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Title: hehehehehehehe....
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: May 05, 2006 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in thinking mode... Poor Inu. Sessy better get in there and do some damage control. Ohhhh. Naraku knew when he was going to go into heat... Hehehehe. Foiled. I hope. Midoriko, would she know as well? She's a miko... does Inu have any of her powers? Or does she got secrets to? Hmmm. I'm thinking about answering my own challenge... Your giving me ideas... LOL. Tryst
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Title: Is he going into heat?
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 30, 2006 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think in the brood chappter Naruku maentioned Inu going into heat, thats whats goning on now eh? Glad I inspired you at leats a little. I really thought that there's be some thought of escape. All well, looks like things are gonna get a little hot for Sess thou hehe. Mabe your next chapter should have his thoughts in it eh? Cant wait for your update!!!! XD XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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Title: LOL. That was good.
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/Tryst On: April 29, 2006 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. I loved that... Hehehehe. Oh man. Poor Inu. In heat and lusting after his captor. Hehehe. I really don't know what to ask other than... There's gonna be trouble? Man. Okay... my new catch phrase seems to be man. My next update's should be coming soon. Though I'm not to sure what to say about it. Hmmm. I hope to see more soon. Yowza. I gotta go now. Tryst.
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Reviewed By: SilenceoftheHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...Poor little 'Yasha. It's pretty sad when he's confused as hell because people are being nice to him. And, YES, now he's got a crush on Sessy. That makes me sooo happy. Thank you. -Silence-
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Title: Ideas....?
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 26, 2006 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im sorry that you got sick ^^' Ideas to get your brain on track.....ummmm.... Well, hes stuck in a castile with a hot but prude bishi, being kept against his will, wants to go home, so I think what comes next would be an excape attempt, but not until after he figures out why Sess want him eh? Ok theres mine, cant say I dident try ^^' Hope it helps >< Till you get better! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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Reviewed By: SilenceoftheHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truly one of the best Inuyasha stories currently being published right now. I love the storyline and the writing is a beautiful blend of dark angst and stark realism. And, of courses, there is no better pairing that the inu-brothers. Except one with a creepy, evil Naraku trying to shove in. Thank you. -Silence-
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Title: Whoosh!!!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 17, 2006 05:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD More of an after Easter fic for me :P guess when I got to it ^^' A writer who vaules her readers!!! *Glomp* Dont find much of them saying such things to puiny little reviewers *Twidles thumbs* Hehe, na but, Narukus kinda scary O.e (< But still, as always its another well written chapter that im more than happy to read and review about. ^^ Thx for responding to the reviews! Thou you might find that you'll be getting more and more as readers increase haha! I do hope you can keep up with them and continue to respond to these tiny little notes of encouragement and praise :P Until your next update *Bows, bows* XD xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Title: LOL. You got this one going...
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: April 16, 2006 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was certainly answering my questions. Seems Midoriko is actually in love with her husband. Yikes. Poor Inuyasha. I hope he goes into heat while still in the Inu household. At least that way, Naraku can be confounded somewhere along the way. Geeze. He's really creepy here. LOL. Thanks for the update. On to the others... Tryst.
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Reviewed By: LOVE IT On: April 15, 2006 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love It!!!!!!!!! Update Really Soon!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Happy Easter!!!!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 14, 2006 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Happy Easter!!!, Hehe, now that that's outta de way. Thx for replying to my review! You might be right about the whole Sesshomaru's mother thing but you can never be to sure, :P I do belive I agree with your method thou, but there might be more people lke me who comment on it ^^' I dident do tha pick by the way, I havent even got my art on deviant art yet :P Another wonderful chapter, though a bit short ^^ bu that just means we get a speacial one for aster right? Right?!?! j/k Untill you next chapter! *Bows* XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 00:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Absolutely fucking interesting. I love it!
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Title: Lol/Grrrr.
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: April 13, 2006 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello. I read the newest chapter. Loved it. But woah... Well I guess I'd want to go home to. Hehehe. Your giving me ideas for my next couple chapters. Hehehe. By the way... What's Izayoi planning? I've got an ominous feeling about her. The sweet ones are always scary. I'm wondering what InuTaisho has to say about all this. Hehehe. Oh boy. Inuyasha gets to be the mommy. Wooohooo! Yes. Bet thats where Naraku will get mad. Hope to see more soon. Tryst.
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Title: Neat...
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 09, 2006 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I like this story, lol. Love the way you make Inu a smart ass, thou I did get comfused in the latest chapter with (what I guess is a name?) Yasha. I thought Inu had said it referring to himself but Izayoi asked for his name so, I thought that mabe she had said it but thats not her name @-@ very confusing. Anywho I thought sesshomaru's mothers name was Meinu, of course I got this from a pic of deviant, heres the link. http://www.deviantart.com/view/2149183/ Sorry this is so long, I really do like your fic, it just confused me some, please update again soon! ^^'
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Title: Cool. Two ch. at once.
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: April 07, 2006 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, you got two chapters up at once. Thats cool. But mm took down my challenge since it wasn't a fic. I'll repost to aff that challenge. Now as for the chapters... I considered what you wrote vital information. Something that granted insight into the minds of the others. What I really liked was the part about Inuyasha-hehehe. yasha means female demon?- ehhh. hehehe. Female dog demon. Hmmmm. :) That was an eye opener. So... who's getting pregnant? I hope Inu. The ones were Sessdoes... It seems wrong. Hehehe. It must be his height and age. Either that or I got way to much time on my hands. But why did Inuyasha attack Izayoi besides... Nevermind. I can see why. But he obviously is fond of his own mother. How does she feel about him? How was he brought to existance? Was Naraku always an evil creep or was he actually kind at one point in time? I'm kinda worried about Midoriko... How is she dealing with her son's disappearance? Or would she rather he was dead than Naraku's well... New Pet.? Hehehe. I think I better go read the others. Tryst/Punishment of the Inu.
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Reviewed By: inuyashas honey [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, so far I think your story is pretty kick ass. I have never read a story like this before, and never one where Inuyasha and Sesshomaru weren't brothers. I am quite eager to see where the story is going. I just have 1 complaint. The chapters are so short. I love that you update on a regular basis, I just wish the chapters covered more story. For instance the last chapter, 6, was more of a teaser than a development of the story. It didn't further the story at all. Nothing happened, all I got from that chapter is that Inuyasha is in Sesshomaru's prison. That was a great way to start the chapter, I just wish there was more to it. But overall I love your story and I know it will only keep getting better. I made sure to add it to my favorites so I don't miss a chapter.
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