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Reviewed By: Demon-Thief On: March 31, 2006 12:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still loving your story, another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one, hope it's soon. Ja ne for now.
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Reviewed By: Ashcat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 10:59 CST
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I liked this update :) I like Shu writing different types of music as he is a very different person now than he was in the past. The adults stealing a little bit more adult time together was very cute - poor Hiro! I like that you have Shu and Yuki's kids as brats, I can see that being the case! I can't believe that they don't have a nanny or something, however with Shu not working I guess it's not such a big deal! I am really looking forward to where this goes :) you've set up lots of drama elements from his biography and its aftermath, the give away legs, and the possible singing career - shu certainly has a lot to think about! I wonder what Eiri's real thoughts on Shu's career are, it would mean a lot of changes for him!
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Reviewed By: Demon-Thief On: March 26, 2006 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great to see you back, really loving this story. You are one of my fav Authors, I have enjoyed every story you have written for Gravi, am looking foward to reading the next chapter. Ja ne for now.
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Reviewed By: Lady-Loss On: March 25, 2006 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story. I love reading of how grown up everyone is and Shu/Yuki's childen, it would be sweet if they had a girl. Anyway really hope you update soon, can't wait to read what happens next, oh and the bath scene was so beautiful.
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Reviewed By: xunxin On: March 24, 2006 21:29 CST
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yeah nu chapter awesome loved it kinda sappy in some parts but still so cool oh shu's legs gave out yeah! i was saiting for that to happen. oh, YES he should make a comeback and YES it should be with badluck. him doing solo would be too much like ryu who i dont care for at all plus it shows that the other members are just as great as the singer it doesn't out shine them update soon I LOVE IT!
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Title: catti-dono (baka deshi of Tsuki-sama sensai)
Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 20:31 CST
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I spent two and a half days reading all of your works and they were all wonderful...Im fairly new to Gravitation...hoppng from Ruroni Kenshin, Yu-Gi-Oh, Descendants of Darkness and so forth and landed here....This is a great story and am looking forward to more updates...domo arigatou for being a fantastic writer....catti
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Reviewed By: Ashcat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 15:09 CST
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YAY update :) I thought that it was a little weird that after Shu's legs just gave away that Eiri wasn't worried about him carrying their baby around :/ I would have been! I dunno about Shu's singing career, it seems like a big step with a baby at home, two bratty preschoolers and him working on a biography to boot! Mabye he can just travel to Tokyo and do some studio recording. I really liked how this started with the whole rape issues - I hope you return to that thread it would be nice to see it elaborated on!
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: AngelofLight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic! and I've read "Parental Revenge" and "This I Promise you" on aff.net. I also started reading this one there but it's only up to chapter 4 so I was like "YAY!" when I saw this. Aw poor Shu-chan! After reading that I feel even more blessed about how peaceful my grandmother's death was for my family (not exactly sure peaceful is the correct word, she died 6 months ago.. wow.. it's been that long..) I'm glad Shuichi was able to reconcile with his Grandmother. Aw!! Kira's a Mama's boy! well.. Shuichi is technically his mother anyway.. moving on! That's how it is when I watch my nephews now! They used to be little angels but now they're 4 and 2! I count the seconds till their parents come home! Yes! Bad Luck reunion! I'm glad that you updated and I hope to see another chapter soon! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Demon-Thief On: March 23, 2006 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, I love reading it, and am glad you have posted it here because even though Adult fan is still accesible, I can't seem to load anything. Anyway, so happy you've wrote a sequal, as I loved the first one. Great work, hope you post another chapter soon, can't tp read what happens next. Ja ne for now.
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Reviewed By: ashcat not logged in On: March 21, 2006 14:59 CST
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Nice to see that you found another place to publish since aff is offline. I had wondered about this story :) You might want to work on your sexual metaphors, some of the ones you used in the previous chapter were more humorous than you probablly intended.
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Title: Because of you
Reviewed By: Via lia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy reading this story so much! It's awesome! And I love Eiri/Shu parts. They're perfect. I would love to read moooore about them... This story is a sequal one, right? Please publish the first part- I would love to read it! And keep the good job, I'm waiting for more! Wish you luck, Via
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