"Decisions of the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: A Worthy Read Reviewed By: Ellie On: July 31, 2021 12:18 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was well-written; grammar and spelling were good. It was
clear and concise. And it was also entertaining with an original
and creative phenomena included. Thank you for the read. :)
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Reviewed By: Silent planet On: July 13, 2012 11:05 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: It was simple beautiful i felt I was in the story. It was so romamtic, writting was breathtaking :) |
Reviewed By: Elven_Lass On: January 14, 2007 03:37 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Absolutely brilliant! I loved it. You are a very talented writer...
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Reviewed By: Sar17 On: August 18, 2006 13:09 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awwwwwwwww. You made me worry a few times there, but I was happy in the end. It is a great fic. ^-^
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Reviewed By: MoreEverything On: March 17, 2006 14:03 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Clever, well written piece! You managed to have them stay in character but still fall in love. Raw, emotional, but tastefully done smuttiness. The only thing that wasn't as plausible was Jaken meddling in Sess/Rin's business. Otherwise, this is a great one shot, and I hope you plan on writing mor Sess/Rin pairings!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 12:51 PST Comment/Review: Very angsty. I like the intelligence that you have given Rin. Devotion seems to be the major theme in bringing about the emotional crux in Sesshoumaru. You kept everything on track without swaying. Great job. Snow
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