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| "Alive Through the Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Rika-chan4300 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hoooooly crap! I freaking love your stories!!! I found your Rin-Haru site while sufing, and I just couldn't get enough of your stories! You inspired me to write fan-fics of my own! OOOOOMG! Wow, I feel like i'm talking to a celebrity. You are my fan-fiction idol. Don't ever stop writing! You've got a talent, thats what I have to say! Alive Through the Dawn was the first story of yours I read, and I absolutely loved it. It was creative, and extremely well written, and you stayed true to the characters. You were made for this! Okay, I'll stop yammering, but I'd just like to say thank you for writing it all down and posting it! The world is a better place with your writing in it! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 13:24 CST
Comment/Review:
I've been meaning to read this since you posted it on LJ the other day. I wanted to see if there was any new 'good' Kyouru pieces posted anywhere and was thinking about giving up and going to read your story on LJ but noticed it was the next one on the list here... Although I am an avid Kyouru fan, I adore the relationship between Rin and Haru, but don't take the chance to seek out fictions about the two of them too often...frankly because there isn't really a lot of people that have their relationship down. Being fairly 'minor' characters(and I say that loosely because their story is one of the ones that leaves the most impact)people don't take the time to study them as closely as some of the 'bigger' pairings. Knowing your 'obsession' with this pairing, having seen some of your other work and thoughts on them I was quite excited to see that you were working on a story of this magnitude and this particular topic. So far, it's absolutely beautiful and I am really enjoying it. I can't wait to see the next part of it. I love how you've included so much of Kazuma and Kunimitsu in this story. I've always been extremely intrigued with the entire Kyou/Kazuma/Isuzu relationship dynamic, it's something I have been wanting to explore in my own writing, but am not comfortable with my own Rin and her voice quite yet. I don't want the entire thing to be from Kyou's POV...so I am a little curious on your thoughts about it. Anyway...very excited for the second piece of this. Keep up the wonderful job.
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