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| "Laying Down the Law" Reviews/Comments [ 206 ] | | Pages (14): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Title: Wonderful, simply Wonderful
Reviewed By: Lady_of_the_Night On: January 20, 2010 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay the thing left randomly and I have to start over, so let's try this again,ne? Alright, I absolutley love your fics. If I could meet you I would. You are one of my favorite authors on this entire site.(all of my favorites are tied for first, you inluded). How old are you, I'm very curious. Anyway, great job as always, and congratulations on wrting such great stories.
| Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there. I really like this fic (and your sequel). I wondered if you had a beta... as great a story as this is, you definitely have several spelling errors that have a tendency to pop out at readers (no offense, I like to include both the good and the bad in my reviews... you won't get better without some constructive criticism, ne?). If you'd like, I'd be willing to go back and fix some of them up for you. If you're interested, drop me an e-mail :) Grammar & Spelling are two of my strong points. That said, great original characters, though I'd definitely like to see more Inu/Kag in the sequel (like you said, he's the title character! He's gotta shine!). Keep up the good work, and let me know if there's any way I could help you out.
| Reviewed By: kaglover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this story ^^ Hope to read some of your other ones!
| Title: Bye
Reviewed By: Kiki33 On: November 17, 2007 21:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, first off: I LUV this story!!! It's actually one of the only stories that i SERIOUSLY enjoyed! Your original character is so wicked! i really like how she seems to fit into the "younger sister" role! She's the best original family member i've ever seen in a fanfic! And second: WOW!! This story was amazing AND u didnt put any narsty lemon scenes in it(SO glad)!!! However, my friend Jen says(and i quote): "What the F***!!!! I thought there was gonna b a SesshRin lemon! NOT FAIR!!!!!! She promised!" LOL-she's kinda a perv!XD Anyways, i just wanted u 2 know that ur a great author and u should really write another story!! Even if u dont u'll still always b one of my fav authors!!
| Title: WAI!!!!
Reviewed By: December Love 05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I just wanted to say that I absolutely loved your story. Your a terrific writer. And I hope that I'm not too late to put in my profile to be in the next story. Name: Akiko Mori Demon/Human? Half-demon! What Kind? Half-dog demon Height? 4 foot 11 inches Build? Skinny, yet I don't take shit from anyone. Hair Color? Dirty Blonde Eye Color: Blue Demeanor: Normally happy and perky and energetic. But you will feel my wrath if you get me pissed off. Feelings toward Kikyo: I think I made the same mistake as everyone else by watching episodes 147 and 148. But in this story, I like her. Feelings towads Kagome: Absolute favorite female character. Crushes: Well, since I have a boyfriend, I don't have a crush. Just let me know if you wanna put him in the story.
| Reviewed By: bad sango On: June 16, 2007 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
profile Lea Skinner Demon Gold Dog Demon Height 5ft 8in Build like Shiora's build Hair Gold/brown Eyes Gold/brown Kikyo got along not good friends Kagome doesn't trust at first but became the best of friends crush bankotsu Demeanor: nice to people till you make her mad then she a bitch doesn't trust well but ones you got her trust she'll die for you loves to have fun
| Title: Fucking Awshome
Reviewed By: Bubblez-of-doom [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aye mate you did a fucking good job. i mean it was so fucking goodyou should defanantly fucking make a fucking sequel!!!!!!!!!!!! -Mad Max
| Title: AWSOME!
Reviewed By: shikiori(nsi) On: June 04, 2007 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first time I reviewed for this. When I first saw the summary I didn't really bother to read it (no offense), but later out of sheer boredom I started reading and got hooked. Note: This is not the best story to read all in one sitting, let me tell you that. You get people starring because you're laughing one minute, crying the next. I absolutely love this story!! And I would like to add a character, pretty please? Name (first and last): Faline Morz Demon/Human?: Demon If demon, what kind: Cat Height: 5 feet, 10 inches Build: what was Shitora's comment? "Double D's, bitch, just like mama used to make"? Toned upper body Hair Color: Black with greenish tint Eye color: Purplish red Demeanor: Violent to any stranger, slight ADHD, Slightly less vulgar speech than Mad Max Feelings towards Kikyo: don't love don't hate pretty curious wants to meet her Feelings towards Kagome: Extremely loyal, sometimes overbearing Crushes: Got any OC's that have golden amber eyes that aren't taken yet?
| Title: Yo!
Reviewed By: HigherBeing(nsi) On: June 03, 2007 22:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Smashing good show, jolly, jolly, 'ol! =D lol. Nice ending. Very good. I can't wait for the sequel. I'd love to help out and such but life got busier and I'm finding that not even I can accomplish any writting... which sucks because I already started this cute Naruto ficcy. *sigh* Anyways, until your sequel. You and your story are on my favorites. ^_~ Au revoir.
| Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 16:44 CDT
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that was.. wow... yesh, wow suits it perfectly. You had soooo many complicated, entricate, frustrating, enthralling twists to this story, and damn can you write details to rival ann rice. lol But i like it. And you summed it up beautifully. I would have thought after all that time, Kagome should have had a ceramony to be indited into the wildcats... After saving all their asses, she deserves something special. And i loved how you portrayed kikyou's character. You didnt bash her, like almost everyone else does. That shows me that you have a more mature outlook in life. *of course, it doesnt hurt that you're from texas. lol I was waiting for the ya'll.* And it made me happy to see you had some australian and british terms in there too, so the story appeals to all. Of course, you might want to let others know that sheila means woman in australian. Some people won't understand, and think you made a mistake with the name. I also adored the original characters, and that would probably be your ticket to an iyfanguild award. But this story seriously needs to be beta'd. IYFanGuild is mega strict, and they only want quality. If you need an extra beta, to help you go over this story with a fine tooth comb, i can help you. LoL, but it did take me three days to read the story, you write long assed chapters. Which is awesome. :) But anyways, im rambling. The story was awesome, just needs a little fine tuning. I especially loved the part where i got to learn a little bit more about cars. It's a fic that makes you learn something. *Grins* You know, i fell asleep last night thinking about what i wanted to say in a review once i was done with the story, and i can't remember a thing i wanted to say. I eagerly look forward to the next story you write, and i hope you update fast. :) Keep up the great work, and i will be reading you again. ~Autumn
| Reviewed By: horsechick [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea, tat is like the best story i have EVER read, i can't wait for the seqeul, but l would like to know the name so yea. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: horsechick [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea, tat is like the best story i have EVER read, i can't wait for the seqeul, but l would like to know the name so yea. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it.a whole lot.ill read your sequel.update soon.luck.bye.
| Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 15:06 CDT
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OMG! you are a goddess! you wrote this chapter so well and i'm so sad that it's over but i can't wait for the sequels! you saidd sequels with a S! yes! more LDTL greatness!
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 23:08 CDT
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A very good job... cool ending... lots of possiblilities for a sequel... Congratulations on the finished story!
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