat6189 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 15:10 CDT
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Nice job! loved it! yOur imagination rocks to the max!!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 16:46 CDT
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HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Shippou and kanna are doing it!!!!!!!!!!!! Not virgin's.....I didn't think Shippou would be into her all that much but he seems to be fine with what she's doing...and that creeps me out!!!! Please update!!!!!!!
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Title: Lmao.....
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, I think your AN said it all for me, lol.
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Reviewed By: kirara_purr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 12:49 CDT
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so shippo & kanna....did....NASTY!! i love this fic, its so funny, please updte soon!
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Reviewed By: Tara222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am reasonably sure that you sir are certafiably INSANE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inu+kag=love On: May 04, 2006 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this a great and funny fanfic i'm now going to reread both stories PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON I CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGER!!!!!
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Title: BEGGING
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: May 04, 2006 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG OF YOU!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SOO LONG FOR THE STORY TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GONNA CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!LEASE!!!PLEASE!!! and...Oh. My. God. So good. So good. I can't even describe the elation I felt when I got the notice that this had been updated, and then the even greater elation after reading this chapter. I wish I had some criticism... they might be moving a little too quickly, but somehow that works. Can't wait till next update! and...wow... I really like your story.. I just read the chapter u posed. AHHHH YOU JUST LEFT IT THERE!!??? *sobs uncontrollably* Mother F&*%er! (not you.. just a comment) INUYASHA AND SESSHY ARE SO DAMN SEXY IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY!!!! I want them for my birthday! (or at least another chapter) My b- day is May 5th :-D just thought i'd tell you that(*hint hint**wink wink*. And wow.. I wish I was living this story or something.. THEY'RE SO HOT! sorry...I'm better now.. ok I'm gonna go before I start drooling all over my keyboard. Please add more chapters! Lemony even! :-D ok bye Also I usually don't ask writers to hurry up and updte because I beleive it is very rude. But this one time I will be rude. PLEASE update faseer than a month. I don't think I can what that long. Another great chapter by the way.^_^
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 01:05 CDT
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YOU Rockman!!!!!! your story is awsome and i can't wait to see how your next chapter is!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: alleycat6189 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 23:48 CDT
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I hope that Shippou starts to get the hots for her that would be great! and with your kiss A** scenes it would ROCK!!!!
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