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Title: CHAPTER THREE
Reviewed By: I am Foxglove [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 09:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! How cool, Rin's a Wicca!! . . . Ooh, but, could this cause conflict? You know, like her protection spells blocking Sessh from going anywhere near her? Hmm . . . And double yay! More Sessh/Rin moments! Eeeee, I can't wait to read more!
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Title: CHAPTER TWO
Reviewed By: I am Foxglove [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 09:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*dancing* Sessh is a demon-vamp? That is HELLA cool!! Erm . . . pity he just totally freaked Rin out with that little moment in the truck, there. Ha ha. Yay, Kagome's getting married! Party! Will she and Inu feature more in the story eventually? Shippo, too? Aw, but poor Sessh . . . he's all hooked up on Rin and he's all confused . . . Poor puppy. Oh well . . . I'm sure, in time, he'll get used to it . . . Heh heh . . .
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Title: chapter one
Reviewed By: I am Foxglove [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 09:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooooooooooh! Intriguing, VERY intriguing! I quite like the writing style, and Rin's characterisation is particularly cool . . . And Sesshomaru! *squeals* He's all cool and mysterious . . . Looking forward to reading more! Now if only I could get my muse back to finish my own stories . . . *sigh*
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Reviewed By: icygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 04:27 CST
Comment/Review:
GREAT! CONTINUE ON THIS WAY!
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Reviewed By: Gracelyn On: March 14, 2006 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
although i know there are otehr sess/rin AU fanfic out there, and there are vampire ones too, i know it's diff to think of a whole new story line to it. so there. kudoz for creativity. PLEASE UPDATE THIS!!! ;)
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Title: -Drool-
Reviewed By: Inugirlfan1(NSI) On: March 14, 2006 20:21 CST
Comment/Review:
W00T! GO RAY! -Dances- I luff it. -Huggles t3h sexiness of Sesshou-
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Inuyasha luvr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think itz really good, can't wait till u update it!!! ^.^ bye
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