| "To Shed a Little Light" Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Title: CH 5
Reviewed By: Mrs_Sesshomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 16:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT! nuff said! Dying for the update!
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Title: YAHOO!
Reviewed By: SesshFanAlwayz On: April 16, 2006 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This fanfic is INCREDIBLE! So unique! ^_^ Can't wait til' you post next chapter! ^_^
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Title: WOO!
Reviewed By: obese_a_tron5000 *not logged in* On: April 16, 2006 20:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the story i check my mail for! i just love this story so much, i really like this new chapter! i hope you write again soon! i love it!
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 14:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv it!!!! keep up with the greatwork
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Title: Ch 3 and Ch 4
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 18:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch. 3: A little confusion about reading her biology or history textbook - "'I want to go home,' Kagome wailed silently to herself as she struggled to read her _biology_ text by the light of their reluctant campfire." And then "Raising her gaze over the edge of her _history_ text," and then "'He won't try anything with Shippo around,' she thought as she turned back to her _biology_ book" Ch 4: I love the titles Kagome gives her mom (ex: Washer of All Things Dirty, Unraveler of Tall Tales). And this part - "Charmed by the show of affection, Kagome giggled and nuzzled him back. He tensed and withdrew fractionally, but enough to drop kick her heart into the mud." - I get it now. Maybe I'm a little loopy, but I felt the shift in his mood in a tangible way. So! Where is Chapter 5? ^_^ Looking forward to it.
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Reviewed By: coldTenshieyes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 19:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, I hadn't known you had wrote more! Lol, great fanfiction, she should of looked at the kimono after her mother washed it! Lol, I love your fanfiction, Sesshy's funny lol! I like the little bribe Shippo had! I loooooooooooooooove your fanfiction, it's really great! Trust me! L8RZ! (^ O ^)/~
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Title: WOO!
Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 23:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 18:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this story i forgot to put it into my favorites so didn't know it waz updated
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 18:14 EDT
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uwah, this is such a good continuation. Cleverly done. I am eagerly awaiting the next update
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Title: As good as ever
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 14:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is still such a great story! I'm always so pleased so see your updates, they make my day. I can't help but think that you're headed towards a very interesting 'the truth comes out' chapter. Even if you don't, great story and I look forward to more as usual.
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Title: Rinseternalsoul
Reviewed By: Rinseternalsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 13:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really a fun and sexy little story. I like how you have tied it to actual events in the anime. It will be a mind blowing day for Kagome when she finally figures out who her mysterious lover is!
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: April 08, 2006 13:11 EDT
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Exciting, exciting... a good twist... I wonder where this is going, hm?
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 08:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, a new chapter and a good one too! I like how you are still keeping her in the dark about the id of her lover, yet dropping hints at the same time. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter. Keep up the good work! Bravo!
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Title: WOOT! #2
Reviewed By: Rinseternalsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 00:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, my ninny giggles have continued into this sequel. I have not found myself so tickled over a new fanfic in quite sometime. I do believe you have a winner here. It's always fun to have Sess and Kag sneak around, but even more so when she doesn't know it's him! I can hardly wait to read what you have planned next. Thanks for the laughs and the need for a cold shower! LOL!
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Title: To Shed A Little Light
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 23:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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