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Title: Neat...
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 09, 2006 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I like this story, lol. Love the way you make Inu a smart ass, thou I did get comfused in the latest chapter with (what I guess is a name?) Yasha. I thought Inu had said it referring to himself but Izayoi asked for his name so, I thought that mabe she had said it but thats not her name @-@ very confusing. Anywho I thought sesshomaru's mothers name was Meinu, of course I got this from a pic of deviant, heres the link. http://www.deviantart.com/view/2149183/ Sorry this is so long, I really do like your fic, it just confused me some, please update again soon! ^^'
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Title: Cool. Two ch. at once.
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: April 07, 2006 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, you got two chapters up at once. Thats cool. But mm took down my challenge since it wasn't a fic. I'll repost to aff that challenge. Now as for the chapters... I considered what you wrote vital information. Something that granted insight into the minds of the others. What I really liked was the part about Inuyasha-hehehe. yasha means female demon?- ehhh. hehehe. Female dog demon. Hmmmm. :) That was an eye opener. So... who's getting pregnant? I hope Inu. The ones were Sessdoes... It seems wrong. Hehehe. It must be his height and age. Either that or I got way to much time on my hands. But why did Inuyasha attack Izayoi besides... Nevermind. I can see why. But he obviously is fond of his own mother. How does she feel about him? How was he brought to existance? Was Naraku always an evil creep or was he actually kind at one point in time? I'm kinda worried about Midoriko... How is she dealing with her son's disappearance? Or would she rather he was dead than Naraku's well... New Pet.? Hehehe. I think I better go read the others. Tryst/Punishment of the Inu.
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Reviewed By: inuyashas honey [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, so far I think your story is pretty kick ass. I have never read a story like this before, and never one where Inuyasha and Sesshomaru weren't brothers. I am quite eager to see where the story is going. I just have 1 complaint. The chapters are so short. I love that you update on a regular basis, I just wish the chapters covered more story. For instance the last chapter, 6, was more of a teaser than a development of the story. It didn't further the story at all. Nothing happened, all I got from that chapter is that Inuyasha is in Sesshomaru's prison. That was a great way to start the chapter, I just wish there was more to it. But overall I love your story and I know it will only keep getting better. I made sure to add it to my favorites so I don't miss a chapter.
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Title: Hehehe. Got the email!
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: April 04, 2006 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool. That was one of the better chapters. But, I somehow don't think Naraku is going to let him remain captive for long? I'm hoping you'll update again. Very soon. Wow. This chapter turned out to answer some of my questions. Hmmmm. So, since I really don't know much about to many other things... I'll tell you that I'll post my challenge here and I'm also getting ready to update FHI. Not yet. I'm sure you'll be looking. I'm struggling with a portion of the fic that seems to be constant. LOL. Tryst. Punishment of the Inu.
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Title: GREAT!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yea, quick update! I like those. Funny, never noticed till you put an AN in the last chapter that InuYasha is half-demon but not half dog-demon. Heh, somehow I missed that. Anyway, great chapter. Cant wait to see what happens when Fluffy decides to make an entrance to InuYasha's humble little abode that he supplied him with. Should be interesting. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (nsn) On: April 03, 2006 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really hooked on this story. The only thing is that you use (') instead of (") quotes when someone is talking. Other than that I really love this story. Everything has been so bland in the Inuyasha fanfiction world, and honestly you are one of the few authors who have breathed life into it once again. Quick question though, is Kagome going to be in this fic? Is there even going to be a love interest for him. When reading the summary I thought for sure Kagome was gonna show up soon. Anywho, keep up the great writing. Can't wait for more :)
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Title: YES!
Reviewed By: Tryst/ Punishment of the Inu On: April 02, 2006 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I know why you didn't answer my questions directly. Update soon... And please... Make it soon. I'm eager to see more. Thank you. Tryst.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Didn't turn out like you expected huh? Heh, well it worked pretty well for me. I was hoping you would update soon. And yea, it was meant as a compliment. You do have a style all your own. Still, it was an excellent chapter to a great story. Update when you can, soon hopefully.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Very well written. You have a style all your own and knack for story telling. Makes me wonder though, how two dark haired people can produce a silver haired, amber eyed, dog eared inu-hanyou. Interesting. I was wondering about the other pairings though, other than that of the parents. I know there suppose to be angst, but I figure there should be a ray of light here or there somewheres. Great chapter though, Update when you can,
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Title: AHHHHH! You...
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: March 28, 2006 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, that was done right good. Hehehe. Sesshomaru sure is arrogant. Inuyasha really seems to have fallen head over heels for the tai-youkai. Hmmm. Do you plan on having InuTaisho show up? And what's going to be Midoriko's fate? Izayoi? Well... I love where this is going. Keep it up. Tryst/Punishment of the Inu.
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Reviewed By: oooooooooh On: March 28, 2006 19:23 CST
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write more write more write more write more sooooon. :)
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Title: Gad zooks. You know who i am.
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm. Cliff hangers. Your rather fond of those aren't you? Ahhh. Well, I was hoping to see Sesshomaru this chapter. Hehehe. Thats okay. Anywho, I wanted you to know I'm now more curios than ever. Hehehe. Naraku after Inuyasha.... Oh boy. Is Midioriko going to get away? Or something? Even though I issued the challenge you've got me thinking.... Come back with an update soon.
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Reviewed By: This Is Inu4ever On: March 23, 2006 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is another one of your works that has captured my interest...what a pairing...Midiroko and Naraku...and them being Inuyasha's parents? Wow...How do you think these things up? (lol) No matter the reasons why...just makes for more...(how can I describe it?)...mind candy...(sorry..not as clear with my words tonight..went to the dentist earlier..must still be under the effects!) Anyway,keep up the good (twisted,angst-filled,shocking at times) work!
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Title: Excellent Start
Reviewed By: CraneCreator [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This seems like an excellnt start to a really interesting fic, I hope you contiue on with it. I'm interested to know how Inuyasha is Naraku's son maybe something to do with him being a mishmash? Whatever happens graeat start so far and I hope to read more. Thanks for the great work!!
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Title: One pleased Challenger
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: March 19, 2006 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Guess what? You surprised me. I really was not expecting Izayoi as Sess's mother. That was so cool. Keep up the good work. I'm hoping to read more updates for several of your fics. Thank you. Hmmmm. I'm hoping you'll let me know if you get stuck. Get over the writer's block soon. Those can be nasty. Let me know if I can help.
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